Lollipop Grin (Hyakko Fanfiction)

Lollipop Grin
Hyakko Fanfictin
(Suzume and Kitsune. MF. Oral, Foodplay, Sounding[mild])

"Yeah, yeah," Kitsune Kageyama muttered, shuffling to the door... he wondered who was coming by late on a Saturday afternoon. "Who is... Oh, Yo, Suzu," he said, a half-smile propping up the corner of his mouth, "You here to see Torako?"

The brunette nodded vigorously, the little hair buns on either side of her head bobbling cutely.

"Heh... she's not here right now. Oniyuri drug her out shopping, some kind of bonding kick... said they'd be back by five or so." Waving the girl in, he turned for the stairs, "C'mon in, you can wait for her in her room if you want."

Climbing the stairs, Kitsune shot a glance back over his shoulder at Suzume, who trundled up after him. He still remembered meeting her for the first time, she had a reputation for quarreling with and intimidating people that teased Torako... seeing as how that was something of a hobby of his, he'd been surprised how quickly she took to him, despite his pranks.

"Here we are," Kitsune said, pushing open Torako's door. The room was cluttered, but not dirty, and a couple of game consoles dotted the landscape in front of an ancient, worn looking TV. Kitsune waved off to Suzume without looking back as he walked on to his room.

Looking at a pile of schoolwork, he shrugged and walked to a shelf to skim for a something to read instead. "Not here? Damn it, Torako, have you been in my stuff again... " he muttered, looking for a specific manga. "I hadn't read that yet..."

Turning to head out the door for his sister's room, he paused a second to grab a good-sized sour apple lollipop from his "Suzu stash" before heading down. He knocked on the half-opened door and came in, grinning at Suzume laying on her back, legs propped up against the bed, playing a game. Kitsune glanced briefly at her canvas shorts bunched up near her hips exposing her thighs before quickly walking over to Torako's desk.

"Just coming to look for a manga," he said. "Catch, Suzu." He tossed the lollipop over to the brunette. Kitsune began to rifle through Torako's haphazard pile of books and manga for his missing title, his grin twitching as he heard Suzu unwrapping the sweet. Once he managed to find it, he turned to leave but stopped short looking at Suzume.

Her brow furrowed in concentration, she kept both hands on the controller leaning into each hit of her character. The lollipop was pinched firmly between her toes on her right foot. She kept her leg crossed over her left knee and bobbing it in time with the music. Every few moments she'd curl her it backward, bringing the lollipop to her mouth for a quick lick in a nonchalant display of surprising flexibility.

Kitsune shook his head, rubbing his eyes as he realized he'd been staring. He should probably go, he though, but instead he sat on the corner of Torako's bed opposite Suzume and leaned back, cramming a pillow under his head to read.

Suzume paused her game after a couple of minutes, looking up at Kitsune. "Don't mind me," he said, not looking up from the manga, "Just thought you wouldn't mind the company... I can leave if you want."

Suzume resumed her game without comment, so Kitsune shrugged and kept reading. Suzume seemed to be doing ok, he could hear when the game restarted every now and again, and he heard her shuffling around. Bending back the edge of his comic, he saw Suzume had slid over closer to him, her legs almost brushing his.

Kitsune paid it little enough mind, and moved on to the next chapter. After a few minutes, he realized Suzume's weight had shifted again, and he lifted the book in his hands and peeked under it. Twin wispy dongles of soft brown hair bobbled briefly in his vision as he realized Suzume was sitting upright next to his leg, her shoulder just brushing against him. He considered sliding down a bit, but truth be told he didn't really mind.

Thumbing past a boring story he moved on to the last couple of chapters. Nearing the end of the volume, he realized the game was looping in attract mode. Kitsune put the Manga aside and sat up see Suzume with her arm wrapped around his leg resting her cheek against his knee, the lollipop clenched in her cheek.

"Uh... Suzu, what are you..." he began when she turned around, sitting up on her knees and staring into Kitsune's eyes. Putting her hands on his knees, she pushed past them bringing her face even with his crotch.

"H-Hey! Suzume, what do you think you're doing!"

Casting her eyes upward under arched brows, she merely smiled and told him "Shush." She took the sucker out of her mouth and leaned in, flicking out her tongue and finding the zipper of Kitsune's trousers. Kitsune was utterly stunned and sat staring as she bit the tab and slowly pulled it down, revealing his underwear.

"Aww... I thought they were supposed be all SPROING, and shoot out," she muttered, pouting.

"That's only in comic books, Suzu..." Kitsune said, trying to wrap his mind around what was happening. "Listen, what are you..."

"Ok then," Suzume interrupted, "I guess I'll just have to go in after it."

"What do you mean 'in after it'... Hey~" He yelped again as Suzume dove face first into his fly. She bit the plaid cotton of his boxers and pulled them out, hooking her finger around the elastic and pulling them out of the way, revealing his still soft member nestled in a wiry nest of hair.

Closing her eyes, Suzume pressed her face into Kitsune's crotch inhaling deeply. She was surprised as she kind of liked the way he smelled, musky and just a little sweet. Breathing out, she smiled as her hot breath crawling along cock began to make it stir.

Kitsune didn't know what to make of Suzume... there was never any kind of romantic or sexual spark before, but she was putting on a good show of starting a fire.

