little red riding hood the uncut version
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i heard this story from my senile grandpa, he said it was told to him when he was boy in the old country. I fucking love it and i hope you guys too.
A long time ago a little girl was taken away from her mother when she was just a little girl by her evil grandma. Who lived in a castle outside the forest, little girl was put into room where the lock was outside the door. The little girl wanted to see her mother so she cried for seven days till her grandma unlocked the door. "When can I see my mother grandma?" asked the little girl with tears in her eyes. "Here put these on." said the evil grandma handing her iron clothes. "When you can out grow these iron clothes you can go into the forest and see your mother who home sits at the end of two paths. The path of pins and the path of needles." The little girl put on the iron clothes and waited for seven years in the dark room rubbing her back against the wall untill the clothes ripped from her body. She cried at the door "GRANDMA I NO LONGER NEED THESE CLOTHES!" The little girl waited for her evil grandma to come, but she never came. "GRANDMA!" she yelled again, "I WANNA SEE MY MOTHER, AND I’M HUNGRY AND THIRSTY PLEASE GRANDMA!"
She still did not answer her plea, the little girl grabbed a broken piece of her iron clothes and began scratching away at the thick door. For 7 days she scratched away the door until there was hole big enough for her hand to reach through. She unlocked the door suprised to find the key still in the lock. The Little girl left the dark room and headed down the castle stairs. "Grandma where are you?" said the little girl. Yet she still couldn’t find her anywhere in the empty castle. The little girl decided to see her mother now, she no longer needed to wait. She grabbed old tattered red cloak and basket and put loaf of bread and jar of wine in the basket. She never looked back at the castle as she entered the forest.
In the forest the little girl came to the two paths of pins and needles. There a wolf came out, and approached her. "Where are you going little red riding hood?" said the wolf. " To see my mother who I haven’t seen in long time. I don’t even remember all to well." said the little girl. "Thats is sad little red riding hood." said the wolf. "What path are you going to take?" Pins or needles?" "Pins, the path of pins I will take to see my mother." said the girl with smile on her face." The wolf smiled and told her to wear her hood up while walking down the path of pins so others doesn’t see she is human. Then wolf ran down the path of needles and got to her mother’s home before the little girl. The wolf killed her mother and layed down in the bed and waited in the dark house for the little red riding hood.
When she arrived she knocked on the door "Mother it's me your daughter!" "Come in the door is unlocked!" said the wolf laying in wait. The door wouldn’t open still, noticing a small hole next to the door the little girl crawled through it into the home. The room was dark with small window that showed very little sunlight in the house. A fire place sat across the room and the wolf layed on the bed across the room. "Mother I’m hungry!" said the little girl "There is meat in the cabinet help yourself to it my dear." said the wolf. She opened the cabinet and found the meat and began eating it. Suddenly a cat came out and said "STOP! Your eating your mother’s flesh little red riding hood!" The little girl stopped and said, "Mother this cat says I’m eating your flesh!" "Throw your basket at the cat my dear!" said the wolf. "I’m thirsty." said the little girl, "Drink the wine from that jug on the table." said the wolf. She drink the wine from the jug, when bird perched outside the chimney cried down, "STOP! Your drinking your mother’s blood little red riding hood!" The little girl asked her mother why is bird telling her she is drinking her blood? "Throw your cloak at the little bird." said the wolf. "I’m sleepy mother." said the little girl. "Then lay down with me my dear." said the wolf. The little girl undressed and approached the bed not aware of the way her mother laid on the bed. She laid down next the wolf and said, "My mother what big ears you have!" "All the better to hear you with!" said the wolf. "My what big eyes you have mother!" said the little girl. "All the better to see you with my dear!" said the wolf. "My what big claws you have mother!" said the little girl. "All the better to hold you!" said the wolf. "My what big teeth you have!" said the little girl. The wolf smiled and killed little red riding hood.
The end.
A long time ago a little girl was taken away from her mother when she was just a little girl by her evil grandma. Who lived in a castle outside the forest, little girl was put into room where the lock was outside the door. The little girl wanted to see her mother so she cried for seven days till her grandma unlocked the door. "When can I see my mother grandma?" asked the little girl with tears in her eyes. "Here put these on." said the evil grandma handing her iron clothes. "When you can out grow these iron clothes you can go into the forest and see your mother who home sits at the end of two paths. The path of pins and the path of needles." The little girl put on the iron clothes and waited for seven years in the dark room rubbing her back against the wall untill the clothes ripped from her body. She cried at the door "GRANDMA I NO LONGER NEED THESE CLOTHES!" The little girl waited for her evil grandma to come, but she never came. "GRANDMA!" she yelled again, "I WANNA SEE MY MOTHER, AND I’M HUNGRY AND THIRSTY PLEASE GRANDMA!"
