Angel, Succubus and Rise-chan's Wishes!; Chapter 07.

Cinia Pacifica · 2010-12-31T06:20:40-01:00

Its my third and new series, feedback are highly appreciated, that includes critics as well! I'll appreciate it if you PM me any or all the mistakes that you may find while reading the chapters, thank you~ Ladies and gentlemen, Rise-chan presents, Angel, Succubus and Rise-chan's Wishes!: Chapter 00 - Welcome to Japan, Rise-chan! Spoiler: [size=15]Angel, Succubus and Rise-chan's Wishes[/h] It was July 3rd, 2013, Chittagong, Bangladesh, Reazul was caught, watching hentai on a PC and was kicked out of the house. Reazul lost his will to live and walks in Nasirabad's street at 8:00 pm. Reazul faints on the streets after a strange light hits him. *** Reazul awoke in a different dimension where everything was blue. A woman with white wings comes to him, "My name is TwilightEngel, an angel.". "Only the chosen ones come here, they unknowingly summon me and have their wishes granted" TwilightEngel explains. "Okay! I wanna die!" Reazul wishes. "FUCK NO, I won't grant the wishes you speak out!" TwilightEngel shrugged. TwilightEngel gently puts her head on Reazul's chest and closes her eyes. "What are you doing? Get off!" Reazul blushes. "Your heart is that of a girl right?" says Twilight. " ....?" "You wished for freedom from your family, after you gained it, you're still lonely, I shall grant your true wishes!.... My Lord, I pray to you, please grant Reazul salvation and release him from this land" TwilightEngel chants. A gate appears and opens beneath Reazul – he falls. *** Reazul finds himself in an unfamiliar land. TwilightEngel speaks within his mind "Your wishes were granted, you are in Tokyo... your body and soul shall transfigure to that of a 15 year old girl and gain heavenly powers, its a present for going through this, your original age is 18 correct... Rise-chan?". "How did you learn about my FAKKU username?" Reazul asks. "I saw it in your heart." Twilight answers. "Well, I can start my life over now ... so, thank you!" Reazul thanks TwilightEngel. Light envelopes his body, after it dissipates, he looks at windows nearby and realizes she became a girl, "beautiful brown and long hair, beautiful white skin and blue eyes. I look like Rise, ...well, from now on, my name shall be 'Rise'!" she announces. Its 4:30 am, Rise has nowhere to go and decides to wonder the streets. *** August 3rd, Rise continues wondering. Miraculously, she was fine even though she didn't eat or sleep. She learned Japanese by taking Japanese classes in Bangladesh but never spoke a word. *** Later, she met a beautiful girl about her age with blue long hair, dark brown eyes - she had bangs across her face. "What are you doing here late at night?" the girl asks. "I'm getting an eerie feeling from you, who are you?" Rise asks back. "So you feel my powers? My soul is not that of human's, to tell the truth, I'm a succubus named is Nanako Moki" Moki answers. "But you seem human." Rise replies. "I was sealed by a priest years ago. Later, I broke it and found this world changed. It’s been 16 years since, I then entered the body of a pregnant woman's baby who died on her womb due to receiving damages in a small accident. I brought it back to life and used my powers to make it look like myself, thus becoming my own. Later, she gave birth to me." Moki, explained. "You wanted to be human!?" Rise asks curiously. "I got bored watching the humans as a spirit, so I decided to join them, I felt your presence and came to check out." Moki answers. "You should have a family too!" suggests Moki. "But..." Rise hesitates. "I'll help you" Moki, suddenly moves behind Rise and touches both her shoulders. Rise collapses. *** Rise was later found lying on street by a married couple, both aged around 30s. She hides the truth and says she's an orphan. They adopt her and she inherits the surname 'Kujikawa'. Rise's new life starts at Hirai high school on September. One day, She meets a 15 year old boy named Mibuchiha Aki in a cafe after school, he has black hair and eyes. He was a classmate, who followed her because he was interested in her and decided to talk to her. As he started a conversation, Rise wanted to shake him off, "You heard about the Virgins Unite, Virgin's Club, VUVC for short? Let's join it, its meant for us virgins to unite." Aki says while sipping on his tea. Rise blurts out coffee while sipping her coffee, "Virgin's club? What?! So everyone looses their virginity at this age here!? You join to show that you're still a virgin?". Aki replies, "Calm down, I said its meant for us to unite.". Rise decides to join VUVC with Aki. She felt something from its president, Nakahara Zeph, a 16 year old girl with dark brown hair. She had brown eyes a round face. She had Rise stay after school. "You do know why you're staying late right?" Zeph asks. "Who are you? I sense something... from you." Rise asks. "I am a fallen angel... who got banished for helping a sinful human... although, I'm happy now! I felt your presence for some time but was too busy to check, since you are here, tell me how you got your powers?" Zeph says sadly. Rise explained everything. "I see. So that's why ..." Zeph replies. "How do you have a family?" Rise, also curious. "I did the same thing the Succubus did, I wondered with loneliness for years so I joined the humans when I got the chance." Zeph answered. They then decide to go home. *** Its almost Christmas holiday. Zeph asks, "I heard he called you out on a date at Christmas Eve.". Rise nods slowly with a blushing face. "You truly became a girl huh." Zeph smirks. "I couldn't say no... to his innocent face." "Well, good luck!." Zeph wishes her. *** Its Christmas Eve, the boy takes Rise to many places. Later in the park, "I love you with all my heart, please, become my girlfriend, Kujikawa-san." the boy confesses. "O-Okay..." Rise says while looking elsewhere. "Look at me!" he says. She looks away after glancing at him. "If you don't look then I'll kiss you." He threatened. When she looks at him, he suddenly kisses her. Rise complains, "Shirou!! Why did you do that, Baka!!" Chapter 01 - The Transfiguration! Spoiler: In Japan, she was walking down the cold street on a certain area and came across an entity not known to many. It was a black figure who said to her, "What business do you have on my territory? Young girl, if you don't want me to take over your body, LEAVE!!" "So you're a demon who takes over bodies of others or possesses them? Then I guess you have to disappear then. Prepare to die you ugly piece of black slimy!" the girl says with a smiling face and then suddenly makes a scary face and continues "You've been disturbing many people when they walk this street haven't you? You may have a human figure and everything but you're still a novice ranked demon so go away." "HAH! Big talk lady but can you back it up, you're just a sorceress aren't you? You're no match for a devil like me." the devil replies. "Hmph." A sound of flesh getting pierced occurs as she swoops her hand inside of the devil's belly. "AAHHHHHH"! What the heck are you? A Spiritual Warrior?...... What is this... my body.. nooooo..." he says as his body slowly disperses. "This street should be safe from now on both day and night." the girl relaxes. *** On Bangladesh, July 3rd 2013, Reazul was watching Hentai videos on his computer with a big headphone on his ears so that no one will hear the sounds of the Hentai anime known as 'Yokorenbo Immoral Mother' and he likes to use his headphones - he likes to hear all the moaning, wet noises and everything else on his ears directly. His friend suddenly calls on his cheap and old cell phone and he receives it, "Hey! Why did you call now of all times? Moron, I'm having my mind refreshed with some delicious goodies, so I'm hanging up!". "Wait a second, download some porn then load your pen drive with them and give them to me would ya , I want some newer materials and don't give me any hentai, now don't tell me to download on my own because there's no way I can download unique porn the way you do" his friend speaks speedily. "Yeah right, like I'm your slave, FAKKU!!... Oh you don't understand Japanese I forgot... FUCK OFF!!" Reazul speaks angrily at him. "Hmmm... maybe I was being too mean on him, jeez, why does someone call whenever I'm watching a hentai anime... " Reazul sighs after saying it to himself. He then sends his friend a text message in which he apologized to him and said that he'll download some porn for both of them. He then wears the headphones and resumes the paused hentai anime video and starts fapping to it. Reazul suddenly stops fapping instantly due to the sound of his room's door opening. "Reazul, whose phone call was that?" his mother asks. "Why the hell do you have to ask about EVERY SINGLE THING regarding me?" Reazul, annoyed by constant disturbance while watching his hentai anime. Then he realizes that a really dangerous person is standing beside him, his mother is standing beside him and she is looking at what's on the monitor screen of his computer. "YO-YOU got it all WRONG! I-Its not what you think!" Reazul, disparately tries to save himself. "REAZUL!! WHAT ARE THESE DISGUSTING AND INDECENT THINGS YOU ARE WATCHING!!" "I-ITS not disgusting or indecent! Its beautiful.. I-I mean... ahh, well... err... " Reazul is completely at a loss for words. After a lot of yelling and scoldings Reazul's Mother had him get out of the house and was told never to return again. *** Reazul had nowhere to go, he walked on the cold street outside the gigantic building that had contained his considered home in the form of an apartment just a few moments ago - walking on Nasirabad where there were very few amount of people, he was homeless - it was 8:00 at that time. It had been a few minutes as he walked on the cold and dark streets to the point where he came to the part of the streets where no one was around. A while later, the street ended there, he reached a dead end. There was nothing but a huge wall full of posters. Suddenly out of the blue, he looks up above him and sees a giant ball of light coming down from the above and it hits him out of the blue. *** After a while, Reazul wakes up, to his surprise, on another dimension, a kind of place he had never been to and nor has he seen a place like it in his entire life, it was all blue, wherever he looked, he saw nothing but blue. As he looked deeply into the blue, it seemed more like blue stain glasses or some similar to him. Then a woman with white wings, blond hair and white eyes, slowly comes to him from the above. Her body was glowing was glowing with faint light. "I am TwilightEngel, an Angel, you may address me as Twilight. Only the chosen ones come here, the ones whose heart gets filled with darkness and despair, unknowingly summons me and then I grant their wishes" Twilight explains. "Okay then, hear my wish!.... I wanna die!" Reazul wishes with a smiling face. "FUCK NO, I won't grant the wishes you speak out!" TwilightEngel shrugged and then continued "I'll only grant your true wishes, ones that doesn't come from your foul mind but your heart". TwilightEngel gently putted her head on Reazul's chest and closes her eyes. "What are you doing? Get off of me this instant!" Reazul blushes. "Your heart is that of a girl right? A somewhat angry and yet sweet and innocent girl" says Twilight as she does not even budge from Reazul, trying to get her off. ".... Is this how it feels to touch a girl's shoulders... ?" Reazul thinks to himself. "I guess it is, I believe its your first time touching a girl other than your female family members." Twilight answers the question that rose within his thoughts. " ....W-What...? How do you...?" "You wished for freedom from your family, after fate granted it, you're lonelier than ever, I shall grant your true wishes now.... !" she says that and continues and starts chanting, "My Lord, I pray to you now, please grant Reazul peace and salvation, untie him from all his pain and sufferings, renew his soul and body and release him from the chains that binds him to this land". "Hey! What are you doing? Twil--" Reazul gets interrupted as he tries to ask Twilight a question. A path through which light shined out appeared and opened beneath Reazul – he fell. *** Reazul finds himself in an unfamiliar land. A different city which is much more developed then the one he was in, the sky was dark there too, there were street lights within his view and it was very quite and no one was around. TwilightEngel suddenly spoke within his mind "Your wishes were granted, you are in Tokyo, Japan... your body and soul shall transfigure to that of a 15 year old girl and you will also be given heavenly powers, it is a present for going through this all of this, your original age would be 18 correct... Rise-chan?". "How did you learn about my FAKKU username?" Reazul asks. "I saw it in your heart. Its a place full of warm hearted people isn't it?" Twilight answers and asks. "Yes it is a great place... well... err... a website full of warm hearted people. Well, now that all of this has happened, maybe I can start my