From Darkness to light
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From Darkness to Light
I look over at my imouto. Toyo-chan is nervously clinging to my cloak as we make our way through the misty gloom of Devil’s Forest. Her hazelnut brown pigtails are swishing from side to side as we quietly move through the forest. We don’t want to alert in creatures in Devil’s Forest. Even I, with my formal training in swordsmanship, may not be able to defeat an ogre.
We are on our way to the holy village, an outlying village of the Empire, un-enterable without permission from the village priest due to the many holy wards surrounding it. We’ve been on the run for 3 months now, my sister and I. My father, the lord of our old city, decided it was time to speak out against the corrupt practices of the Empire. He even went so far as to call the emperor a “vile, disgusting old man, who lives for nothing but money, sexual gratification, and power.” That was the last speech our father ever made. That night, as we were lying down to go to sleep an entire regiment from the imperial army, reinforced by their new ogre allies, invaded the city, raping every woman and killing every man. I watched in horror, my sister’s face buried in my chest, as my father was decapitated by an ogre. I remember the ogre turning to look at us. I remember the look of malice that permeated his visage. The next thing I remember is the ogre’s head rolling as his body crumpled to the floor. Siegfried, our father’s bodyguard and also my mentor, was standing behind it, his sword drawn and dripping with purple ogre blood. He told us to run. To run to the holy village and tell the high priest our story. There we would be safe, he said. He was going to hold off the invaders as long as possible. I scooped my sobbing sister up in my arms and ran. I remember running faster than I had ever run. The screams and clashing of sword upon sword were everywhere. I had finally made it to one of the many secret exits hidden in the castle. I had picked up the emergency set of traveling clothes and the sword stowed in the secret passage. With our parents, and pretty much everyone else we knew dead,we left, and never looked back.
Looking at my sister’s face, I can tell she’s terrified of this place.
“Hey, look at it this way.” I say “At least you won’t be the one fighting if something does decide to attack us. Don’t worry, if something has a big enough death wish to attack us, I’ll kill it. I can’t let anyone hurt my imouto.” I finish, flashing my sister a confident grin.
She looks back at me with nervous dark-violet eyes. “When will we get out of this place? It’s s-s-so scary and dark.”
She’s shaking while she talks and I remember: she hates darkness. The only reason she was able to walk through this near pitch-black place was because she could cling to my cloak.
“Soon” I say. “Less than a day actually. We’re making really good time. Tomorrow when we wake up it should just take five or six hours to get out.
I try to sound optimistic but even she knows we’re making horrible time. We hadn’t been attacked since before we entered the forest but we did get separated for nearly two days when she let go of my cloak once. The damned mists in this forest are so thick that you can only see about a meter in front of you. It also distorts sound. It was a miracle that I finally found her. She was lying in the fetal position, silently crying her eyes out. She was hungry but unharmed. There’s no telling what would have happened if one of those filthy ogres had found her before I did. She hasn’t let go of my cloak since, even while she’s sleeping. I wish we could travel at night as well but we have to hide instead. Way worse creatures than the ogres appear at night.
I continue “After we get out of here, we should be able to *SNAP*!
I immediately draw my broadsword. “Show yourself you bastard!” I yell a challenge at my opponent. The creatures of this forest have excellent night vision and can also see right through the mist so there’s no point in hoping it didn’t see us.
Light from a torch suddenly pushes back the darkness. Holding the torch is an ogre. I can see that aside from a mace attached to his loincloth he’s wearing no weapons.
Ogres are huge, usually upwards of two and a half meters tall and weighing as much as 280 kilos. This one is gigantic.
His red eyes glare past me through the torchlight as he directs a malicious smile at my sister who is staring horrified at the growing lump under the ogre’s loincloth. As he sizes her up his member grows larger and larger. When his penis is fully erect, it is stick ing way out of the loincloth and stands a full two feet long. I think Toyo-chan may pass out.
He turns his attention to me. “You know” he bellows in a deep voice, “I really don’t feel like fighting today. Why don’t you leave and give me your little friend. I’ll let you go if you do.”
My anger is a supernova now. I can barely contain myself. No one is EVER going to have their way with my imouto. I’m going to make sure this son of a bitch dies a slow and painful death.
“Fuck off! Like I’d ever let you have my sister!” I have my sword in a guard position now.
Toyo is behind me now. She’s been through so much in her short life. Our mother was raped before her very eyes and she heard my father’s head hit the floor as she sobbed into my chest. She’s seen more people killed than most imperial soldiers. Now this ogre is trying to rape her. I wish I could take these things away; throw them all in a box and burn it. But I can’t. The only thing I can do is make sure those things never happen to her.
“AHHHHHH!!!” I charge the ogre at a full run, my sword pointing forward by my right side.
*SHLICK!* The ogre’s penis makes a revolting sound as I detach it with my sword.
