[Contest Entry] The Great Hentai Heist

I thought this was great. Hilariously great. Like epic movie great, especially with the ending so purposely abrupt to fit in a nice bit of delicious lemon. A for America, president Cleveland.

You sir are as noble as the noble gas of your name.

ditto
^_^

While my own tastes lean towards the sheer-utter-random craziness of the entries of Ishihara and Longevity, I must say this was also thoroughly entertaining and funny. Also, it definitely keeps you on the edge of your seat, wondering what happens next, and how it will end.

That's why I tried to make this one more writing oriented, as opposed to my Fakku-day song which I just did for teh lulz.

i would have to remind myself to give a +rep for you tomorrow. IOU in the meantime. nice reference to momoka, one of the best i've read so far.

Thanks, it's the first complete story I've ever written, so it's always a delight to get a good review.

Like the imagery in the begining. The lemony part was...interesting to say the least. You get 1 rep point. YAY!

interesting in a bad way or in a good way? I can't tell.

+rep paid. :) happy new year and here's to hoping for a future in writing!