life over now... and that is all thanks to you... so, thank you" Reazul thanks TwilightEngel. Light envelopes his body - he feels something really weird, he feels as if his body was being torn off and then got replaced by something but he felt no pain whatsoever. After it dissipates, he goes to the street lights close-by then looks at a window of a shop shining on the light and realizes she became a girl when she saw her face reflected there, "Beautiful brown and long hair, beautiful and unblemished white skin and lastly, bright blue eyes. W-What is this? I look so much like Rise, except that this is in real life. Ahh... even my voice is almost like Rise's. Is this what I always wished for? Twilight saw it that I wished for this.... and I didn't even knew that this was in my heart... well, I think I know my new name now, from now on, my name shall be 'Rise'!" she announces to herself. Its 4:30 am, almost time for daybreak, Rise has nowhere to go which is why she decides to wonder the streets and learn more about the unfamiliar land. Then, a gigantic ball of light comes from above and hits Rise again. *** Meanwhile, on another area on Tokyo, a beautiful girl whose age is similar to Rise's age walks on the street. Then she enters a park. And encounters a figure shrouded in darkness, "Huh? Who are you, what do you want? .... Wait a second you are--" "I don't have the time for small chitchats, since its almost daybreak, I need to get back to sleep and then get up for school too!" the girl replies, complaining. The figure reveals its true form, when all the black haze around him dissipates. His body is round and has different faces all over it, his voices is a mixture of many different voices, "Wha-What? You come here on your own into a demon's, no, MY territory and complain about SCHOOL? You're dead!". Launching a beam of demonic energy from on of its eyes, the demon attacks. And just before it hits the girl she swiftly evades it. Suddenly reappearing before the demon's face she grabs hold of his head and presses it tightly. "I g-give in! L-Let me go, I'm sorry, I won't talk to you like that ever again!!" the demon already begs. "Hah! So you feel my enormous powers after I touch you? Or is it that you're simply a coward? Hmph! Too late!" she says as she tightens her grip on his head even more. "What is this? My powers, its going away... " the demon's body rots and fades away. "Hmph! Its all your fault, you appear on this area before daybreak so its a real pain coming here", says the girl. "But anyways, I need more demonic powers... this is certainly not enough power... in fact its really small. I guess I need to hunt moar for demons and devils", again says the girl. *** Its 7:00am on the clock, a beautiful lady sits down on a chair on her luxurious room and orders her butler, "Bring me this Visual Novel right now!" she hands her butler a piece of paper in which information regarding its name and the location at which it is sold were written. "Right away Ojou-sama!" he leaves and heads out to buy the Visual Novel. "Okay, so I should be buying this Visual Novel now is it? Ojou-sama is such an otaku... well, nothing I can do rather than do what I'm told to do" the butler says as he sighs. *** When the butler comes inside of the designated shop, he overhears another customer's voice, "Its about time this Visual Novel came out and now its the only one left... so in other words, ITS MINE!!" But then just as he was about to get his hands on the Visual Novel.... it was gone... "WH-WHAT happened, where did 'Star Maids Chronicles' disappear to?" the boy asks to himself. Then a salesgirl answers his question, "I'm extremely sorry sir but the last of the 'Star Maids Chronicles' is already taken... would you like to buy something else?" Then he turns around to see a butler purchasing it on the counter, "NOOOOO!!". "I'm terribly sorry, but my Ojou-sama also wishes to have it under her possession, so I couldn't help but snatch it away from you. Maybe it would've been better if you'd refrain from talking to yourself before you tried to take it." the butler speaks in a very well-mannered tone. "Why you! I'll get you for this one day! The boy angrily walks out of the store. "Oh my, he seemed to be a composed and well-reserved young man judging from reading his mind a little bit but he acted so strangely just because of this? Humans are truly weird and absurd sometimes." the butler thinks to himself. Chapter 02 - Training? Spoiler: "Ojou-sama, I'm back with your requested Visual Novel. The butler hands the Visual Novel to his Ojou-sama. "Good now leave. I don't want to be disturbed by your presence any longer!" the butler's mistress orders. "As you wish Ojou-sama" the butler leaves the room. "Hmph, she can no longer be disturbed by me? Then who was it that bound me to a contract to be her slave? She acts so randomly. Jeez...", the butler says while walking away on the corridor right outside the room. *** Rise wakes up on another dimension once again. This time around, the dimension is completely white. "Where am I?" "You are in the space that I've temporarily created". Rise looks behind her and finds a woman aged around 30s. "Who are you?" "I am a 3566 year old spirit" she replied. "That's NOT enough of a description for introducing oneself, why am I brought here?" "I see that you cut to the chase quickly. I have been assigned to train you by a great spirit. And before you ask, I am NOT allowed to tell her name to you". "Just great... wait train me?" Rise, confused. "Yes, my Lady wants you to be prepared to battle anything and everything" she answered. "So how will you be training me and for how long exactly?" "Hmmm let's see now, two months? Although there are differences on the time-line between this dimension and your world. I think it will take about one month on your world if time passes amounting up to two months here". "Well then shall we begin?" she asked. "Before that, why don't you tell me your name at least". "My name is Vesparia any more questions, Rise?" Vesparia asks. "One more thing. Will there be anything special that I'll learn to do after this training or will it just be body building? If it is then I have NO interest whatsoever!" Rise asks while looking else where. "You'll be able to jump so high that your fear of heights will give you a heart attack" Vesparia answers with a smile. "I-I'm not scared of heights, no definitely not. I'm gonna prove it to you in here. Now c'mon, train me as you said you will!" Rise gets pumped up. *** The beautiful girl walks down the street again at dusk. "Spirits move around freely at this point of time, in other words, the best time to hunt evil spirits" "Well what do we have here? Another evil spirit who'll be killed soon" she says after giggling. She then continues, "AHAHAHA, PREPARE TO DIE!!". Stabbing the evil spirit to his chest with a knife she grabbed from her right pocket on her skirt, she kills him. "This definitely is not enough power indeed, well off to my next prey I guess... hmmm but it seems that the male evil spirits and devils are slowly decreasing away, is it because of me or that witch? I wonder... should I resort to killing live humans so that they will become evil spirits somehow? Nah I shouldn't be too desperate. Aww just great, speak of the devil she's coming!" the beautiful girl says as someone comes. Another girl then enters the scene, "I see, just by looking at you, I understand you why'd accumulate such powers, Succubus!" "So what if I'm gathering powers, your targets are minimizing right?" "You're far too dangerous for the humans and every other good souls on this city!" "Oh please, stop the melodrama already, you have no idea what my desire is do you, you fallen angel! You probably helped a sinful person or something like that and was punished, you talk about me being a danger? Hmph," the Succubus replied. "Why you!" the Fallen Angel draws a katana, glowing with powerful pink aura. "Oh my, I'm sooo scared, ehehehe... c'mon, bring it on!" says the Succubus, smiling with excitement. The Fallen Angel dashes and moves close to Succubus really fast and relentlessly attacks, slashing with her katana but the Succubus survives due to successive doges to her attacks. Then she again dashes towards Succubus and her blade clashes with the knife she draws from her right pocket. "Gotcha!" says the Fallen Angel. "Do you seriously think that its THAT easy?!" blue aura shrouds Succubus's body and she then pushes her away with her strength. The Fallen Angel's katana glows more after she's pushed back and wings her katana towards Succubus, "Chains of blinding light!" The Falllen Angel stabs the sword on the ground and five purple chains glowing with light comes out of the ground and speedily catches the Succubus. "HAAAAAA" the Succubus focuses her powers and manages to move the chains away from her body for a moment and frees herself. "You're lucky that I don't have a magical blade right now, the one I had was sealed off long ago and the seal is practically unbreakable for now, well anyways, I think I should take my leave now... " the Succubus disappears in a thin air after she says it. "Hey wait you!! Ah crap she fled.... she's strong.... but why was she hesitating to use her powers? I mean, that's enough to call summon powerful demons from the house of Hades right? Well I have to stop her from whatever she's up to that's for sure" speaks to herself, the Fallen Angel. *** Meanwhile, "Ojou-sama! Did you call for me? How may I help you?", asks the butler. "Hishedori, I'm thinking of doing a ritual I found on this book, in order to strengthen you", replies the butler's mistress. "Strengthen me, why? Aren't I strong enough as I am?" the butler making a sad-looking expression. "You're strong I know, but there are others who are getting stronger now it seems, this will a precautionary measure to ensure that you stay as the most powerful Spiritual Warrior in the city" his Mistress said with a stubborn looking face. "Very well then, Ojou-sama but what kind of ritual are you planning to perform and when?", asks the butler. "It is called the 'Marcroves Dale's ritual'. I'm doing it this evening, there's a dance party held tonight in here, don't you know? Or did you forgot?", his mistress asks. "No, I remember it well. The 'Marcroves Dale's ritual' huh? Sounds like a spell that take powers from soul around a wide ranged area. Anyway, but why do it at the time of the party?" his butler asked while he put his fingers on his chin, so as to show how much he is thinking about it. "Because I don't want my parents to see me do it of course! They are like 'Ohhh our daughter is able to perform 'magic' whenever they witness me doing it, I'M SICK OF IT ALL!!" she yells. "Oh c'mon Ojou-sama, if you can't handle praises then you won't be considered a normal person to begin with", the butler tries to rebuke her. "Well, anyways, I suggest we have the ritual at midnight after the party, oh and I know that your main objective for trying to avoid the dance party is so that everyone doesn't see how your dance really is right? Well don't worry, help is on the way, I've called Maria-san, she chuckled a little when I explained the situation but agreed to help you learn how to dance properly" says the butler. "WHAT? Why Maria, are you crazy or what? You know how humiliating that is right? Anyone in here does!" she practically yells at her butler. "I know that but its a sacrifice worth it, is it not? I mean she dances so gracefully and marvelously and your dance is so very splendid but very awful at the same time that people will leave the world for laughter as soon as they see you dance Ojou-sama and besides, I've already explained everything to her, so there's no point in trying to avoid it now,". "Grrrrrrr.... WHY YOU... !!". "Even if you bark at me Ojou-sama, the truth is unavoidable, just imagine everyone laughing at you for your dancing," her butler with a somewhat sullen face tortures her to the limits and then continues, "Also, Maria-san will be a good person to have while performing the ritual, if the ritual fails, her 're-cast' spell can still give chances of the ritual to succeed". "You should be grateful that I took such a precautionary measure to ensure your pride does not get slaughtered tonight and so that your ritual stands a chance, that one is unintentional though... " her butler said with a smile and a somewhat composed manner. "F-Fine... you win Hishedori... ". Chapter 3 - Marcroves Dale's Ritual and the Dance Party. Spoiler: Sun set hours ago, it is now night, 9:00 PM. The dance party has already begun, guests who are mostly British had arived. "So the time has finally come huh?" says the Hishedori and continues, "Show everyone in here today what you have learned from Maria-san, Ojou-sama". "Shut up! I know that already, you don't have to tell me that", says his mistress, with an angry expression. "Mai!", says Maria, running towards while calling her. "Maria? What now?", says the mistress, "Good luck! This is what you worked so hard for!", says Maria. Lowering her head, "Thanks..... I guess, anyway, I'll go now", says the butler's