Awesome Poem

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Title: Stormy Night
By me. Rawr!
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Thunder roars overhead
Hail strikes the top of my car
I need to pee
Seriously

Pummeling pummeling pummeling
On and on it goes
Even now I gaze into the night
My house, is it alright?
I need to pee
Seriously

The house over there
Hither too I shall come
Enter into the pelt
Bitches don't know 'bout my brown belt

And you might ask me
Never should a girl go out
Ever into the darkness
Obviously it was my blindness

Feel me this stormy night
My wrath towards the heavens
You might ask me
Are you still with me?

No I will answer
I still need to pee
My bladder is about burst
Over into this first

Silly you answer
I need to pee
This I can only reply
Young one, It's gone awry

These nights, I think
Heaven is not real
Even now I'm thinking
Souls keeps on sinking

Under this stormy night
Bedtime hits young children
Jeer I must be
Even now, I need to pee

Can it be?
Toilet in the street
Oh the lord I thank
Feelings up frank

Elevated on the hill
Very high above me
Error my brain blur
Restroom is out of order

You tell me to continue
Fuck you I reply
I need to pee
But I need to pee

Embers burn in my nether region
Really really painful
Why have you forsaken me
I really need to pee

This really sucks
Hell rages inside me
I need to pee
Now let me be!

My bladder is on fire
You say do it in the bush
Why I ask your being
A girl's feelings

Kind lord present me
I need to pee
Near here let me pee
Gales continue free

Begging the dear lord
Every bathroom in sight
I need to pee
Now, I need to pee

God, what have you forsaken me?
Seriously
Do what you will with me
I need to pee

So I only do what I can
Continue on the road
Onto my seat it does flow
Never has it felt so

Tears flow down my face
Even disgusted with myself
Never again God alright
This dark and stormy night

YOUR THOUGHTS OF THIS AWESOME POEM!?

Interesting indeed Shia, a did enjoy reading this poem, I can't help but ask, but was this brought to mind by personal experience nano desu? Anyway, nice poem, I liked it a lot nano desu ^_^

lol it was awesome Shia
Catfish, DFO sux balls

lol just because you cant play it doesnt mean it sucks...


lolshia


Inside jokes are so much better, arent they?

That's why you pee before you leave the house silly.

Wha? Pee?! Really now? If there's no bathroom, use the bush! =P

Shia, you are now my favorite user on the forums. And the bane of my animosity, the subject of every fibre of my waking being's discontent.

Quoted for truth.

Constant advertising of this poem on CR has made it fail.

It'll never be fail.

Shia is teh awesome..

Awesome poem is awesome. That is all.

Uh...awesome, I guess.........

its epic... and now i gotta pee

lmao funniest poem I've ever read xD

<3 the ending

Whats really funny is how only about 8 people get the inside joke XD

People not getting the inside joke is the bane of my animosity, the subject of every fiber within my being's discontent.

So now Catcher needs to do one or we'll have beaten him at his own thing.

You're jealous of my awesome poem.