“GAAAAAHHHHH!!!” The ogre lets out a cry of excruciating pain and falls to his hands and knees, droping his still-burning torch to the ground, his severed penis twitching on the ground beside him. He won’t be standing up for a while. I approach the ogre and ready my sword for the kill.
“Wh-what’ll you do… now? P-Please. Have mercy on me.” the ogre gasps as he bleeds out through the stump of his penis.
“You threaten a young girl.” I accuse. “What’s more, you threaten her with rape. Furthermore, that young girl happens to be my imouto. She is the only person left in this world that I love and as long as I live, neither you shit-faced ogres nor that damned empire will ever lay a single finger on her! I’ll protect her until I’m dead!” With those final words my sword comes down on the ogre’s neck decapitating him.
Toyo-chan comes half running, half stumbling to me in the torchlight. I receive her embrace and she stops crying. She looks up into my eyes with a huge smile on her face. I could almost see my reflection in her deep red irises.
“Onii-chan, you saved me.” She whispers.
“You don’t have to be quiet anymore.” I reply. “The ogres are the strongest daylight creatures in this forest. I wasn’t sure if I could kill one but now that I know I can we should be okay if something else attacks us. I think that one had been stalking us for some time in order to size us up. That’s why nothing else jumped us.”
“Then can I say something kinda loud?” I wonder what she wants to say?
“Sure, go ahead. Just don’t go overboard.”
Toyo-chan takes a deep breath “ ONII-CHAN! I WAS SO SCARED! HE WAS GOING TO PUT THAT THING INSIDE ME! YOU SAVED ME! I LOVE YOU ONII-CHAN! I LOVE YOU!”
I let this go on for a few minutes mainly because her ecstatic facial expression was so cute.
“AND THEN YOU CUT OFF HIS-“
“Ok ok, we need to get going. I want to make good use of that torch before it burns out.”
Toyo-chan quiets down and I manage to pry myself out of her hug and go pick up the burning torch.
“Are you ready to set out?” I ask in an upbeat tone.
“Let’s go!” She answers equally as happily.
We start back down the forest trail, our way now lit by the torch. I’m not sure what’s cheered her up more, this torch or the newfound knowledge that I can kill almost anything that approaches us.
“Hey, Onii-chan?”
“Yeah?”
“If you could kill those ogres, why couldn’t the town guards?”
That is a really good question. Count on my imouto to always ask a question I can’t answer.
“I’m not sure, really.” I reply. “I guess it’s because there were so many attacking the city.”
“That can’t be the only reason though. You moved really fast. Faster than I’ve seen anyone move. EVER.”
That’s interesting. If it’s like that she can’t be exaggerating.
“I guess we’ll just have to ask a priest about it when we reach the holy village now won’t we?”
“Yep!” She smiles and nods to me.
Just then I see something in the mist a little down the trail. It’s a silhouette of a girl about Toyo’s size. She has long hair and is walking away from us. I squint to try to get a better view.
“What is it Onii-chan?”
“I think I see a girl in the mist.”
“It’s dangerous out here! Who knows what that nasty ogre would have done to me if you hadn’t killed it!?”
Unfortunately I know exactly what he would have done to her and, considering that, I have no choice but to go after the girl. She needs protection. I grab Toyo’s hand.
“Come on. We have to help her. She could be killed, kidnapped or even eaten.”
We run after the girl. I can think I can make out the entrance of a cave in the distance. Oh no. Don’t tell me that’s where she’s going. There’s no telling what horrid creatures might live in there. The caves of Devil’s Forest are where the night creatures retreat to during the daytime. Even though very little sunlight exists here during daylight hours, it’s still enough to cause them harm.
The girl’s silhouette goes into the cave only about twenty seconds before we reach her. Even with that small time difference we’re too late.
"HYAAAA!!!"A scream echoes out from the cave.
End Chapter One.
I look over at my imouto. Toyo-chan is nervously clinging to my cloak as we make our way through the misty gloom of Devil’s Forest. Her hazelnut brown pigtails are swishing from side to side as we quietly move through the forest. We don’t want to alert in creatures in Devil’s Forest. Even I, with my formal training in swordsmanship, may not be able to defeat an ogre.
We are on our way to the holy village, an outlying village of the Empire, un-enterable without permission from the village priest due to the many holy wards surrounding it. We’ve been on the run for 3 months now, my sister and I. My father, the lord of our old city, decided it was time to speak out against the corrupt practices of the Empire. He even went so far as to call the emperor a “vile, disgusting old man, who lives for nothing but money, sexual gratification, and power.” That was the last speech our father ever made. That night, as we were lying down to go to sleep an entire regiment from the imperial army, reinforced by their new ogre allies, invaded the city, raping every woman and killing every man. I watched in horror, my sister’s face buried in my chest, as my father was decapitated by an ogre. I remember the ogre turning to look at us. I remember the look of malice that permeated his visage. The next thing I remember is the ogre’s head rolling as his body crumpled to the floor. Siegfried, our father’s bodyguard and also my mentor, was standing behind it, his sword drawn and dripping with purple ogre blood. He told us to run. To run to the holy village and tell the high priest our story. There we would be safe, he said. He was going to hold off the invaders as long as possible. I scooped my sobbing sister up in my arms and ran. I remember running faster than I had ever run. The screams and clashing of sword upon sword were everywhere. I had finally made it to one of the many secret exits hidden in the castle. I had picked up the emergency set of traveling clothes and the sword stowed in the secret passage. With our parents, and pretty much everyone else we knew dead,we left, and never looked back.