mistress and walks off towards where other were dancing in pairs. "Mai, may I please dance with you?", says a boy to whom she walked towards. "Yes", says the mistress. "Shimokawa Mai, my mistress, doesn't seem to have that angry and selfish attitude while speaking to that British boy named Neville Alistair, rather, she seems lifeless, as if she's bound by chains and goes along with everything regarding him, she draws upon a different facade while speaking to him and anything regarding him", says the butler to Maria. "Well, yes of course, She is his fiance right?", says Maria. "What? I never knew that!", Hishedori, shocked by what he heard. "You do not know? Well, its only obvious since this was decided when she was young, her father is a Japanese, but lived in England when he was young and unmarried, he married his wife in there, an English woman and came to live in Japan with her, there are lots of his wife's relatives in here on Japan from England, and she wants her daughter, to be married to an English Man, not a Japanese", explains Maria. "I see, she never told me anything regarding that and nor have I heard of this before", says Hishedori. "Well, anyway, lets see how much her taking dance lessons from me pays off",says Maria, putting her index finger on her lips. Mai and Alistair, starts to dance, after a few moments "Oh my, its seems that mistress did improve, I don't think people will leave this world for laughter anymore", Hishedori says, making a smile. "Well, that's good to see!", says Maria, very happy for Mai. A man announces, "Ladies an gentlemen! Today, on this stage I am standing upon, my daughter, Mai, will play a piece with her violin now! Please give a hand for her!!". Everyone gives a big round of applause, "Her father sure is mean isn't he? I'm sure that Ojou-sama is feeling very angry at him now", says Hishedori. "I think she is about to explode now.... her father is too proud of her daughter that he wants to show it off... and Mai definitely doesn't like that", faintly smiling with sweat rolling down, Maria says it, her expression clearing shows how much she is worried for Mai. "Does she know how to play the violin properly? She is clumsy and a total klutz, does she know how to play it well?" asks Hishedori to Maria. "Actually.... I doubt it... and that's what I'm worrying about..." answers Maria. Mai starts plays the piece with her violin, 'Ave Maria'. "The sound is gentle and warm.... and sublime...", Maria whispers to herself about it. "I never thought that Ojou-sama would be this good at playing the violin, considering how bad she was at dancing, I thought that she'd be bad on this as well.... but I was wrong it seems, well, they say, 'all's well that ends well' right?", Hishedori says. "Yes, so true, even I didn't knew, anyway, Mai mentioned having a ritual for your enhancement, mind giving me more details about it Hishedori-san?", asks Maria, with a serious look. The violin playing ends, every gives a big round of applause once again. *** Its midnight, they prepare for the ritual, on an underground floor, in a room, with pentagram covered with a circle on the floor. They prepare for the ritual. Maria comes to the room, "Even though I highly doubt it, just in case we have an annoyance showing up out of nowhere, I've brought my Spiritual Warrior, the one I've made a contract with, you guys haven't met him before have you? His name is Raiga. Raiga meet Shimokawa Mai, my friend who is a sorceress and her butler, Hishedori who is also a Spiritual Warrior like you, he made a contract with Mai", Maria, introduces Raiga to everyone and Raiga stands beside her while she speaks. Wearing a white shirt and blue jeans - he has light-purple hair-ish hair. He stands firm. "Hello there Raiga, it is a pleasure to make an acquaintance with you, are you working as her butler? Umm... Ojou-sama... ", Hishedori tries to remind his mistress of her manners after he asks Raiga a question. "Oh uh yeah, its nice to meet you Raiga, anyway let's get this started shall we?", says Mai. "Whatever you say Ojou-sama", says Hishedori after standing before the pentagram. "I call upon thou, Marcrove Dale, one of the lords of darkness who grants ye demonic powers..." Please grant great powers to my Spiritual Warrior to make him stronger... "By consuming the powers of the weak demons that lives close-by..."[i] The pentagram glows with a red faint light, then a red beam of light hits Hishedori, granting him more power. "Its successful?", tries to confirm Maria. "Yes it seems that it is a success", says Raiga. *** Meanwhile on the white dimension, "You should know that I'll take you to another world as well, for your training, Rise", says Vesparia. "Really? Another world....... is there even another world where one can breathe?" asks Rise. "Yes my dear there is, this one is a parallel world above your world", answers Vesparia. "Okay then, when will we go there?", asks Rise. "In about 48 hours? We'll do some more training then I have to cast a spell on you, since a mere human like you can't enter that realm in your current state, its meant for Spiritual Warriors, Angels, spirits and the like, no human with weak powers can prevail in there.... ", answers Vesparia. "I see...... but wait.... I am weak?!", replies Rise. "Yes that's right... that's why you're training in here", answers Vesparia. Chapter 4 – The Celestial World. Spoiler: “You are weak because you cannot control the powers you were given and you don’t have the skills and abilities to fight yet”, explains Vesparia. “Well…. You’re right over there…. I have no idea as to what or how I can use the powers bestowed upon me… “, replies Rise. “But what will I do on this other world?”, asks Rise, curious. “Show lots of things to you, train you seriously under a different environment and then bring back some books along with us”, answers Vesparia. “Books?”, asks Rise. “Well, they are books containing various spells or techniques, they can come in handy for you to learn some nice tricks”, answers Vesparia. “Well, anyway, I need to cast a spell on you so that you can go to that world, but first, I have lots of chanting to do for it, so excuse me for a while, just do some exercises or something while I do it”, says Vesparia, while walking off on another direction. Rise replies with a lazily, “Fine…. ”. *** On the basement on the mansion of the Shimokawas, on the room where the ritual was held underground, Maria says, “Is the ritual really successful? It ended all too quickly… “. “According to the book, that was it”, answers Mai. “Ojou-sama, may I ask you to please bring that book here? I doubt that that was the Marcroves Dales ritual”, says her butler Hishedori. “What? What do you mean Hishedori?”, replies Mai, asking back at him. The pentagram then glows, black hands, materializes from the middle of it and tries to attack Mai. Just before they hit her, Hishedori carries her and moves her away from them, then, a blade materializes on his right hand and Hishedori cuts all the blacks hands on one sweep. “Ojou-sama, please go and bring that book from which you learned of this spell, Maria-san, please accompany her”, says Hishedori, with a serious expression, they then go running without uttering a single word. Raiga then says, “I call upon thee, my blades of annihilation!”, green glowing blades made out of pure magical powers appear beside him for a moment and then, when he waves his hands towards the pentagram, all blades, circles the pentagram and then falls and stabs the floor – the pentagram stops glowing and the black hands dissipates. “Impressive, you’ve completely severed the connection she made with the dark lord, Marcroves Dales, thus, stopping the failed ritual from functioning”, says Hishedori. “That was the most appropriate action to take and so I did, hopefully your Ojou-sama will do it right next time”, says Raiga, he has a light voice. A few minutes later, Mai and Maria comes inside the room, along with the book. “”Here it is Hishedori, the book”, says Mai after she hands it over to Hishedori. The book glows after Hishedori mumbles something after taking it, “Now Ojou-sama, take a look at that page on where you found this ritual on the book”. After a taking a glance on the page, Mai gets shocked, “What the… its nothing like it was when I was reading it, even the magic circle is different, Hishedori, redraw the circle according to the book”, Mai shows the circle to him. “That’s because someone casted a illusionary spell to hide the book’s true contents, and filled it with junk, which only the beginners reads, it must have been done by your father so that you don’t cast something dangerous accidentally, dark magics are dangerous after all, one mistake, and it fails, bringing about a catastrophy, plus, you’re talented, so your father was probably encouraged to do it, since you’ll always try using more powerful and risky spells and rituals”, explains Hishedori while completing the circle with a chalk. “Tch, yeah right! Like I’m someone who makes an accident, that bastard sure has some guts…. I mean…. I thought that I was reading all the advanced spells and magics all this time but now they turn out to be beginners things…? Everything in there seemed like easy and childish magic… no wonder… ”, says Mai, extremely angry and disappointed. “It is weird that even the name, Marcorves Dales, was in there, perhaps the spell was not put properly, anyway, do you wish to hold the true Marcroves Dales ritual now Ojou-sama?”, asks Hishedori. “Of course I do! Or I wouldn’t have asked you to complete the circle!”, Mai answers back angrily. “I see that you’ve terminated the spell Raiga, good job”, Maria praises. “Anyway, what about the ritual that was held before this? What actually happened in there? Why did those hands come out? If that book was filled with beginners spells and instructions, then why did all that happen?”, asks Raiga. “As I said, the illusionary spell was not perfect, so the name Marcroves Dales remained, Ojou-sama mentioned Marcroves Dale while chanting on the ritual that’s why it was ruined to what you’ve witnessed, Marcroves Dales is a little angry-ish evil God, you take his name on a ritual where his name is not meant to be taken, and you get attacked by random things such as those black hands and before you ask, let me tell you that the effects you saw before the black hands came, the red light engulfing me, making it seem like I received powers actually did not gave me any power but light pain instead, but of course, it barely did any damage on me”, explains Hishedori. “Anyway, lets get the real ritual underway shall we?”, says Mai. Mai then starts chanting while looking at the book. *** Meanwhile, on another area, on the city, beside a house, a mysterious can speaks, “Master, we’ve located Succubus, we’re right beside her houses, what shall we do now?”. A red orb of light, shrouded with black and violet mist beside him speaks through telepathy, “Observe her for now, I’ll tell you what to do when the time comes, for now, keep an eye on her and make the others do preparations on the materialization of the Tower of Resurrection, don’t let her sense your presence, use that spell at all times to conceal your presence”. *** 48 hours passes, in other words, two days. “All preparations are done”, says Vesparia as she places her right hand on Rise’s head and then Rise’s body shines with light for a second. “Okay, we shall now move to the other world, are you ready?”, asks Vesparia. “I’m ready but a little nervous…. “, answers Rise. Wrapping her right hand around Rise’s belly, Vesparia jumps, to the top of the dimension where they enter a portal that was set open above. “There, that is the gate I created above, it is the portal to the other world, known as, the Celestial World”. On her sight, was a cathedral, large and white. Rise was in awe of the sight, behind her were beautiful gardens full of white flowers. They walk towards the white large doors of the cathedral. After entering, they find no one inside. It was empty, everything was white on the inside, “Its seems that we came just in time, no one is here, wait here, I’ll be right back”, says Vesparia and walks off. She then comes back after a few minutes, “I got the books, in other words time for training, lets go outside now”, says Vesparia. After they come outside, Vesparia takes Rise to a field, the lush green grasses waved repeatedly as the pleasant breeze blew. “Now we’ll begin real training, first, allow me to explain a few things about everything”, says Vesparia. “Okay… but, why was the cathedral empty? I was expecting someone to be there”, asks Rise. “That’s the hour when everyone is just really busy, the priestess is attending to my Lady right now probably”, answers Vesparia. “The Lady? The one who sent you to me?”, replies Rise. “Yes, but I’m still not allowed to give any more details about her, we shall begin now”, says Vesparia and continues “Let me tell you, that I am aiming at making you a spiritual warrior”. “A spiritual warrior?”, asks Rise, totally confused. “Yes, they are those who wield extreme magical powers and strength, they are