Being Hunted

BigLundi · 2012-02-19T04:52:17-01:00

[I've never written a story in my life, so...this is gonna suck. Just sayin.] [Edit: It has been suggested via pm that I make a quick note here that this is a femdom story, all those turned off by aggressive females, this won't be for you. All those not, try to enjoy. Also, the female in question is not human. Not a beast either, more a cross between what a shark and a woman would look like, ideally. Curvaceous body, ribbed ridges instead of eyebrows, and portrusions on her back...Just a warning is all >.>] At least 3 days had gone by without any sleep when Joseph found a small, out of the way motel on the side of the road. If he didn't stop now, he'd be too tired to keep running. Joseph pulled over to the side of the road and sighed, reflecting on what he had been going through. It had been three months since the discovery of the Fae creatures. The Fae exemplified all of the myths associated with them: Beautiful, powerful, though fiercely territorial, and unkind to those viewed as 'lesser races'. The Fae were immortal, and up till now had intended to leave the human race to destroy itself. When they were discovered, they came out publicly and informed everyone of a peaceful plan to coexist with humanity, but wishing not to be pulled into the politics. Humans around the world quickly agreed to this, not knowing much about the Fae, but knowing for certain that they were not to be trifled with, in the very least. However some of these Fae creatures weren't satisfied with this simple coexistence. Some desired a bit more, and this would be why Joseph was running now. Since their coming out to the world, the Fae have in general viewed the human race as inferior, yet interesting. The same way a human might view a dog, the Fae viewed humans. Some Fae desired a human of their own, to be a bond servant. Among the Fae an agreement was reached. They could only take a human to be a bond servant if that human followed them willingly. As a result, individual Fae will take part in 'hunts'. A Fae will choose a human, usually one they've scouted for months on end to be sure it's the one they wanted. They will then approach this human with their offer. Some humans accept, though most say no. Fae have a nasty habit of choosing humans with families, or those with ambition that don't desire servitude. Afterwards a Fae will do everything legally within their power to 'convince' the human to follow them. This can include sabotaging their job using subtle, indirect means, causing their families to leave them using similar methods, or, as is the case with Joseph now, will hunt them, seduce them, and convince them to lay with them. Joseph shook his head, the Fae that was hunting him was rather persistent, though he had no idea if this was common among Fae or if he was just unlucky. He doesn't want to be a bond servant, not to a Fae, not to anyone. Joseph had dreams, aspirations, wants and desires, none of which could happen if he was bonded. He had been running from the Fae that chose him, though she has caught up with him several times already. He was beginning to think that once chosen, there WAS no escape for a human, as running from a Fae, a creature of magic, that could bend the laws of reality to their whim, was beginning to prove rather futile. Joseph got out of his car and walked over to the entrance to the motel lobby. The person behind the desk smiled as he looked up, "Well hello there mister. What can I do ya fer?" Joseph shook his head and mumbled something akin to the words "I need sleep." the man behind the desk nodded and gave Joseph a set of keys, charging him for them and telling him to have a wonderful night's sleep. Joseph mumbled his thanks as he looked at the room number on his keys. He made his way to the second floor of the motel and found his room, "204." he whispered to himself as he looked at the numbers on front of the door. He unlocked the door and stepped in, only to heart sink as he viewed the inside. The Fae that had been chasing him was sitting on his bed, smiling at him with a knowing look, "It took you long enough, my love..." she said. Joseph knew he couldn't escape, not now. He needed rest. He'd just need to endure her for now. However she wasn't making it easy for him. The Fae's name was Claudisia, though Joseph preferred not to know this. The less he could think of her as an individual, and just another Fae creature, the easier it was to resist her. She was dressed in simple garb: jeans, a white t-shirt, and sandals. When she stood up from his bed, she flipped her long dark hair from under her shirt and let it tumble out from all sides as she walked over to him, "...Miss me?" she whispered, her voice low, raspy, and dripping with what sounded like hunger and lust mixed together. [I'll post Part 2 tomorrow]

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SamRavster

12 years ago

[font=verdana][color=green]Maybe you might find it more apt to continue writing your other story than re-write this one. If you just re-write this one, it's still going to be too similar to regard it truly as your own.

BigLundi

12 years ago

I suppose. Anything I write is going to smell too much like the original no matter what I do. I'm a bit sick atm, so I don't know when I'll be able to start writing again...but I really want to redeem myself.

SamRavster

12 years ago

[font=verdana][color=green]Yeah, that's true. But, in all honesty, the concept of a woman capturing a man isn't exactly rare. I've read many in my time, and I can guarantee that they near enough revolve around the same pattern. So, using the idea isn't that bad, but just change what happens and that - as well as change the character design.

I await your new story, at any rate. I can tell that you are a good writer from what the first installment does at the beginning. That was entirely different, yet still flowed naturally and coherently.

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