Looking at my sister’s face, I can tell she’s terrified of this place.
“Hey, look at it this way.” I say “At least you won’t be the one fighting if something does decide to attack us. Don’t worry, if something has a big enough death wish to attack us, I’ll kill it. I can’t let anyone hurt my imouto.” I finish, flashing my sister a confident grin.
She looks back at me with nervous dark-violet eyes. “When will we get out of this place? It’s s-s-so scary and dark.”
She’s shaking while she talks and I remember: she hates darkness. The only reason she was able to walk through this near pitch-black place was because she could cling to my cloak.
“Soon” I say. “Less than a day actually. We’re making really good time. Tomorrow when we wake up it should just take five or six hours to get out.
I try to sound optimistic but even she knows we’re making horrible time. We hadn’t been attacked since before we entered the forest but we did get separated for nearly two days when she let go of my cloak once. The damned mists in this forest are so thick that you can only see about a meter in front of you. It also distorts sound. It was a miracle that I finally found her. She was lying in the fetal position, silently crying her eyes out. She was hungry but unharmed. There’s no telling what would have happened if one of those filthy ogres had found her before I did. She hasn’t let go of my cloak since, even while she’s sleeping. I wish we could travel at night as well but we have to hide instead. Way worse creatures than the ogres appear at night.
I continue “After we get out of here, we should be able to *SNAP*!
I immediately draw my broadsword. “Show yourself you bastard!” I yell a challenge at my opponent. The creatures of this forest have excellent night vision and can also see right through the mist so there’s no point in hoping it didn’t see us.
Light from a torch suddenly pushes back the darkness. Holding the torch is an ogre. I can see that aside from a mace attached to his loincloth he’s wearing no weapons.
Ogres are huge, usually upwards of two and a half meters tall and weighing as much as 280 kilos. This one is gigantic.
His red eyes glare past me through the torchlight as he directs a malicious smile at my sister who is staring horrified at the growing lump under the ogre’s loincloth. As he sizes her up his member grows larger and larger. When his penis is fully erect, it is stick ing way out of the loincloth and stands a full two feet long. I think Toyo-chan may pass out.
He turns his attention to me. “You know” he bellows in a deep voice, “I really don’t feel like fighting today. Why don’t you leave and give me your little friend. I’ll let you go if you do.”
My anger is a supernova now. I can barely contain myself. No one is EVER going to have their way with my imouto. I’m going to make sure this son of a bitch dies a slow and painful death.
“Fuck off! Like I’d ever let you have my sister!” I have my sword in a guard position now.
Toyo is behind me now. She’s been through so much in her short life. Our mother was raped before her very eyes and she heard my father’s head hit the floor as she sobbed into my chest. She’s seen more people killed than most imperial soldiers. Now this ogre is trying to rape her. I wish I could take these things away; throw them all in a box and burn it. But I can’t. The only thing I can do is make sure those things never happen to her.
“AHHHHHH!!!” I charge the ogre at a full run, my sword pointing forward by my right side.
*SHLICK!* The ogre’s penis makes a revolting sound as I detach it with my sword.
“GAAAAAHHHHH!!!” The ogre lets out a cry of excruciating pain and falls to his hands and knees, droping his still-burning torch to the ground, his severed penis twitching on the ground beside him. He won’t be standing up for a while. I approach the ogre and ready my sword for the kill.
“Wh-what’ll you do… now? P-Please. Have mercy on me.” the ogre gasps as he bleeds out through the stump of his penis.
“You threaten a young girl.” I accuse. “What’s more, you threaten her with rape. Furthermore, that young girl happens to be my imouto. She is the only person left in this world that I love and as long as I live, neither you shit-faced ogres nor that damned empire will ever lay a single finger on her! I’ll protect her until I’m dead!” With those final words my sword comes down on the ogre’s neck decapitating him.
Toyo-chan comes half running, half stumbling to me in the torchlight. I receive her embrace and she stops crying. She looks up into my eyes with a huge smile on her face. I could almost see my reflection in her deep red irises.
“Onii-chan, you saved me.” She whispers.
“You don’t have to be quiet anymore.” I reply. “The ogres are the strongest daylight creatures in this forest. I wasn’t sure if I could kill one but now that I know I can we should be okay if something else attacks us. I think that one had been stalking us for some time in order to size us up. That’s why nothing else jumped us.”
“Then can I say something kinda loud?” I wonder what she wants to say?
“Sure, go ahead. Just don’t go overboard.”