either half human or not human at all”, explains Vesparia. “Wait not human? Then, you said that you aim to make me a spiritual warrior…. Them you intend to make me something else other than human… ?”, asks Rise, fear grows on her rapidly. “There’s nothing to fear, my intention is to have you become half human and half angel, is that acceptable?”, asks Vesparia. “Half human…. and half angel?”, asks back Rise. “Yes that’s right, you’ll have wings, heavenly powers and strength of an angel, your body will stay beautiful unlike the minor skin problems humans face sometimes, such as pimples and wrinkles and all that, although, your wings won’t be around all the time if you don’t want it to, you can simply materialize them when needed. There won’t be any mental changes when you become half angel”, Vesparia explains further. “The wings sounds handy…. but… I dunno, this doesn’t feel right to do… “, says Rise, feeling hesitant. “I’ll let you take your time and think about it after I’m done telling you everything, although I expected you to agree to become half angel, guess I was mistaken… anyway, continuing on, humans can only become a spiritual warrior only when they become half human, for example, what I just said, half human and half angel, is a key to becoming a spiritual warrior, another example is, half demon or half half snake, half dragon, half fish and so on or if they transform into full demons or angels from being human, then they can also be called spiritual warriors“, further explain Vesparia and then continues, “Humans can also become sorcerers, sorcerers are those who wields magical powers, cast spells etc. Spiritual warriors can also do those things but not all of them, only some of them specializes on magic and some can do a few magic but are no experts on that field”. “What about you? Are you an angel? Are you a spiritual warrior?”, asks Rise. “Yes I am, I’m a fully fledged angel, although I was no human in the past, I was an angel from the very start who decided to become a spiritual warrior out of my own volition, anyway, I think I’ve explained enough now, you may take your time to think about whether you want to be a spiritual warrior or not now, also, remember that you’ll have to make a contract with my Lady to become a spiritual warrior”, says Vesparia. “What? A contract?”, asks Rise, surprised to hear it. “Yes that’s right, you can’t become a spiritual warrior without a being of higher level granting you with the power of a spiritual warrior and transforming you into one”, answers Vesparia and then continues, “Anyway, feel free to roam around this area, there shouldn’t be problem from doing that, I’ll take a nap, its been long since I haven’t slept”, she says as she walks off. “Wait Ves—“, Vesparia suddenly vanishes when Rise tries to talk to her, “What speed, she disappeared just like that… “. She then starts walking randomly on the garden, looking at the beautiful white flowers, the stutteringly flying butterflies and the white birds flying on the very blue and clear sky. Walking out of the garden she continues to roam, “Should I become a spiritual warrior? Should I? I’ll have wings…. I’ll be able to fly… but is it alright to be half human? It sounds wrong for some reason. But then again…. becoming an angel… sounds like a nice idea, maybe I’ll deliver justice to the wrong one? Hmmm…. What are the purposes of the spiritual warriors anyway?”, Rise, thinks to herself. Then suddenly, she finds a playground, whereas a lady with a familiar face was sitting on the swings and was looking at the sky. “You are…. “, Rise, surprised after looking at the face in front of her. “So we meet again huh? Reazul”, says the person on the swings. “Twilight? What are you doing here?”, says Rise, unable to believe that she is seeing her. “I am an angel, this is one of my homes~”, replies Twilight, smiling and then continues, “So, who brought you here? Wanna tell me how you came to this holy and sacred land? . Her body, not glowing as was seen the last time. “Its no longer †˜Reazul’, its †˜Rise’ now, the reason why I was brought to this land, was for me to become a spiritual warrior, although I’m not sure whether I really want to become one or not… “, answers Rise. Chapter 5 - The Demons vs. Rise - The Heaven's Light!! Spoiler: The Succubus leaves for school from her home, while being unaware that she is being watched carefully, "This spell, really works huh Girai?", says a demon, watching Succubus from a rooftop of the building nearby the road she is walking on, with a group of four demons. "You bet it is, its called the Hiransai, a spell that completely conceals a few person's presence at the same time, although it can only be casted by powerful beings of all kinds, including strong demons, such as Senryuya", says another demon. "Enough talk, keep your eyes on our prey", says Senryuya, with a very serious and scary expression - the others quickly moves their eyeballs towards Succubus on the road. In a while, Succubus reaches school and when attending class, "What is this feeling, its as if I'm being watched..... I don't sense anything around here though, is it that Fallen Angel? No, I could detect her.... and even now I can tell she is far away from here... who is it then? She can't be watching me", she stops thinking for a while and then again continues to think, "Now that I think of her, that blade.... it had a long handle and had a red piece of cloth wrapped in between its handle and the blade... could that be what I think it is... ?", thinks Succubus. Then, while the class progresses, she feels something hitting her head hard and then she feels her brain pulse once very hard, "We have you now, Succubus", speaks a voice within her head. "What? ...What is this... ?", thinks back, Succubus. "It is I? Do you not remember me, your father?!", speaks the voice again, this time, even louder. "Y-You can't be... ", replies Succubus, hesitant to speak further. "You..... ", Succubus, tensed while everything around her is normal, but to her, its as if she is on a vortex, except that the wind is not taking doing anything to her body, the feeling itself is unpleasant even for her. "It is time, you give up... this whole building is surrounded by my minions, all ready to annihilate everything upon my signal, do as i tell and we shall spare all in here", says her father, threatening her. "Fine..... ", surrenders Succubus, just like that. *** "I see, so you renamed yourself huh?", replies Twilight. "Well I had to, I can't have a guy's name now can I?", says Rise. Twilight replies with a, "True!", after getting up from the swings and she continues, "Anyway, you, becoming a spiritual warrior? Hmmm..... has Milady planned all of this? I wonder... ". "Again with the 'Lady'..... Seriously, who is she?", asks Rise, after she frowns. "First tell me who brought you here to this world?", asks Twilight. "It was someone with the name Vesparia. Why do you ask?", asks Rise. "I see, before I can tell you anything, I must ask her since she brought you here", answers Twilight. Walks off, Twilight. Rise follows her, without any thought, almost instinctively, she walks behind her. *** At a certain mansion, "Misa, stop performing the Soul fist!", says an aged man, very angry. "But father! I have to practice it!", the girl replies, stopping from throwing her fist and then continues, "In order to become a spiritual warrior, I need to become stronger!". "No you don't have to! You are a member of the Nakahara family, a royal family of Alchemists and priestesses, as the one who has 'Nakahara' as her surname, your duty is to become a powerful Alchemist AND the great pristess, weren't I clear about this in the past, HUH?!! And even now Hibiki comes to inform me of your activities on this practice room!", her father yells at her. "Well I told you before that I want to become a spiritual warrior like Onee-sama! If she can be a spiritual warrior then why can't I be one too?!", asks back and argues Misa. "No you can't, you don't have what it takes! Now get out of here!", her father yells again. "Hmph.... ", reluctantly, Misa runs away from the room, wiping her tears before they were about to go down her cheeks. Later, on her room, Misa, sobbing and crying, her heart tore once again by her father, "I've had enough of this house... ", she says, wiping her tears and making spirited eyes, she continues, "Lets see how you feel after I do THIS!!", she gets up, packs her small bag taking in various things in it and then stands - taking a stance and then spreading her legs, facing the window, she threw a fist on the air towards it, blue wave launches like a beam from her hand - breaking the glasses on her window. She then says, "Hah! That's the fruit of my hard training bearing fruit!". She then starts to cough and says, "I don't have the time for this.... ", jumping out the window after saying so, she runs away from the mansion. *** Its recess, Succubus waited for this time to come, she goes to the rooftop of the school and stands on the center of the place. "Here I am, you wanted me to come here right, father?", Succubus, angry and annoyed and has her forehead frowned. "Good job, Succubus!", says her father within her mind, then a red, glowing, pentagram, appears - Succubus faints and collapses. The red orb then appears in front of her collapsed body, "Now, take her away!", says the red orb of light, five men then lands speedily behind him and replies with, "Yes master!!", and takes her away. *** A month has passed, it is August 7th currently. "Master, all preparations are done for the tower", informs Senryuya to the the red orb, Succubus's father. "Good, begin the materialization now", he replies. "Yes!", they reply and leave in an instant. "This tower, the retriever tower, shall lead us to THAT on the sky and also allow us to open a portal to the celestial world as well, HAHAHAHAHAHA!!", speaks to himself, the red orb. *** "Have you found Misa yet?", asks the Fallen Angel, "No Ojou-sama, we're sorry, but we can't find her at all!", answers the head maid, Hibiki, "Did they search every nook and crenny of the city yet? I won't be at ease until we find her... ", replies Fallen Angel. "I've already had all the maids deployed around the city everywhere, Ojou-sama, they should be able to find her soon, also, we've found out a certain demonic activity at the center of this city, Ojou-sama", says Hibiki. "I know, that's why I want her to be found immediately, she may be in danger if she stays out any longer, that symbol, if it gets stolen, then it'll get nasty... I shall go to the site where the demonic activity is taking place, make sure you find Misa and bring her home safely", says Fallen angel. "Yes, Ojou-sama", says Hibiki and leaves. *** The Fallen angel reaches the area where the demonic activity takes place, and finds herself standing in front of a tower, a large and tall tower, which reached above the clouds, "So its a tower that is invisible to the ordinary people huh? With several entrances too... I guess I'll have to enter it and destroy the core that is powering its existence", says Fallen Angel. Upon entering, it was empty, she moved and went up two floors, then found many demons on the dark, many red eyes leered at her. Meanwhile, Misa, comes to the tower, sensing the presence, she was determined to go in, "This time, I'll put an end to this demonic activity and everyone will appreciate me!", encouraging herself, she also enters the tower. Fallen angel, killing the demons, she advances on to the next floors and finally reaches a gate, a gigantic gate, with all kinds of mythical markings carved in it. The gate glows, opening in front of her and allowing her to enter - she enters - upon entering, she finds the red orb, Succubus's father, facing her, "So you came at last, Fallen angel, the one tossed away from the holy worlds for being a fool! "Hmph, well you're a bigger fool for never being able to get in on the holy worlds", replies calmly, Fallen angel. "Shut up!", enraged, Succubus's father, then he continues, "Do you really think we won't reach those worlds? Then you are foolish, we've already created a portal with this tower's power and it was able to establish a connection with the celestial world!", he laughs after saying so. "WHAT?!! That can't be, great evil spirits, devils and demons, much less any other kinds of beings than the celestial beings shouldn't be able to do that!", replies, Fallen angel. "HAH! That's what you think, well this tower was designed to reach out to you fools and destroy all of you!", replies Succubus's father. He then speaks again, "But don't worry, because you won't live after this point on anyway!". After he says so, stones from the floor, ceiling and all over, comes to him, the stones then turns red - a red golem forms in front of Fallen angel. "Any last words?", says Succubus's father, confidently. "None, because this won't be the end of me!", says the Fallen Angel, she draws her katana, from the sheathe on her loose belt. "The blade that has a red piece of cloth tied around it on between its handle and the blade..... ? It can't be... ", Succubus's father, hesitant. "Yes