[Hentai doujin Script] K-Lover
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It's bad to not express what you think, even it will just became shit. That's what i think.
And here it is, my hentai script(or whatever it is called).
I will make it to be a B-W doujin, if you guys help me in English, story and etc.
I will use 4 character.
1.Male, Taketo. Don't really like sex, busy person, and a serious-like person.
2.Female, Hitomi. Love sex, happy-like person.
3.Male, name later since i hate naming my char. Just like Hitomi.
4.Female, name later. Just like Taketo.
Okay, for now i just can give some of "story explanation".
(CHAPTER 1)
It's a double date, and as usual it's ended at the "love hotel". But the love hotel now is a different one. It's never exist before, let's just say it's a magic love hotel. They entered the hotel, since every hotel is booked or full. They get a neighboring room.
After they enter the room, everything is the same as usual. They go to bath first( which i might not include in the story). Let's just get a scene when the girl is finish bathing.
That's when everything happen, they soul is swaped. Male with male, female with female.
As in the first room that used by 1 and 2(Hitomi and Taketo), they sit at the bed, lean back to the wall.
The second room that used by 3 and 4, the male is sit at the outer side of the bed and the female is still standing in front of mirror.
So in this state, they don't know that both of them is swaped. What they know is the one in front of them is now different.
The one who notice first is Female from the second room(which is now Hitomi), since she stand in front of the mirror. She see herself as the other Female, and then look at the Male.
{The problem here is, this girl(Hitomi) want to have a sex with the other male. And the other male also want to have a sex with Hitomi, but they afraid, since they both already have a girl/boyfriend. Something like that, "moral TWIST". Oh fuck.}
And so, Hitomi decide to do nude herself(throw off her towel) and then try to do a blow job to the male(which is actually Taketo). "How? Is it good, 'the other male'?" Taketo just can look at her silently, thinking of everything happened while she do a blowjob to him, then he decide to say to the girl. "Wait, i'm not 'The other male', i'm Taketo. I think this love hotel have some kind of magic that let my soul exchanged like this..
The girl just can't say anything, until they hear an "AHHH-AHHH-AHHH" sound from the neighboor room. Yeah, in the other room, they not said anything. Just looking the other girl change, the male intended to do a sex as fast as possible.
Taketo then get a little annoyed and want to go out from the room, knowing that her girlfriend is doing that with other person is make him mad. But Hitomi hold her hand and ask "No, it's alright. I'm here". The way she look at Taketo make him silenced.
"I'm Hitomi, looks like it's not only swap your soul, but mine too". Taketo think a little, and then replied "So the fact, you want to make love with 'the other male', right?"
Hitomi startled, "No.. I just... I". But Taketo then kiss her, and...
FUCK-FUCK-FUCK
I still not decide on the ending. lol. But there is possible to do chapter 2 and 3.
2=two male and hitomi.
3=Taketo and two female.
Don't tell me, there is not enough description or something like that(english typo also). I'm not intended to do some writing. I'm just telling the story as possible as i can. I know enough that i'm shit at english and writing. So please, comment on everything instead of that.
You can do objection to the story, I want you all guys to think this as our project, not just mine, so you can say everything you want, regarding the story. That's also why, i won't push myself to hard to think of this story.
After this point about story is clear, we will get the dialogue writen.
And here it is, my hentai script(or whatever it is called).
I will make it to be a B-W doujin, if you guys help me in English, story and etc.
I will use 4 character.
1.Male, Taketo. Don't really like sex, busy person, and a serious-like person.
2.Female, Hitomi. Love sex, happy-like person.
3.Male, name later since i hate naming my char. Just like Hitomi.
4.Female, name later. Just like Taketo.
Okay, for now i just can give some of "story explanation".
(CHAPTER 1)
It's a double date, and as usual it's ended at the "love hotel". But the love hotel now is a different one. It's never exist before, let's just say it's a magic love hotel. They entered the hotel, since every hotel is booked or full. They get a neighboring room.