Toyo-chan takes a deep breath “ ONII-CHAN! I WAS SO SCARED! HE WAS GOING TO PUT THAT THING INSIDE ME! YOU SAVED ME! I LOVE YOU ONII-CHAN! I LOVE YOU!”
I let this go on for a few minutes mainly because her ecstatic facial expression was so cute.
“AND THEN YOU CUT OFF HIS-“
“Ok ok, we need to get going. I want to make good use of that torch before it burns out.”
Toyo-chan quiets down and I manage to pry myself out of her hug and go pick up the burning torch.
“Are you ready to set out?” I ask in an upbeat tone.
“Let’s go!” She answers equally as happily.
We start back down the forest trail, our way now lit by the torch. I’m not sure what’s cheered her up more, this torch or the newfound knowledge that I can kill almost anything that approaches us.
“Hey, Onii-chan?”
“Yeah?”
“If you could kill those ogres, why couldn’t the town guards?”
That is a really good question. Count on my imouto to always ask a question I can’t answer.
“I’m not sure, really.” I reply. “I guess it’s because there were so many attacking the city.”
“That can’t be the only reason though. You moved really fast. Faster than I’ve seen anyone move. EVER.”
That’s interesting. If it’s like that she can’t be exaggerating.
“I guess we’ll just have to ask a priest about it when we reach the holy village now won’t we?”
“Yep!” She smiles and nods to me.
Just then I see something in the mist a little down the trail. It’s a silhouette of a girl about Toyo’s size. She has long hair and is walking away from us. I squint to try to get a better view.
“What is it Onii-chan?”
“I think I see a girl in the mist.”
“It’s dangerous out here! Who knows what that nasty ogre would have done to me if you hadn’t killed it!?”
Unfortunately I know exactly what he would have done to her and, considering that, I have no choice but to go after the girl. She needs protection. I grab Toyo’s hand.
“Come on. We have to help her. She could be killed, kidnapped or even eaten.”
We run after the girl. I can think I can make out the entrance of a cave in the distance. Oh no. Don’t tell me that’s where she’s going. There’s no telling what horrid creatures might live in there. The caves of Devil’s Forest are where the night creatures retreat to during the daytime. Even though very little sunlight exists here during daylight hours, it’s still enough to cause them harm.
The girl’s silhouette goes into the cave only about twenty seconds before we reach her. Even with that small time difference we’re too late.
"HYAAAA!!!"A scream echoes out from the cave.
End Chapter One.
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Chapter Two
That ear piercing scream. There must be a night creature in that cave after all.
“Let’s go!” I say this frantically while dragging my sister along. If I leave you hear I won’t be able to protect you. If it looks like I’m going to lose don’t hesitate: take the girl and run! Do you understand!?”
“Y-yes! I understand!” her reply was somewhat panicked. She must be dreading the possibility of losing her last family member. I can’t allow that to happen. It would break her. If I were to die Toyo-chan would have a mental breakdown. Anyone would be able to have their way with her. For her sake I must survive.
We tear through the cave at a full sprint. I dropped the torch somewhere back towards the entrance but our way is lit by some sort of brightly glowing moss. The screams are growing louder. We must be getting close to the source.
We finally emerge in a huge antechamber and the stench of the place makes me gasp for air. This smell is so vile Toyo actually passes out. I steel myself against the stench and go further into the antechamber. A huge pile of rotting ogre corpses lies in the middle of the place, emitting that amazing smell. Wonderful. This thing has killed dozens of ogres. I so have a chance.
*Schlup schlup schlup* I can hear some sort of noise coming from one of the far corners. It’s a rhythmic sound, almost like someone soaped up their hands and was squishing them together.
I look over at the corner, and am utterly repulsed and enraged by what I find. There’s a huge, naked Cyclops, almost 4 meters tall, suspending a small nude girl in the air on the end of his penis, balancing her in place by holding her arms. A pure white robe lay at his feet. The sound I heard is the sound of his cock repeatedly prodding her dripping wet slit. Her small frame is dwarfed by his. The coldness of the cave has made the pink nipples of her small, underdeveloped breasts stand completely erect. She looks to be about the same age as Toyo. The girl has stopped screaming now, probably thinking no one will hear her. Unfortunately for me I did hear you and I did find you. But I’m not sure if I should get involved. This could be dangerous for Toyo.
The girl’s flowing white hair hangs in her eyes as she bows her head and braces for what she knows is about to come.
“P-Please. Don’t hurt me.” She barely chokes out her words through her tears, each sob making her tiny frame shudder.
The Cyclops’ laughter booms through the cave “Hahahahaha! I’m gonna turn your asshole inside out!”
“NO!” The girls’ amber colored eyes grow wide as the beast begins to shove his two foot long cock into her unused asshole. “IT’S NOT GOING TO FIT! IT CAN’T FIT! NO!”
Shit. I want to help her but I’m not sure I could beat this guy. What if I lose and he gets Toyo-chan.
