deathgod27 wrote...
was trying to divide it into paragraphs I'm not very good when it comes to grammar spelling(atleast I can type better then I used to)
i tend to focus on story and content then anything else spelling grammar organization often comes secondary usually results in good storys that are hard to read...(to some people atleast)
Maybe it wouldn't bother someone so much if English isn't their first language but for me at least, it was definitely not the easiest thing to read. There is certainly lots of content here, though I'm not sure what make of it. You said it yourself. This a dream you had, and those usually aren't the easiest things to make heads or tails out of.
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
Simply reason: English is not everyone's first language.
Ugh, I keep forgetting that.