She still did not answer her plea, the little girl grabbed a broken piece of her iron clothes and began scratching away at the thick door. For 7 days she scratched away the door until there was hole big enough for her hand to reach through. She unlocked the door suprised to find the key still in the lock. The Little girl left the dark room and headed down the castle stairs. "Grandma where are you?" said the little girl. Yet she still couldn’t find her anywhere in the empty castle. The little girl decided to see her mother now, she no longer needed to wait. She grabbed old tattered red cloak and basket and put loaf of bread and jar of wine in the basket. She never looked back at the castle as she entered the forest.
In the forest the little girl came to the two paths of pins and needles. There a wolf came out, and approached her. "Where are you going little red riding hood?" said the wolf. " To see my mother who I haven’t seen in long time. I don’t even remember all to well." said the little girl. "Thats is sad little red riding hood." said the wolf. "What path are you going to take?" Pins or needles?" "Pins, the path of pins I will take to see my mother." said the girl with smile on her face." The wolf smiled and told her to wear her hood up while walking down the path of pins so others doesn’t see she is human. Then wolf ran down the path of needles and got to her mother’s home before the little girl. The wolf killed her mother and layed down in the bed and waited in the dark house for the little red riding hood.
When she arrived she knocked on the door "Mother it's me your daughter!" "Come in the door is unlocked!" said the wolf laying in wait. The door wouldn’t open still, noticing a small hole next to the door the little girl crawled through it into the home. The room was dark with small window that showed very little sunlight in the house. A fire place sat across the room and the wolf layed on the bed across the room. "Mother I’m hungry!" said the little girl "There is meat in the cabinet help yourself to it my dear." said the wolf. She opened the cabinet and found the meat and began eating it. Suddenly a cat came out and said "STOP! Your eating your mother’s flesh little red riding hood!" The little girl stopped and said, "Mother this cat says I’m eating your flesh!" "Throw your basket at the cat my dear!" said the wolf. "I’m thirsty." said the little girl, "Drink the wine from that jug on the table." said the wolf. She drink the wine from the jug, when bird perched outside the chimney cried down, "STOP! Your drinking your mother’s blood little red riding hood!" The little girl asked her mother why is bird telling her she is drinking her blood? "Throw your cloak at the little bird." said the wolf. "I’m sleepy mother." said the little girl. "Then lay down with me my dear." said the wolf. The little girl undressed and approached the bed not aware of the way her mother laid on the bed. She laid down next the wolf and said, "My mother what big ears you have!" "All the better to hear you with!" said the wolf. "My what big eyes you have mother!" said the little girl. "All the better to see you with my dear!" said the wolf. "My what big claws you have mother!" said the little girl. "All the better to hold you!" said the wolf. "My what big teeth you have!" said the little girl. The wolf smiled and killed little red riding hood.
The end.
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I felt like reading this for laugh, but you just killed it at the end...I almost expected the wolf to rape the little girl, but no, it just ends with "The wolf smiled and killed little red riding hood."
Too anticlimatic, imho...
Too anticlimatic, imho...
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Arren wrote...
I felt like reading this for laugh, but you just killed it at the end...I almost expected the wolf to rape the little girl, but no, it just ends with "The wolf smiled and killed little red riding hood."Too anticlimatic, imho...
Yeah, I agree. The end kind of spoiled it. I think it would have been better if Little Red Riding Hood didn't die, but rather became a sex slave or just slave of the wolf and then Evil Grandma comes back, yet no longer evil, or just not so evil as to let the wolf kill her. I would have liked the grandmother to kill the wolf, but die in the process.
Well, just because of the end, and the rather unexplained method of taking the grandma out of the story, I think you should rewrite the story.
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this is the actual little red riding hood story, the story we heard as kids is just dumb version from the brother's grim. There no nice ending or some crazy ending. It should be end just like that. When i heard it, i thought it was brilliant cause it didnt have some message of hope or somekind of bullshit to teach you lesson except dont trust anyone, especially a fucking wolf! haha
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Jericho Antares
FAKKU Writer
The anime Jon-Roh references this original tale a lot. I believe in there it is still called by its German name, which I won't say for fear of butchering it. I like it a lot more than the fairy tale kind. Oh, only difference between this and Jin-Roh was that when she tore the iron clothes, she was released immediately.