deal *poem*
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deal the poison king a solid hand
a fair take in this forgotten game
dealers tricks, dealers game.
stack the deck
deal the poison king a poison hand
let the game begin
so what do ya think of my poem?
a fair take in this forgotten game
dealers tricks, dealers game.
stack the deck
deal the poison king a poison hand
let the game begin
so what do ya think of my poem?
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I liked it. There could be more description or text added to it and there could have been some type of format, but it was enjoyable. Something short and pleasant. It's nice.
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Eye for an eye, embodiment of the rules in the jungle. Well written, buddy.
Welcome to da jungle =)
Welcome to da jungle =)
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Nora Natsu wrote...
meh this was just something i scribbled up lolThis poem reminds me of Rocky Balboa's stories.
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high_time wrote...
Nora Natsu wrote...
meh this was just something i scribbled up lolThis poem reminds me of Rocky Balboa's stories.
XD lol its mostly about how the world deals you shit hands in life some times like when things just go bad no matter what you do but you always have to play threw it
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I ain't an arts student... so I can only appreciate it at the face value(sorry). Good stuff though, you're high school english marks is probably 1.5x mine.
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Nora Natsu wrote...
high_time wrote...
Nora Natsu wrote...
meh this was just something i scribbled up lolThis poem reminds me of Rocky Balboa's stories.
XD lol its mostly about how the world deals you shit hands in life some times like when things just go bad no matter what you do but you always have to play threw it
Rbz's avi shows it really well