“PLEASE STOP! I’M BEGGING YOU! AHHHHHHGHHHHH!!!” She lets out an ear shattering scream as the cyclops rams his massive dick to the hilt into her now slightly torn ass. “NO!NO!NO!” He begins to move her up and down rapidly, his dick making a grotesque bulge on her stomach every time he moves. The girl’s eyes roll back into her head as the shock and pain take over.
“Heheheh. Time to cum in that cute little ass of yours!”
“NO! PLEASE DON’T I’M BEGGING YOU!” The girl is pleading now, her now defiled, pale-white ass hitting the cyclops’ hilt faster and faster.
“Hahaha! Here it…CUMS!” the Cyclops jam his dick as far up her butt as it will possibly go and unleashes his load.
“AHHHHH!AH!AH!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! IT’S SO HOT!” The Cyclops continues to ejaculate in the girl’s tiny ass for several seconds.
“Hnngh!” The Cyclops grunts as he pulls her off of his massive dick and ejaculates a second time, this time covering the shivering, barely conscious girl in semen. He tosses the girl to the ground, semen still gushing out of her stretched, bleeding asshole. She’s too out of it to make a sound when she hits.
“Hey. You there. Did you enjoy the show?” It takes me a moment to realize the Cyclops was talking to me.
Fuck! I should have taken Toyo and run when I had the chance! I’m not sure why I didn’t run while he was raping the girl. I guess I felt like I couldn’t leave her to this fate. After all, she could be someone’s imouto.
The cyclops’ cock is still twitching and spurting out minor amounts of cum as he speaks to me.
“Ha! I’m ready to go again. I think I’ll kill you and take the little girlie you brought if you aren’t going to say anything! I could teach her how to be a woman.”
“You knew we were here the whole time. How?”
“We Cyclops have ultrasensitive senses of smell. I smelled both of you when you came in the cave. I was enjoying the smell of my rotting ogres when you two and your foul stenches interrupted it. I’m guessing you’ve had a good time so far though. You got to watch that girl get her asshole ruined by my dick. You didn’t even try to stop me!”
The Cyclops walks behind a nearby boulder and comes back with a spiked mace as tall as me.
I’m not sure if I can take this guy, but, then again, I don’t really have a choice at this point.
The Cyclops grins hungrily; probably think of devouring my imouto’s special place. I can’t allow that to happen. No matter how bad this fight seems, I can’t bear the thought of my little sister being raped, especially not by that dickhead.
I draw my sword, “AHHHHHH!” and charge, knowing that it’s completely futile.
“Gwahahahaha! You’re going to kill me!? How entertaining!” The Cyclops comes at me with a surprising amount of speed for something his size.
***
When I wake up I find myself in a cave lit by bioluminescent moss.
“Where the hell am I?”
“You are in the Cyclops’ cave.” A soft voice replies. “Your sister will be ok. She woke up earlier but she fell asleep while we were watching over you. She is your sister, isn’t she?”
Suddenly everything rushes back to me in a wave of memories.
I look over to where the voice came from and see the white-haired girl from before, now wearing the white robe, sitting by an unconscious Toyo-chan.
What’s going on here? Why am I alive? Did that bastard capture us?
I stand up and try to get a bearing on what happened. “Yes. Yes she is.”
Looking around, I see a very large Cyclops lying sliced clean in half on the ground. I check myself for any wounds I might have sustained in the fight, no matter how minor. I’m dumbfounded when I don’t find any.
There’s no way I killed this thing is there? I didn’t stand a chance. I wonder if that girl knows.
“Do you know what happened here?” I ask, walking over to the sitting girl.
She looks up at me and begins to tremble.
“I remember that monster doing horrible, horrible things to me.” She’s quietly crying now. “I can’t remember anything th-that happened after the f-first seconds though.”
“What’s your name?” I ask as I take off my cloak, sit down beside her, and wrap it around her shoulders.
“Sayaka.” She replies.
“Sayaka, I’m deeply sorry I didn’t help you earlier. I don’t expect you to forgive me but… I can’t tell you how sorry I am that I let that happen to you.” I couldn’t even look at her now. I put my head face down on my knees out of shame. “But… I couldn’t risk losing… my imouto… by fighting someone I shouldn’t have had a chance of beating. I-”
“It’s ok. I forgive you.” She’s stopped crying now and cuts me off.
I raise my head and meet her gaze. Her large, emerald eyes, still look infinitely deep in the light of the moss. She smiles softly, warmly.
“What did you say?” Did she just forgive me? Why?
“I said that I forgive you. It was my fault you came to this cave in the first place. You were trying to protect your little sister as well. That was reason enough to do nothing. My… My b-brother… would have done the same thing.” I can tell she’s holding back tears.
“Your brother sounds like a good guy.” That’s the only thing I can think to say.
“He was great.” She has a far off look in her eyes as she stares into the darkness at some now-distant memory. “He was killed recently. One of the five Demonic Knights was tracking us; the weakest actually: Ismorthan. Are you familiar with the Demonic Knights?” She’s looking at me inquisitively.
