Another poem, I hope you like it.

I was planning on taking a creative writing as my minor in college. Tell me what you think of this piece (Wrote it in around 10 minutes).

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Conductor of irregular realities,
sow a new age of painted melodies.
I feel ambilvalence about you, visionary
of the contemporary.

Is it that you display nothing more,
than a meaningless array of color?
Are your works only visualizations
representing physics equations?

Please, give me the hidden meaning within your hidden meaning.

You know, I'm absolutely horrible at trying to wrap my mind around poetry, but I really like the flow of this! What a wonderful collection of symbiotic syllables! I like it.

Thanks. Funny thing is, when I was writing it, I had no idea that the way I wrote it could be rhythmic like that. Afterwards I shifted the lines, and they worked better that way.

Always honestly impressed at those who could produce such works in a short span of time. 10 minutes for something like this? I'm jealous!

I think the use of the word 'paint' twice gives away the charm of letting the reader interpret it a bit more, but obviously that's something that you get to decide.

Also, the breaking up of these lines:

Absolutely great flow. The fact that you break into the next line after visionary creates emphasis the both 'visionary' and 'contemporary', which results in a superb, melodic flow. The forced pause after 'visionary' is like the creation of music. Loved the poem, really.

Thanks for pointing out the repetition, I'll edit that. And thank you, that's brightened my day with confidence.