Jun's Poetry ( New Poem )

Marry me

JKing

its good, Though I don't go for lovey dovey as much as I used to. But in all its well written and is good.

I can't tell you how to better yourself with this one poem. Try making more poems and putting yourself into them. Only way to get better I suppose.

But in all

Keep writing.

@2nd poem

sounds like your trying to seduce me,

and the fact that I am not gay means it is not work

I hope you realize I am joking

as I said before it is good but for some reason it seems your trying to appease someone (not the right term but lets just stick with that for now and see if it pays off)

But overall "yes, good and we go" (quote from original willy wanka and the chocolate factory)

I was joking Jr, see the number of times I said that.

Anyways

your poetry is honest and true

It was hard to get through the newest poems. Mostly because I was too embarrassed to read it. Not embarrassed for myself but for you. For having written something like that. Though I'm sure we are all adults and it shouldn't be a big deal. Then again things about sex and love tend to be looked down upon by normal non-sexual obsessed individuals, well at least those who aren't open about it.

But honestly they are well written and have a base of meaning. Which is good in poetry.. well at least in all forms of subjective writing. Please continue to write more and I shall continue to read.

omg Jun... i dont know if is me... but they are breathtaking *blush* I'm dead serious... Not a talent? Well.. I never knew you could write like this.. You surprise me once again ><...

I cant wait to read more...

you are right... talent isnt really the right word... well, i just love them. Made me speechless <333

*blush* -nod nod- if you want ~ i would love that..

>////////<

Err...

You know I think your poetry is amazing, baby ❤ ❤

I can feel the passion you put in the words you choose and pictures you paint as if it's directed...at...er...I mean....it's really intense <3

And the night sessions are really sensual. Actually, most of them are really sensual, which I think gives a good description of the type of person you are.

Overall, I think they're very self-reflective and I can't wait to read more.

Great job, JuJu ❤ ❤ ❤

LOLL funny ~~ <333 ><

and i agree with you Pony ~ specially about he gift and connection ^^~

@ Jun: you don't have to ><~ just that you suggest it is already really sweet of you...

And please, no hurries, I'm just really looking forward to it, patiently...

Nice work Onii-chan! You are really talented at writing! ^_^
I hope to se more of this!

Man!!!! I've known you for quite a while now and let me tell you you're writing is awesome!
Trust me if I could slip a few of those in the books a make it would be awesome...and you'd get some profit!
It sucks my publisher doesn't like these kind of stuff.
if I were my publisher....man!!! You'll be a goldmine!

You never stop amazing me Jun, whether you are helping me or giving me ideas to skyrocket my sales! But now writing! You sure are a Jack of all trades!! And a master of lots!! Keep up the good work!!

I love the way you write Juny so honest! that's what writing is about after all!
Writing about what you love!^_^

You seem to be getting a lot of praise from the ladies lol

wow, these poem you wrote are impressive!
I have to salute you bro!

I'm not that impressed by the sexual feel, but the poems are well written. Good job.

Fix'd. You're welcome, mibu <3

I see you're that captivated by the poems. (;

I really like it. The emotions make me feel very... "Tingly"...? Yeah, that works.