FFT Novelized

http://amethystl.deviantart.com/art/What-I-m-working-on-120946094

I haven't gotten much in feedback, so I ask you guys. It's not fully complete, but... I'm working on it. xD

So... critique or what you liked, hate, all the good stuff...

Oh yeah, it's basically a novelized version of the game, Final Fantasy Tactics. So, if you haven't played the game, it's all good. xD

Here for complete chapter.
https://www.fakku.net/viewtopic.php?t=19766

i found the story good and you also used the lines they used in the game is as if you where playing the game while writing your story unless you remember or wrote down what exactly they said

Yeah... I'm playing the game while writing the story while youtubing while looking at the script. Fun fun~