I tell her what I know. “The Demonic Knights,” I begin, “Are a group of five demon blade masters who serve only the emperor and do his dirty work . Kalathoth, is the most powerful. He is a powerful user of fire magic and is said to be slender and quite handsome. Freythel is Kalathoth’s mistress and lieutenant. She is supposedly very sexually attractive and is a master in the use of water magic. That’s about all I know. I don’t know much about the other three.”
“I know about Ismorthan because he was hunting us.” She explains. “He is a very fat demon with red skin and two stubby horns. As far as I know he has no magic and his sole desires are physical gratification in the form of food and… intercourse. Only one month ago Onii-chan and I were on the way to the port city of Valenthar when we were finally overtaken by him and three mercenaries he had hired. Onii-chan was really powerful, but not even he could fight a Demonic Knight let alone one with three mercenaries. He told me to run. To turn, run, and never look back.” I can hear the burning grief in her voice as she tells the next part. “I did run, and I did turn back. *Sniffle* And the last I ever saw of Onii-chan… was blood spurting from the stump of his neck.”
“If you don’t want to talk about it it’s fine, but why were you guys being hunted by a Demonic Knight?”
“It’s ok. You saved me so you deserve to know.” She smiles sadly. “During the Rupture Wars, my mother was raped and impregnated by a high-ranking demon commander when our village was captured. The Empire retook the village from the demons some time later. By that time, my mother had become noticeably pregnant and somehow the village people started to find out about her story. The villagers were very afraid. They thought that I might be very powerful because of my father. A mob is said to have gathered to burn my mother the day she went into labor. Fortunately, the village priest intervened and, instead of letting the people kill my mother and I, sealed my powers with a complicated spell. But the Empire eventually found out about me. That’s when Ismorthan came and burned the village down.” She has that faraway look in her eyes again; this time tinged with despair. My brother and I ran. We didn’t know where to go. We were just trying to get away. Everyone we knew died that day.”Her voice trembles as she says the last part. “With Kojiro’s death… everyone I knew has been killed.” Sayaka begins softly crying to herself.
Still crying, she buries her head in my chest and hugs me. I try to comfort her.
“You can travel with us if you want. We’re going to the holy city. Not many people aside from the higher ups in the Empire know about it.” She’s looking up at me now, hope filling her deep green eyes. “It’s a place surrounded by magical wards that not even the Empire can touch. We’ll be safe there. We can all start a new life together.” I finish.
She smiles and her face immediately brightens.
“Will you really let me go with you?”
“I don’t see a reason not to. I’ll talk to Tomoyo in the morning but I already know she’ll say yes.”
She seems somewhat hesitant about the next part.
“If I can go… will you…can you… would you… be my new Onii-chan?” Her face turns red for some reason.
“I will gladly be your new Onii-chan.” is my sincere reply. Now, we need to get some rest. I’m hoping to be able to get out of this godforsaken forest by tomorrow afternoon.
“Goodnight then, Onii-chan.”
“Goodnight, Saya-chan.”
With that my newly adopted little sister snuggles up to me and we fall asleep. I wonder what Toyo-chan would say if she saw this?
End Chapter 2
OK. I need some feedback. I’ve always been kinda weak in the dialogue area. Is the dialogue convincing and understandable/followable?
That ear piercing scream. There must be a night creature in that cave after all.
“Let’s go!” I say this frantically while dragging my sister along. If I leave you hear I won’t be able to protect you. If it looks like I’m going to lose don’t hesitate: take the girl and run! Do you understand!?”
“Y-yes! I understand!” her reply was somewhat panicked. She must be dreading the possibility of losing her last family member. I can’t allow that to happen. It would break her. If I were to die Toyo-chan would have a mental breakdown. Anyone would be able to have their way with her. For her sake I must survive.
We tear through the cave at a full sprint. I dropped the torch somewhere back towards the entrance but our way is lit by some sort of brightly glowing moss. The screams are growing louder. We must be getting close to the source.
We finally emerge in a huge antechamber and the stench of the place makes me gasp for air. This smell is so vile Toyo actually passes out. I steel myself against the stench and go further into the antechamber. A huge pile of rotting ogre corpses lies in the middle of the place, emitting that amazing smell. Wonderful. This thing has killed dozens of ogres. I so have a chance.
*Schlup schlup schlup* I can hear some sort of noise coming from one of the far corners. It’s a rhythmic sound, almost like someone soaped up their hands and was squishing them together.
I look over at the corner, and am utterly repulsed and enraged by what I find. There’s a huge, naked Cyclops, almost 4 meters tall, suspending a small nude girl in the air on the end of his penis, balancing her in place by holding her arms. A pure white robe lay at his feet. The sound I heard is the sound of his cock repeatedly prodding her dripping wet slit. Her small frame is dwarfed by his. The coldness of the cave has made the pink nipples of her small, underdeveloped breasts stand completely erect. She looks to be about the same age as Toyo. The girl has stopped screaming now, probably thinking no one will hear her. Unfortunately for me I did hear you and I did find you. But I’m not sure if I should get involved. This could be dangerous for Toyo.