it is, it is that sword that you think it is, prepare to meet your demise!", says Fallen angel, who then dashes towards him. "Hmph, even with that magical sword of that caliber, it is still not enough! Do you really think you can beat a Dark God such as me, even if I'm partially here through the dark gem? Don't even get started with-", he gets interrupted, as Fallen angel strikes his armor of stones - making a large scar. "Confidence is good, but overconfidence? Not good~", teases Fallen angel. "That was beginner's luck, it won't happen again", replies the Dark God. Fallen angel attempts to attack him again with her katana, this time, after she dashes towards him and tries to hit him again, he catches the katana with with his left arm. He says, "Got you now", and then stones from everywhere around the place comes to his right hand this time, creating a red stone blade after the stones turns red again. She lets go of her katana when he tries to kill her with his newly-made weapon, stone blade. He then tosses the sword away from them, "HAH! And that's the end for you, without that blade, you can't draw your true power can you? A spiritual warrior only haves a magical sword so that they can draw all their power and to use them in their preferable art, you're done for now!", says Succubus's father and swings the sword at her - making a huge dent on the floor, he repeatedly swings his blade at her and advances forward towards her as she keeps dodging his attacks to the point where she steps on his sword speedily then jumps and lands behind him, taking a stance, spreading her legs wide, she says, "Soul fist!", and then throws a fist to the air towards him. The power released from her palm goes in and out of his stone-made body, making a hole on his belly, but stones comes from everywhere again to restore it. She then dashes towards her katana and retrieves it. "Its over huh? As if!", says Fallen angel, her blade glows with a purple aura, "Chains of blinding light", she points her blade towards Succubus's father as she says it - chains glowing with purple light, comes out and catches him in a jiffy, "W-What the, what is this?!", screams out, Succubus's father. "Its what you see it is!", stabbing his head from the above, within which, the red orb through which Succubus's father was speaking, Fallen angel wins the battle. The red orb, fading away, "You may have won now, but you are too late to stop us now... hahahahaha", laughs Succubus's father as he fades away. Meanwhile, Misa doesn't face any demons, surprisingly, she reaches the core of the tower, "Hello Ojou-chan!! How are you today?! Hahahahahaha!!", Girai says, Senryuya then says, "Welcome, to the tower of resurrection! Now, prepare to die, young one! You guys will take her on of course, no way I'm staining my pride with fighting a small fry... ", Misa, snaps, "WHY YOU!! HOW DARE YOU?!!" *** The celestial world gets attacked while Rise was being trained by Vesparia, on a small piece of land floating on the sky, Vesparia and Rise, clashes swords for practice,. The cloud suddenly darkens, the angels looks up to the sky and black portal opens, demons with devils in the front, charges, a great battle amongst good and evil ensues. Under Vesparia's care, now, Rise is taken back to a church, due to the current situation. where she is. Twilight comes in and says, "The Great Spirit has requested me to come tell the both of you to go to her, I shall accompany the both of you now, we are to bring Rise to the mosque, immediately. They run their way to the mosque, very speedily, jumping and dashing through the obstacles, rubbles and broken houses, ruined gardens, burned grasslands. Rise thinks to herself, "It was so beautiful before... but now... it all seems so ruined.... just as they start invading, the war causes this... I guess some beautiful things are fragile as well". They later reach the mosque, after having to even kill a few demons on their way. "Milady, we're here with Rise, as you have requested", says Vesparia, she kneels down on her, facing the light in front of them, on a somewhat throne within the mosque. Rise's thought again rises, "A throne completely filled with light, within a mosque.... ? What the hell?". A voice reaches their ears from the light, "I see, now, I'd like Rise and I to be alone please", it was a female woman's voice, it was very sweet voice. Twilight and Vesparia leaves and waits outside. The voice then speaks to Rise, "Do you wish to be a spiritual warrior, Rise? Answer me with honesty, other than your wishes and desires, no chains should bind you and force you become a spiritual warrior, only become a spiritual warrior on your own free will for your own reasons!". "Yes, after all that happened... I do... for various reasons... I am not forced to become a spiritual warrior in any way", says Rise, both serious and depressed. "Tell me, your reasons for becoming a spiritual warrior?", asks the voice. "I want to do what's right... and I want to be strong as well. I feel that having you in me, will guide me to what's right and wrong, that is all, doing what's right includes killing these demons too is it not?", Rise, answers and asks with resolve. "It sure is the right thing to do, although, becoming stronger depends on you wholly. Very well then, I understand your reasoning, for I wish the same, come to me, into my light... ", the voice speaks. She enters the throne of light, walking in the middle of the throne, she realized a chair, floating in the middle, barely visible on the bright light, "Sit down on that chair please, Rise", says the voice. Sitting on the floating chair within the light, the light was warm, she felt changes occurring through her body once again. "Welcome to the life of war, garden of limitless battlefields and the elements that differ everyday normal life and that of those who are involved with magic and supernaturals. Limitless battle may one day consume your life, let us fight together until that day comes and try to fulfill our one duty; Doing what's right and kill the wrongdoers", speaks the voice. All the light on the throne turn into a single orb of light. Coming before her, the voice tells, "Here goes then". It enters her, going in on her chest, a few moments later. Her hair turns silver, wings spawns out her back. She opens her silver turned eyes wide and she glows. Slight wind goes throughout the room. Rise gets up from the chair and floats in the air. "You now receive the title of Heaven's Light and so, henceforth on the realm of magic, you shall be known as, 'Rise - The Heaven's Light'". The chair moves away and falls behind, Rise's eyeballs then moves to a long shining katana below, stabbed on the floor, it was below the chair when it was floating, but Rise could not see it that time, due to the bright light. "A sword, what's it doing here?", asks Rise. "That is the sword that my spiritual warrior is supposed to use, it is the longest katana in the history of mankind ever created, Seven Heavens sword! Take it, you will need it!", answers the voice, Rise, takes it up and the blade glows. "Tell me, who are you?", asks Rise. "I am a great spirit, my name is Ishtar, the one who is known as the Goddess of Love and War to the humans", says Ishtar from within Rise. "You're still not ready to fight using my powers, I shall fight alongside you for now to restore peace on both this world and yours, before I sleep within you", says Ishtar. "Wait, both this world and my world? What do you mean by that?", asks Rise. "It seems that some kind of terrible activity is taking place in your world, we'll return to your world and deal with it after this", answers Ishtar. "Let me warn you Rise, we may get summoned any time", speaks Ishtar. "Summoned? W-What do you mean?", asks back Rise. "It means that a sorcerer or a magic user of some class can summon you anytime, be it in a minute, hour, day, month, year, decade, century, or more, it can happen any time", answers Ishtar, being very informative and then continues, "We must finish this now! As soon as possible!". Rise voice changes, her voice gets mixed with Ishtar's. Rise thinks, "Wow, such amazing powers are flowing into me... its endless!", Ishtar answers within her mind, "Yes that's right, this is my power, that you must soon learn how to wield properly". "W-Wait, how did you?"", thinks back and asks Rise, "Ehehehe, right now, our thoughts are connected, this is temporary though, don't worry~", speaks back within Rise's mind, showing a sudden playful and jolly side, Rise was very surprised. "We shall destroy all filth together!", with a slightly raised voice, says Ishtar. Rise walks out of the mosque. "Twilight and Vesparia, both of you will stay in here, Vesparia, protect this land for as long as you can!", says Rise, her vice, mixed with Ishtar's. "Yes, Rise-sama!", Vsparia kneels down, Rise then says, "Please, don't kneel down on me", "B-But Rise-sama, my royalty to you is-", Vesparia gets interrupted, "No, using 'sama' is more than enough, now, I shall ascend". Four more wings spawns out, Rise takes flight into the sky, after a few moments, she simply goes through a demon, which was trying to eat and angel, the demon, after Rise goes through, falls into pieces. Then, after going high above on the sky, demons comes from all directions, Rise, swings her sword from left to right and a round,, white and holy light disperses, turning all demons into pieces. Many demons ruthlessly charges towards Rise, all gets skewered and falls into pieces. Rise, then witnesses a black dragon, burning everything with its black flame. Rise, charges from the sky, with her katana, pointed towards it. The dragon realizes the coming danger and looks up to see Rise coming, then the dragon releases his black flames from its mouth and tries to devour Rise. Rise, for a second feels fear, "Do not fear, I am with you, just go through it, its way too weak!", speaks Ishtar within her mind. Rise then thinks back, "That's right, I can do it, great power is welling up in me, I can do it!", Ishtar again speaks on her, "That's right, believe in yourself". Rise dives through the flames - after entering the dragon's mouth, she spins her body while her blade, horizontally cuts the dragon from the inside - coming out through making a hole on its tail, she comes out unharmed. The flames does not even effect it. The dragon, also falls into pieces on the ground. "Rise, its about time we put an end to this, we're gonna cast the heaven's wind now", says Ishtar. "The heaven's wind?", Rise asks, curious but also somewhat excited to do it. Ishtar speaks, "That's right, let me show you, it can vanquish all demons now, it can only be used when I'm awake, lets get on with it and speak together with me". [i]"Oh benevolent heavens, thou shalt not kill, but purify, all demons, wrecking havoc on thy world". "Grant thy power that ye has, to us, for purification and restoration". "For it is ye, that thou shall grant powers to those who prays and need it, Heaven's Wind!!". Light comes down from the sky, breaking the dark clods away, the light hits Rise's delicate body - Rise harnessing its power, releases white wind through the swing of her katana and it goes to all directions, in great speed. Surges of power goes through all demons and devils devouring things else where, turning them non-existent, they all die, even the pieces of slaughter demons and everything related to demons, gets vanquished. "What's left now is the portal, we should destroy that too, okay here goes, lets do it", says Ishtar. The katana glows with a bright blue aura - With great power, a ball of light forms at the top of the swords tip, then, Rise, swinging the sword towards it, the bal of light ascends to the portal and it gets annihilated. "We are done on this land, good job Rise", says Ishtar. "Nah uh, it was mostly you, I could even do much with you, making me mostly swing the sword and making me move my body like that", replies Rise. "That's true, but you handled my power well nonetheless, now, off to-", she gets interrupted. "M-My body, w-what is this?!!", says Rise, her body, starting to disappear. Ishtar replies, "Can it be, we are being summoned already?!!" Chapter 6 - The True Powers of a Failure! Spoiler: Fallen angel, after defeating Succubus's father, advances through to the next floor. But before she came to the current floor after defeating Succubus's father, she saw that the gigantic gates to that room was gone behind her and the whole room seemed different, sealing off her exit. "What the hell is up with this tower... ? Its changing? Is it alive or something? Damn I don't anything about this! And I can't sense what's in the core, there's gotta be something, they must have put something to ward off my sensing abilities, I guess I somehow have to go there... ", thinks Fallen angel. She then finds another room, totally dark inside - upon entering it, she felt water on her foot, the floor was wet with water. She tries to look what's in there, but the room was too dark for her eyes to see anything. Suddenly, the door behind her, shuts tight and she gasps, looking back to it seeing