After they enter the room, everything is the same as usual. They go to bath first( which i might not include in the story). Let's just get a scene when the girl is finish bathing.
That's when everything happen, they soul is swaped. Male with male, female with female.
As in the first room that used by 1 and 2(Hitomi and Taketo), they sit at the bed, lean back to the wall.
The second room that used by 3 and 4, the male is sit at the outer side of the bed and the female is still standing in front of mirror.
So in this state, they don't know that both of them is swaped. What they know is the one in front of them is now different.
The one who notice first is Female from the second room(which is now Hitomi), since she stand in front of the mirror. She see herself as the other Female, and then look at the Male.
{The problem here is, this girl(Hitomi) want to have a sex with the other male. And the other male also want to have a sex with Hitomi, but they afraid, since they both already have a girl/boyfriend. Something like that, "moral TWIST". Oh fuck.}
And so, Hitomi decide to do nude herself(throw off her towel) and then try to do a blow job to the male(which is actually Taketo). "How? Is it good, 'the other male'?" Taketo just can look at her silently, thinking of everything happened while she do a blowjob to him, then he decide to say to the girl. "Wait, i'm not 'The other male', i'm Taketo. I think this love hotel have some kind of magic that let my soul exchanged like this..
The girl just can't say anything, until they hear an "AHHH-AHHH-AHHH" sound from the neighboor room. Yeah, in the other room, they not said anything. Just looking the other girl change, the male intended to do a sex as fast as possible.
Taketo then get a little annoyed and want to go out from the room, knowing that her girlfriend is doing that with other person is make him mad. But Hitomi hold her hand and ask "No, it's alright. I'm here". The way she look at Taketo make him silenced.
"I'm Hitomi, looks like it's not only swap your soul, but mine too". Taketo think a little, and then replied "So the fact, you want to make love with 'the other male', right?"
Hitomi startled, "No.. I just... I". But Taketo then kiss her, and...
FUCK-FUCK-FUCK
I still not decide on the ending. lol. But there is possible to do chapter 2 and 3.
2=two male and hitomi.
3=Taketo and two female.
Don't tell me, there is not enough description or something like that(english typo also). I'm not intended to do some writing. I'm just telling the story as possible as i can. I know enough that i'm shit at english and writing. So please, comment on everything instead of that.
You can do objection to the story, I want you all guys to think this as our project, not just mine, so you can say everything you want, regarding the story. That's also why, i won't push myself to hard to think of this story.
After this point about story is clear, we will get the dialogue writen.
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Hmm.. Found out a title :D
:roll:
Hehe... People might be confuse.
Actual reason i post this, please help me >.>
Help me to make this became a great one.
m(_ _)m
:roll:
Hehe... People might be confuse.
Actual reason i post this, please help me >.>
Help me to make this became a great one.
m(_ _)m
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I thought you stopped doing hentai?
Anyway I'm not good with writing so I hope someone will help you. I'm interested to see how this story will go.
Anyway I'm not good with writing so I hope someone will help you. I'm interested to see how this story will go.
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No, i'm not stop doing hentai.
It's just temporary decision, with some reason.
@ZeriamoftheNight:
Parallel Pleasure sounds good, it will give some reason to Taketo to make sex with Hitomi.
Ah yeah, Temcor. I'm not looking for someone who great with writing, but Idea and advice, and also "English language".
So actually, no skill is alright, we do it together.
And yes, i'm not looking for someone, but everyone.
I will do it in open way, not like before. Everyone will know how the process will go on, i will post everything of the "original" here, and ask everything here. That's how i work now.
It's just temporary decision, with some reason.
@ZeriamoftheNight:
Parallel Pleasure sounds good, it will give some reason to Taketo to make sex with Hitomi.
Ah yeah, Temcor. I'm not looking for someone who great with writing, but Idea and advice, and also "English language".
So actually, no skill is alright, we do it together.
And yes, i'm not looking for someone, but everyone.
I will do it in open way, not like before. Everyone will know how the process will go on, i will post everything of the "original" here, and ask everything here. That's how i work now.
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