The girl’s flowing white hair hangs in her eyes as she bows her head and braces for what she knows is about to come.
“P-Please. Don’t hurt me.” She barely chokes out her words through her tears, each sob making her tiny frame shudder.
The Cyclops’ laughter booms through the cave “Hahahahaha! I’m gonna turn your asshole inside out!”
“NO!” The girls’ amber colored eyes grow wide as the beast begins to shove his two foot long cock into her unused asshole. “IT’S NOT GOING TO FIT! IT CAN’T FIT! NO!”
Shit. I want to help her but I’m not sure I could beat this guy. What if I lose and he gets Toyo-chan.
“PLEASE STOP! I’M BEGGING YOU! AHHHHHHGHHHHH!!!” She lets out an ear shattering scream as the cyclops rams his massive dick to the hilt into her now slightly torn ass. “NO!NO!NO!” He begins to move her up and down rapidly, his dick making a grotesque bulge on her stomach every time he moves. The girl’s eyes roll back into her head as the shock and pain take over.
“Heheheh. Time to cum in that cute little ass of yours!”
“NO! PLEASE DON’T I’M BEGGING YOU!” The girl is pleading now, her now defiled, pale-white ass hitting the cyclops’ hilt faster and faster.
“Hahaha! Here it…CUMS!” the Cyclops jam his dick as far up her butt as it will possibly go and unleashes his load.
“AHHHHH!AH!AH!AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! IT’S SO HOT!” The Cyclops continues to ejaculate in the girl’s tiny ass for several seconds.
“Hnngh!” The Cyclops grunts as he pulls her off of his massive dick and ejaculates a second time, this time covering the shivering, barely conscious girl in semen. He tosses the girl to the ground, semen still gushing out of her stretched, bleeding asshole. She’s too out of it to make a sound when she hits.
“Hey. You there. Did you enjoy the show?” It takes me a moment to realize the Cyclops was talking to me.
Fuck! I should have taken Toyo and run when I had the chance! I’m not sure why I didn’t run while he was raping the girl. I guess I felt like I couldn’t leave her to this fate. After all, she could be someone’s imouto.
The cyclops’ cock is still twitching and spurting out minor amounts of cum as he speaks to me.
“Ha! I’m ready to go again. I think I’ll kill you and take the little girlie you brought if you aren’t going to say anything! I could teach her how to be a woman.”
“You knew we were here the whole time. How?”
“We Cyclops have ultrasensitive senses of smell. I smelled both of you when you came in the cave. I was enjoying the smell of my rotting ogres when you two and your foul stenches interrupted it. I’m guessing you’ve had a good time so far though. You got to watch that girl get her asshole ruined by my dick. You didn’t even try to stop me!”
The Cyclops walks behind a nearby boulder and comes back with a spiked mace as tall as me.
I’m not sure if I can take this guy, but, then again, I don’t really have a choice at this point.
The Cyclops grins hungrily; probably think of devouring my imouto’s special place. I can’t allow that to happen. No matter how bad this fight seems, I can’t bear the thought of my little sister being raped, especially not by that dickhead.
I draw my sword, “AHHHHHH!” and charge, knowing that it’s completely futile.
“Gwahahahaha! You’re going to kill me!? How entertaining!” The Cyclops comes at me with a surprising amount of speed for something his size.
***
When I wake up I find myself in a cave lit by bioluminescent moss.
“Where the hell am I?”
“You are in the Cyclops’ cave.” A soft voice replies. “Your sister will be ok. She woke up earlier but she fell asleep while we were watching over you. She is your sister, isn’t she?”
Suddenly everything rushes back to me in a wave of memories.
I look over to where the voice came from and see the white-haired girl from before, now wearing the white robe, sitting by an unconscious Toyo-chan.
What’s going on here? Why am I alive? Did that bastard capture us?
I stand up and try to get a bearing on what happened. “Yes. Yes she is.”
Looking around, I see a very large Cyclops lying sliced clean in half on the ground. I check myself for any wounds I might have sustained in the fight, no matter how minor. I’m dumbfounded when I don’t find any.
There’s no way I killed this thing is there? I didn’t stand a chance. I wonder if that girl knows.
“Do you know what happened here?” I ask, walking over to the sitting girl.
She looks up at me and begins to tremble.
“I remember that monster doing horrible, horrible things to me.” She’s quietly crying now. “I can’t remember anything th-that happened after the f-first seconds though.”
“What’s your name?” I ask as I take off my cloak, sit down beside her, and wrap it around her shoulders.
“Sayaka.” She replies.
