[Contest entry 2011] Lost Christmas

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Already looking forward to the continuation of this story on 2012.
Great work

Honestly speaking, this is pretty damn epic. The creation of an entire new world, while providing a backstory of what happened to Earth is what just happened here. While I don't think this is great as a oneshot (I guess?), I REALLY REALLY want to read the rest of this. I feel as if this could turn into a long running series easily!

Worldbuilding is always nice to see.

Actually, this is quite long series, I just haven't published anything yet. And I agree that this isn't great as oneshot so I wasn't that surprised I didn't really get votes :)

I've been creating this story and worlds for over 3 years now, and Lost Christmas happens quite late in this universe, and it may be the last story in Gaia. Most of the stuff actually happens before Earth in the same planet as this, but it gets destroyed and then recreated when they destroy Earth. I like creating massive things, I just don't know when to stop, so it was really hard to do this with only 1500 words :) Whole story covers about 5000 years of time, with four planets, three that are before Earth but get destroyed eventually in pursuit of utopia, perfect land where there are no wars, suffering or anything like that. This Lost Christmas or Earths destruction aren't nearly the biggest things in my story, with massive war, in early days of Gaia, between humans, Gods, Lord of time, the Creator of all things, Death and lord knows what else :)

Might post some of my stuff here sometime in the future and also continue Lost Christmas.