that its closed. "Damn it.... a trap... ", is what goes through her mind. Her ears picks up sounds of walking on the water. Coming closer and closer every second - voices of demons, their groans, are heard by Fallen angel. "Ugh... great, I can't even see on this darkness, I have to concentrate on my senses and fight them without my eyes.... ! And judging from that kinda voice, they have to be ghouls, the flesh eaters... their sense of smell is almost flawless... dammit!", thinks Fallen angel. One of the ghouls tries to bite her shoulder, from the front, Fallen angel, simply lets her katana go deep into the ghouls belly. They then all start to dive to her to eat her flesh. A blade dances on the darkness, making echos of cutting flesh throughout the room. As pieces of ghoul's fleshes falls on the watery floor, shining steel continues to slice the ghouls as the Fallen angel kills them really fast, one after the other. But, even after many minutes passed. She is astonished, because their numbers doesn't seem to have decreased, she is tensed, thinking "W-What's going on? Are they being regenerated? How are they coming again and again?". After some more minutes passes, a ghoul manages to bite her on her shoulder from the back. Who she kills afterward. "This.... is not good.... my powers are at the limits already... from using my contracts most strongest powers that day with that person... I have to retreat, its the only way to survive, I'll have to come back tomorrow for this... there is still lots of time before this tower's fully complete for its purpose... because from what I was taught, a towers such as these by demons takes massive mana to get completed, and what I feel is definitely not massive but different sorts of magics and powers from all over, confusing me... ", thinks fallen angel, while her blade slices through more ghouls. "That's it, I need to leave and come back later", says Fallen angel. Who's body glowed and she disappeared. *** Misa, enraged with the demons in front of her, laughing. Misa, "Hmph, I'm gonna kill you all and put this to an end in order to have my father and Onee-sama acknowledge me!". "Pfffft.... hahahahaha.... heard that Senryuya?! Ojou-chan is so funny!", laughs Girai. "Enough, Girai, just take care of her already!!", says Senryuya. Girai, makes his move first, before he slashes her with his sharp claws, she simply raises her hand on him and his face hits something solid. Girai, confused by it, jumps back when Misa lets her hand down, attacking her from the above this tome, by letting out miasma from his mouth. The miasma covers her, the enemies watches. After it went away, it reveals a red barrier protecting Misa from harm. But it breaks afterward. "Why you!! I'll beat you this time for sure!!", says Girai, this time, letting out acid from his mouth, Misa uses her soul fist, which goes through the acid and damaging Girai's mouth - He falls on the floor. Now, he charged forward with his fists prepared. She used her soul fist again, after stopping from charging, he tries to block it with his fist, which results on his fist feeling numb only. Misa coughs after using her soul fist. Senryuya then speaks, "I can't believe you, you can't even beat a worm such as her.... ", he sighs and puts his palm on his forehead and continues, "Who's using a technique usually used by spiritual warriors... the soul fist seems good, I can tell she practiced lots for it, but for an ordinary human, its gonna put a strain on her soul and on her body's health, one day, she will die for it... which itself seems like a miracle because after a few shots on a lifetime, a human should be dead, you should consider yourself lucky little girl! And that's her downfall Giral. If you can't even beat her after that weak point, then I am very disappointed". Then Girai, feeling insulted decides to fight seriously with a human girl, which annoys Senryuya but he quietly observes. As for Misa, "What do you mean my soul receiving strains and my health deteriorating?". "I mean what I mean, do you not know of this side-effect for the humans?", asks Senryuya. "What the.... so Onee-sama lied to me.... no way.... and to top it all off, I should have been dead? What's going on?", says to herself, Misa. Girai attacks hers, while her guard was down due to her getting emotionally upset and entering deep thoughts. Girai, beating Misa ruthlessly with his fists until his claws dug into her stomach, makes a grave wound on her belly - Misa falls into the floor, blood starts to rush out of her. "That's it for you, Ojou-chan!", says Girai, with a smirk. Misa tries to look up, realizing that it was a mistake to even think about anything at the time of a battle. As she looked up, she realizes other demons surrounding her, all looking down on her, their saliva flowing down through their ugly mouths, all wanting to prey on her flesh. "What the..... ? Why didn't I see them before... ? That's weird... ", thinks Misa. "What's wrong, surprised before your demise? Are you really seeing them just now?", asks Girai, a grin can be seen on his face again. "I'll take your silence as a yes, they are ghouls, who were all simply waiting to devour your flesh while concealed by Senryuya's magic, but out of fear they never showed themselves by coming out from it, but they finally did, after seeing you on the floor", explains Girai. "So.... is it really my time to die? After I'm gone, what will happen to Otou-sama and Onee-sama? How will they react after finding out about this? Will they cry for me? Or will they simply move on without even showing tears...... ", at the brink of her death, Misa's thoughts arose. "If I die now, then what will happen to our family pride? That pride I've gained from the name, 'Nakahara', will Otou-san get mad at me for dying like this? No that can't be it... but then... what... what will happen, will anything change... ? I want to know!", the inexperienced child, Misa, continues to think. "Do you want me to save you?", asks a voice, from deep inside her heart. "Who... are you?", asks back on her mind, Misa. "I am the one who helped you to stay alive for so long, after you once made a wish to become a spiritual warrior. I am one of the insignias of miracles, who has been inside you from your birth", replies the voice from deep within her heart. "You.... I remember... on my dream that night, when I decided to become a spiritual warrior like Onee-sama, you came to me to offer your help, didn't you?", asks back on her mind, Misa. "Yes, that's right, but it seems you forgot about it after you woke up until now", answers, the voice. "I am sorry, but there is little I can do for that wish you made... Misa... I request you for your own sake, please, you have to be the one that your father wants you to be", says the voice. "I get it... what do you want me to do? Tell me what to do... ?", asks Misa. "In order for you to win against these monsters and restore your name's pride, we need to call forth on someone strong enough to kill them, I shall do it for you, Misa", says the voice in a reassuring way. "You morons, eat her already, she shouldn't be able to do anything now", says Senryuya. "W-Wait Senryuya! Something is happening to her!", says Girai. Senryuya replies with a "What?!!" as his forehead frowns. Red glowing marks all over Misa's body was being witnessed by everyone. The blood that had came out from her stomach on the floor all starts to move - Forming a magic circle with various writings in it. Her crimson eyes, glowing. Misa cannot tell what is going on. As the circle was getting completed, Senryurya says, "This isn't good! Forget about eating her! I'll give her a final blow and end her life!", he draws his right hand up and it starts to get filled with darkness. And then he launches a ball of darkness on Misa after moving his hand towards Misa. Right before it hits her. "Hmm? I wonder if something just hit me, that sure was a strong breeze", says Rise, confused. Misa looks up to find a girl with a royal and expensive looking, Victorian Era dress, with a brown and twin-tailed hair, standing before her. "Answer me now, are you the one who summoned me?", asks Rise, after looking behind on Misa, the girl with violet royal dress and blue min-skirt and blue and white stripped knee socks. Facing her, Rise's eyes were filled with intensity. After realizing what the voice made her do and why it made her do it, Misa answers with a, "Yes". "Rise, we must abide by the rules, we cannot have a normal contract with her, her offering wasn't enough for us, tell her that", says Ishtar within Rise's mind. "I'm sorry, but your blood is not enough to make a contract with me", speaks Rise. "I see... ", replies Misa. "But you can still make a temporary contract with me, in which you can only order me once", says Rise. Senryuya speaks to the demons, "Stop them! They are trying to make a contract with each other! Kill them now!". All ghouls, from their heads, launches their horns while some of them charges at Rise. With Misa's revived hope, she says, "Okay then, a temporary contract it is... !", she starts to feel dizzy due to her loss of blood. "Very well then", says Rise while the attacks are reaching her and continues with a grin on her face, "Ojou-sama", her azure eyes widens as she says it with a louder voice, "Silence!!". All the launched attacks freezes, along with the ghouls who were charging at her. "Now, give me your one and only order please? I'd prefer it if you try to make the best of it, Ojou-sama", says Rise. "In order to restore my pride and save my life, destroy this tower, along with all these filthy demons!", Misa, gives out her order. Rise slightly smiles, "As you wish, Ojou-sama", while she says it, her voices again gets mixed with Ishtar's voice - Her eyes turns silver again, her hair turns silver while her hiar flutters upwards as if wind passed through her from below - Four wings at total spawns out of her this time, Ishtar then tells Rise within her mind, "We need not showoff any more powers than this Rise, I hope you understand". Rise replies on her mind to Ishtar, "Sure, I understand". Now they speak through one mouth together with a mixed voice, "Now, where was I? Oh yeah, time to return your own medicines". Rise waves her hand from left to right, then the horns returns and the ghouls who tried to charge at her all got blown away. Many ghouls dies after getting pierced by the horns and many others falls above each other. "Now, to all the morons in here, time to die", says Rise, drawing her blade. She wields it, swinging it from left to right, lets out great waves of light, turning all ghouls to ashes. Girai charges at her, to kill her. As Girai was charging at her, "You are no doubt not an ordinary ghoul, but that's it for you", says Rise when she prepares her blade to kill him. "Shut up and die!", says Girai and passes her as he tried to hit her with his fist and then continues after passing through her, "W-What the.... what jus-", his lips stopped, then, a sound of flesh getting cut and detached occurred, as his left hand spins to the air, after getting cut off, blood spills on the floor from the arm that got cut. After he realized of his left arm being gone, he realized the four-winged angel, standing behind him, the overwhelming presence instilled fear on his mind, freezing his movements. Rise's blade dives on his back and comes out through his chest, killing Girai. "Well that was quick, from that kind of power I can feel, it should take a second for her to kill him anyway, she merely toyed with him... ", says Senryuya. Rise takes a walk towards Senryuya, her eyes set on him, with a killer's intent and a smirk on her face. As she walks towards him, ghouls and other demons comes out from everywhere to kill her, she simply cuts them away before they could even lay their finger on her. She swings her blade from left to right, again, releasing surges of light, annihilating all demons around her, the only one who's left is Senryuya. "She has four wings, that means that she is an archangel? Hmm..... then she should be as strong as me, but the kind of power I sense tells me otherwise, well, I better not let my guard down, she is fearsome after all", thinks Senryuya. On the sides, Misa, who managed to pull her body together and sat down on the floor, watched all that had transpired, "Amazing... I haven't seen any spiritual warrior other than Onee-sama, but she is just awesome, I haven't seen these kinds of power ever and nor have I sensed anything like this my entire life". "So, you're the only one left huh? Currently, you seem to be the strongest in here now, I hope you entertain me, you see, after I fought on that war and put an end to it on the Celestial World, I really feel like killing someone strong", says Rise, smirk has still not left her face. "You ended the war? Tch........ ! I hope you don't get killed while getting entertained!", says Senryuya and draws a broad sword from the sheathe on his back. "As if!", says Rise and also charges. Two pieces of steel collides, as the two spiritual warriors tries to beat each other with their strengths, they release huge amounts of mana on the back, creating a scene with wind blowing off of them. Rise suddenly disappears while their swords were in touch, Senryuya, gets confused and then realizes of her speed. "Where is she?!!", says Senryuya while looking around. Suddenly Rise comes out of the blue to his back saying, "Here!", and slashes his back with her blade, splattering blood out. Senryuya falls to his knees. Rise stands in front of him, "Get up, you're yet to entertain me", says Rise, her eyes are almost empty, and her voice, still mixed with that of Ishtar's. Senryuya gets up, thinking that Rise's confidence may actually be overconfidence, reviving some confidence back at him. He tries to slash Rise with his blade but Rise jumps backward. After landing on the floor, Rise jumps forward towards Senryuya with her katana, ready to kill him and their blades clashes with Rise on the top. Showing red demonic energy coming through his blade. Senryuya tries to push her back, with both his strength and power. Senryuya, tries to get the better hand over the farce between them. But Rise, suddenly shows the killer''s intent again and surpasses Senryuya's effort, effortlessly, showing sudden increase of strength. She pushes with her sword in a way that the floor beneath him crumbles and Senryuya falls after the floor breaks to the floor below. Rise looking down from the above with glowing silver eyes, "Heh, you thought you could beat me? Think again!". "For an archangel to be this strong... wait, it can't be!! Is it that she isn't showing more wings than just four wings? If that's the case the-", he gets interrupted as Rise speaks, "Now you understand, you haven't been fighting an archangel, you've been fighting someone whose authority matches your master's, you've been fighting someone who was dubbed as one of the 'goddesses' of the world on the past by the humans", after saying so, she continues, "Now, prepare to die... ". Senryuya thinks to himself, "So that's it, not just Girai, but even I was simply being toyed with", jumping out of the floor below and landing behind Rise, Senryuya takes his distance. "I have no choice, I either have to survive her until I get the right chance to escape or fight to the death", thinks Senryuya. Rise continuously assaults Senryuya, each time he dodges Rise's deadly strikes, Rise breaks either a pillar or a certain spot on the floor, destroying the place, bit by bit with her unbelievable strenght. Finally, when Senryuya, takes a stance, Rise starts to walk towards him, "Okay, enough playtime, you're not much entertaining anymore, time to satisfy my Ojou-sama now". As she keeps on walking, suddenly, his right gets twisted and his sword, falls from his hand. "There goes your right arm along with that weak sword", says Rise, walking towards him still, along with her smirk. Then his left leg suddenly gets sliced off, making him barely able to move, "Oh look! And there went your left leg, along with your ability to walk properly", Rise, speaking with a somewhat humor. "Say goodbye!", Rise says, standing in front of him, with a big smile on her face, wider than any other previous smiles. Her blade, directly pierces Senryuya's heart, and then his body dissipates. "There goes this demon, next comes this tower", says Rise and then continues, "We really need to break this down huh? Even without her order, this needs to go". Ishtar answers, "I'm afraid so, it triggered that war on Celestial world, it can go as far as to open a portal to that world, this has to disappear. *** On the sky, the tower could be seen as nothing but rubbles, the night sky was delightful for both Rise and Ishtar and Misa, who was under Rise's arms, they were on the sky, with Rise's wings allowing them to fly, Misa was scared of the height, so her eyes were close, "Where is your home? I'll do you a favor and drop you home", says Rise. Chapter 7 - The Alchemists' Tree. Spoiler: Later, Rise met a beautiful girl about her age with blue long hair to the middle of her back, ears covered with hair, dark brown eyes - she had bangs across her face. "What are you doing here late at night?" the girl asks. "I'm sensing something eerie from you, who are you?" Rise asks back. "So you feel my powers? My soul is not that of human's, to tell the truth, I'm a succubus named Nanako Moki" Moki answers. "But you seem human, probably taking a form are you?" Rise replies. "I was sealed by a priest years ago. Later, I broke it and found this world changed. It’s been 16 years since, I then entered the body of a pregnant woman's baby who died on her womb due to receiving damages in a small accident. I brought it back to life and used my powers to make it look like myself, thus becoming my own. Later, she gave birth to me. Which is why I am now half human and thus my body seems human" Moki, explained. "You wanted to be human!?" Rise asks curiously. "I got bored watching the humans as a spirit, so I decided to join them, I felt your presence and came to check out." Moki answers. "You should have a family too!" suggests Moki. "But... " Rise hesitates. "I'll help you out" Moki, suddenly moves behind Rise and touches both her shoulders. Rise thoughts, "That's weird... with my powers, she shouldn't be able to surpass my speed like that... am I exhausted... ?", Rise collapses. *** "R-Really? You'll really become an alchemist?", asked Misa's father. "No, I'll become both an alchemist and a priestess", answered Misa. Her father seemed happy and shocked by her sudden change, "Okay then, I'll take you to the tree soon!". Its the next day. Misa and her father were having breakfast, for some reason, Misa quit her school saying that she will get back to going to school later. Her father allowed it. "And that is?", asked Misa, to her father. "You'll see, I'll take you there today, just give me some time", answers her, her father. Misa leaves asking to call her when the time comes. ""Zeph, what happened? Why'd she change, she was so stubborn before she run away?", asks her father. "I don't know, its good for you though right? I don't see why you're so eager to find out about it", answers Zeph, from behind him, from the other side of the wall. "I was just curious, well, it doesn't really matter, the time has finally come, the time for her to make the contract with you, is also coming, Zeph", says her father. "I wonder whether she'll make a contract with me", replies Zeph. "What?! Then who else is there?", asks her father. "I dunno, she may not want to make a contract with me, she can always summon a spiritual warrior right? Never forget that the possibilities are endless", answers Zeph. "Hmph, well, you coming to the tree with us or not?", her father asks, "Yes of course, father", she answered in a tone that easily said that she smiled after answering. *** "Ojou-sama is kidnapped?!", says Kuisegi, shocked, "Yeah, and its all your fault, you careless butler! Its all your fault, you should never have left her alone!", Mai's father yells at Kuisegi and then continues, "You will do as I say, I'll go and save her, and you'll stay here, you are a disgrace to your master, you fail as a butler". "I'm sorry, but I'll be the one to go save her", says Kuisegi, "What?!! You dare to defy me?!!", yells back, Mai. "You're not my master, Ojou-sama is the one who made a pact with me, so I do dare to defy you", says Kuisegi when his shows turns glowing scarlet. *** Almost midnight, Misa and Zeph, following their father, on a golden corridor, with golden statures lined on both sides, it was very dark, everything were almost not visible - they were underground. They then stood in front of a large and golden, locked door. "Misa, its time for you to open this door", says her father. Misa then asks, "How do I open it, Otou-sama?". "Touching it should be enough to open it", her father answers. Zeph stood behind them, quite - spectating. Misa puts her right hand on the door, symbols and magical circles carved on the door, all glows with bright red light, the eyes of the statue also glow red - The door opens. Misa walks forward, Zeph tries to go in but then her father stops her after raising his arm in front of her, "I'm sorry, but only she is allowed to enter this room, it is forbidden for anyone else", says her father. Right after Misa enters, the door shuts itself tight. She bangs on the door, thinking that she was tricked, but her father explains from the outside that they are not allowed in. After understanding, she looks behind, at the whole place, there was a tree. The tree was white and shiny. With lights glowing around it, the room was large and was almost fully black. There was water on the sides of the large room, all seemed black, even the water, there were white fruits on the tree and there was an white alter. She walks towards the alter, feeling she's being called to it. *** Kuisegi conducted various investigations and had finally reached the place where Mai may had been held, an old tower. Going through the tower, he came across many mythical creatures and one of those creatures were chimeras. After reaching the top floor, he found a prison and in front of its door, was Raiga. "I see, so Maria-san is already trying to remove her enemies and gain her insignia huh?", says Kuisegi. "That's right, she'll take Mai-san's insignia", replies Raiga and then continues, "I'm sorry, but you won't be taking Mai-san tonight". Dual swords materializes on Raiga's hands and so does a crimson sword on Kuisegi's hand. Kuisegi throws his srowd to stab Raiga - After Raiga blocks it with his swords, he finds Kuisegi in front of him, with a smirk, then after getting punched to the face by Kuisegi. Raiga tries to push Kuisegi away after their swords then clashes, but fails at doing so. As their blades were making sparks from pushing each other. The walls crumble as the two warriors rumble. blades continuously makes contact with each other, "Damn you, why can't I take you down?!!", speaks Raiga, unable to push Kuisegi back. "That's because you are simply of a lower rank, way lower than mine", replies Kuisegi, as his sword then glows Raiga then gets blown off. Raiga, unable to beat Kuisegi, “I call upon thee, my blades of annihilation!”, many blades materializes beside Raiga, all floats towards Kuisegi and then surrounds him, Upon Raiga's right hand waving after he stabbed his sword on the floor from his right hand, all the swords charged towards Kuisegi. Kuisegi marvelously spins his body after which, Raiga's blades into cutted pieces of blades on the floor. Raiga gets shrouded with green aura, after taking up his stabbed sword from the floor, he charges towards Kuisegi. Their swords once again, clashes, this time, Raiga was almost pushing Kuisegi away, from the sheer force of power, the wall behind Kuisegi breaks away, now Kuisegi, almost at the edge, an inch away from falling, was struggling against Raiga. "Hah!! So you can't beat me after all, Kuisegi!", said Raiga. "So you think that you'll beat me just like that? You've got to be kidding me", says Kuisegi, smiling, as his eyes glows and he suddenly disappears. A voice suddenly orders from within the prison, "Kuisegi, enough of having fun, finish him off and come rescue me". Then out of the blue, from behind, he suddenly back stabs Raiga. Raiga vomits blood after falling to the floor. "W-What the hell... are you?", asks Raiga, struggling to live. "Sorry, but I don't feel obligated to answer that question", replies Kuisegi. *** Rise was later found lying on street by a married couple, both aged around 30s, on the next morning. She hides the truth from the family and says she's an orphan. They adopt her and she inherits the surname 'Kujikawa'. Rise had also gained a younger sister. "Rise-chan, here's your bento", says her foster mother, after handing her lunch to Rise and continues, "Please take care of yourself now dear". Rise says after walking out of the house, "Mhm, I'm going now!". Spoiler: This is a list of people whose FAKKU usernames are being used on this story: Rise-chan (Kujikawa Rise) (Me): Well, you know me right? Mibuchiha (Mibuchiha Aki): A great writer and a user joined long ago, he's also well-known as well, you should know him. Zeph=3 (Nakahara Zeph):Creator and president of VUVC, the awesome club which I myself hasn't joined, she is an old user and used to be an active user but she's too busy with life for now. Moki (Nanako Moki): A well-known member from IB. Although she says that she's not well-known... mrprince04 (Hishedori Kuisegi):[i/] You'll see him around the chat section a lot I guess, he's fairly a very old user as well. [i]Yama-kun (Sato Yamazaki): My butler (on fakku lol), a person who I adore though, for accepting the way I am and obeying my commands, he is one of those who has been a member for years, you'll find him on the chat section and forum games section. If you wish to have your username used on this story as a side-character or a main character, then just say so. There's a good chance that I'll accept it! The name Hirai High School is completely made up by yours truly. I searched if any school with that name existed and I found none. Same goes for Verparia.