“Sayaka, I’m deeply sorry I didn’t help you earlier. I don’t expect you to forgive me but… I can’t tell you how sorry I am that I let that happen to you.” I couldn’t even look at her now. I put my head face down on my knees out of shame. “But… I couldn’t risk losing… my imouto… by fighting someone I shouldn’t have had a chance of beating. I-”
“It’s ok. I forgive you.” She’s stopped crying now and cuts me off.
I raise my head and meet her gaze. Her large, emerald eyes, still look infinitely deep in the light of the moss. She smiles softly, warmly.
“What did you say?” Did she just forgive me? Why?
“I said that I forgive you. It was my fault you came to this cave in the first place. You were trying to protect your little sister as well. That was reason enough to do nothing. My… My b-brother… would have done the same thing.” I can tell she’s holding back tears.
“Your brother sounds like a good guy.” That’s the only thing I can think to say.
“He was great.” She has a far off look in her eyes as she stares into the darkness at some now-distant memory. “He was killed recently. One of the five Demonic Knights was tracking us; the weakest actually: Ismorthan. Are you familiar with the Demonic Knights?” She’s looking at me inquisitively.
I tell her what I know. “The Demonic Knights,” I begin, “Are a group of five demon blade masters who serve only the emperor and do his dirty work . Kalathoth, is the most powerful. He is a powerful user of fire magic and is said to be slender and quite handsome. Freythel is Kalathoth’s mistress and lieutenant. She is supposedly very sexually attractive and is a master in the use of water magic. That’s about all I know. I don’t know much about the other three.”
“I know about Ismorthan because he was hunting us.” She explains. “He is a very fat demon with red skin and two stubby horns. As far as I know he has no magic and his sole desires are physical gratification in the form of food and… intercourse. Only one month ago Onii-chan and I were on the way to the port city of Valenthar when we were finally overtaken by him and three mercenaries he had hired. Onii-chan was really powerful, but not even he could fight a Demonic Knight let alone one with three mercenaries. He told me to run. To turn, run, and never look back.” I can hear the burning grief in her voice as she tells the next part. “I did run, and I did turn back. *Sniffle* And the last I ever saw of Onii-chan… was blood spurting from the stump of his neck.”
“If you don’t want to talk about it it’s fine, but why were you guys being hunted by a Demonic Knight?”
“It’s ok. You saved me so you deserve to know.” She smiles sadly. “During the Rupture Wars, my mother was raped and impregnated by a high-ranking demon commander when our village was captured. The Empire retook the village from the demons some time later. By that time, my mother had become noticeably pregnant and somehow the village people started to find out about her story. The villagers were very afraid. They thought that I might be very powerful because of my father. A mob is said to have gathered to burn my mother the day she went into labor. Fortunately, the village priest intervened and, instead of letting the people kill my mother and I, sealed my powers with a complicated spell. But the Empire eventually found out about me. That’s when Ismorthan came and burned the village down.” She has that faraway look in her eyes again; this time tinged with despair. My brother and I ran. We didn’t know where to go. We were just trying to get away. Everyone we knew died that day.”Her voice trembles as she says the last part. “With Kojiro’s death… everyone I knew has been killed.” Sayaka begins softly crying to herself.
Still crying, she buries her head in my chest and hugs me. I try to comfort her.
“You can travel with us if you want. We’re going to the holy city. Not many people aside from the higher ups in the Empire know about it.” She’s looking up at me now, hope filling her deep green eyes. “It’s a place surrounded by magical wards that not even the Empire can touch. We’ll be safe there. We can all start a new life together.” I finish.
She smiles and her face immediately brightens.
“Will you really let me go with you?”
“I don’t see a reason not to. I’ll talk to Tomoyo in the morning but I already know she’ll say yes.”
She seems somewhat hesitant about the next part.
“If I can go… will you…can you… would you… be my new Onii-chan?” Her face turns red for some reason.
“I will gladly be your new Onii-chan.” is my sincere reply. Now, we need to get some rest. I’m hoping to be able to get out of this godforsaken forest by tomorrow afternoon.
“Goodnight then, Onii-chan.”
“Goodnight, Saya-chan.”
With that my newly adopted little sister snuggles up to me and we fall asleep. I wonder what Toyo-chan would say if she saw this?
End Chapter 2
OK. I need some feedback. I’ve always been kinda weak in the dialogue area. Is the dialogue convincing and understandable/followable?
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Ok fellow writers, I've decided to revamp the series I was writing called "Boku wa Imouto no Kare" into something different. The revamped version will be about how, even though much darkness may exist in the world, light can be found. Please let me know of any changes/additions I need to make or mistakes I need to correct. If possible, please rate this on a scale of 1-20.
Here are the first two chapters unedited. I know the rape scene in chapter two is kinda rough but as the author I believe it's necessary for the plot development/theme I wish to pursue. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTARY. Any comments at all would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading!
Here are the first two chapters unedited. I know the rape scene in chapter two is kinda rough but as the author I believe it's necessary for the plot development/theme I wish to pursue. PLEASE LEAVE COMMENTARY. Any comments at all would be greatly appreciated. Thanks for reading!