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Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

14 years ago

But really guys, find any mistakes and Pm it NOT say it out here directly.

If its a small mistake, really small one, then you're welcomed to post it down here.

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Added chapter 3!

Edited chapter 1 & 2 a whole lot too! Read them if you get time~

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Added chapter 4!

I think there are some editings needing to be done on chapter 3 (imagery lacking I think), but will do it later, too lazy~

No feedback these days..... oh well...

high_time

13 years ago

Try posting it at the Cafe'

What made the deadness of this forum is the unbalanced portion between the readers and the writers. There's barely any readers around there, and the people who're willing to read are getting less each day.

Just write slower and take it easy, rushing things could decrease the overall quality of the stories. And I've experienced that lots of times too..

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

I guess I will post it on the cafe when I post the next chap.

After the contest died due to the forum posts and threads going missing, I saw that it got dead along with that.

Ofc, I'm too lazy to make haste anyway.

mibuchiha Fakku Elder

13 years ago

I remember there's more to the first chap when I read it. Don't screw with my memory by making edits every 3 mins. x_x

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

mibuchiha wrote...

I remember there's more to the first chap when I read it. Don't screw with my memory by making edits every 3 mins. x_x

I really have no idea what more there were you are talking about. but I changed a lot of thing in there after editing.

animehot2

13 years ago

*clap* *clap* good work two thumbs up

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Buckle up your gears, because chapter 5 is added! And its really big too~ pretty much 3000+ words (above 3500 words lol) lol.

I also plan on editing chapter 3 (imagery lacking) but I'm too lazy now... sorry...

animehot2 wrote...

*clap* *clap* good work two thumbs up

Thank you~

But I'd really like it if people posts their opinions, thoughts of the story and all that, is it really too much to ask? Hmm...

animehot2

13 years ago

Rise-chan wrote...

But I'd really like it if people posts their opinions, thoughts of the story and all that, is it really too much to ask? Hmm...

From what i've read i like the whole set up of the story it but in the beginning i was kinda lost then i understood where it was going some parts are better than others but over all its enjoyable

BadDay

13 years ago

Now, more of this.

Hajin Busujima

13 years ago

This has been a nice read so far. I like how there are three different occurences within the story, in which they all link up together. I'm anxious to know what will happen with Misa now that she is a runaway. Keep it up Ojou-sama~

Meowmeow239

13 years ago

Well done my little brother!
<3

*hugs*

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Meowmeow239 wrote...

Well done my little brother!
<3

*hugs*

Good to hear~

@Hajin-kun Its good to hear that you're excited for it.

@Animehot You didn't get few things? Like what?

The next chapter is just around the corner by the way! Chapter 6 is almost done!

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Okay, added chapter 6, I think there are some typos in there, please deal with them, I'll fix them soon.

Please give your thoughts of this chapter~

EDIT: Chapter 6 has been removed of all typos now, and has gone through a little bit of changes.

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Added chapter 7!!

The story is finally moving towards the end of chapter 00's events.

Kuro vi Lolitannia

13 years ago

Just read chapter 1... Wait a minute, at first, Rise is a boy, then becomes a girl, then dating with another boy....

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gizgal

13 years ago

Nice! Read the first one only, but I gotta say: you need to pick a verb tense, then stick with it.
You switch quite a bit.

Cinia Pacifica Ojou-sama Writer

13 years ago

Kuro vi Lolitannia wrote...

Haha, yes that's right, but that's chapter 00, Rise (I mean, I on the story) doesn't date on chapter 1.

gizgal wrote...

Nice! Read the first one only, but I gotta say: you need to pick a verb tense, then stick with it.
You switch quite a bit.

Really? I don't even know what the verb tense is... >>

Perhaps its because I'm a ditz who's not too aware about grammar?

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