"Suzu, what..." he began, his words turning into a low groan as she took the head of his stiffening shaft into her mouth and helped pull it free, sucking up almost half it's length in the process. She bobbed her head along it's length, sucking hard. Kitsune moaned, eyes half-lidded at the sensation, as his erection came to full attention.

Suzume lifted her mouth free after just a few moment with a wet slurp that make Kitsune grunt and shudder. Making a face, Suzume replaced the apple lollipop in her mouth and cocked her head to the side, examining Kitsune's faintly shining cock as she ran her fingers gently along the underside.

Kitsune didn't say anything, the shock of Suzume's rather sudden attack, not to mention his rapidly growing arousal, made forming full sentences tricky, much less analyzing Suzume's actions...

Suzume, however, seemed to have pulled together her own plan in the meantime. Grabbing the base of his penis with one hand and removing the lollipop with the other, she started to lick the underside of his head, right where it met the shaft, with long, slow strokes.

Kitsune's hands knotted in the sheets on either side as Suzume began to lick his member, the sweet smell of apple candy dancing softly in the air. Suzume leaned back, putting the sucker back in her mouth as she stroked Kitsune with her free hand. Freeing the candy again, she cupped the top of Kitsune's shaft and began to lick the root, right at the juncture of his balls. She used the same slow, even strokes, and Kitsune could feel thin, tacky streamers of saliva mixed with melted candy clinging with each pass.

Leaning back again, putting the candy in her mouth, she stroked Kitsune's cock with her left hand, keeping him hard. Kitsune was starting to breathe harder, his face flush. "Suzume... why are you doing this?"

"Hmm, " Suzume mumbled, then smiled, taking the sucker out of her mouth. "For the candy, silly."

"You're joking," Kitsune said. Suzume didn't reply, instead she began to trace the lollipop around the head of his cock, spinning the candy between her fingers. Kitsune hissed as the hard candy twirled against his swollen knot. Suzume pulled back the candy, following the same route with her tongue, lapping up the sour apple trail she'd left behind.

Suzume began to alternate, running the candy sucker along the shaft, and following it with playful flicks of her tongue, or long, lavish strokes. Kitsune groaned in pleasure, his cock twitching as Suzume's hot breath and hotter tongue chased the trail of saliva slick candy across his manhood.

"Suzu.... Hey, Suzu... " He hissed, making the brunette look up. "Look.. if you keep that up I'm gonna get completely sticky down there..."

Pouting again, Suzume's playfully flashing eyes twinkled at Kitsune. "Aww... but I like it when it's all sticky..." she mused in a surprisingly sultry voice. Kitsune's cock twitched at Suzume's words and he bit his lip, clenching down to keep from coming all over her face.

"Ooh... sensitive?" Suzume said, flicking her tongue feather light at the base of Kitsune's head.

"Ah.... y-yes" Kitsune stuttered, twitching as he tried force himself to hold back. Suzume took his shaft firmly in her left hand, pressing her thumb against the base. Kitsune hissed again sharply at the painful grip.

"Ooh... that should calm things down a bit," she said, letting go and trailing her fingertips across the top of his shaft as she took her hand away, making Kitsune's member jerk appreciatively.

"I'm, uh... not really used to this sort of thing," Kitsune muttered, a little embarrassed he was so close to shooting off, and wondering where on earth Suzume had learned these things.

"No problem," Suzume explained enthusiastically, "We'll just have to plug up that hole so it doesn't go off too soon."

"Plug... wait, what are you talking about," Kitsune asked as Suzume began to swirl her tongue around the tip of his cock, letting streamers of saliva run across the red-purple tip. Lifting the sucker up to her mouth again, she took in the stick, rolling her tongue around it and getting it wet.

Kitsune's eyes flared open as he realized what Suzume meant. "You're kidding right... Right?"

"Nope," Suzume said, pinching the head of his cock in her left hand, making the opening at the tip flare. "don't worry... I saw this one in a manga. It's perfectly safe." Pressing the tip of the stick to his cockhole, she added thoughtfully, "Probably...."

"'Probably' like hell," Kitsune yelped, struggling, 'Probably' isn't going to get stuck in my damn... AHH!," he grunted, shuddering, as the slightly softened paper stick of the sucker worked its way into his canal. Trembling, he lost his balance falling back on the bed as the scant few inches of the candy's shaft were worked into his own with excruciating gentleness.

Kitsune's hips worked on their own, twitching a few final times as the lollipop slid home, resting against the sensitive tip of his cock. The pressure of something entering his penis like this was completely alien, and his cock twitched and shook, swaying with the weight of the sucker. Every time it twitched it swung just a little to one side, the stick pressing against the the sides of his urethra until it righted itself.

"Mmm..." Suzume said, starry-eyed as she watched it dance, "That looks delicious...." Leaning in, she licked Kitsune from the very base of his shaft all the way up. She flicked her tongue playfully to the sides when she reached where she thought the stick was, laving along the base of his glans, flicking her tongue against the lollipop at the top making Kitsune twitch and groan as it swung freely again.

Suzume had fun lapping at the lollipop, sending Kitsune's jerking cock swinging then swooping in to capture another lick, running her tongue along the head and shaft as well as Kitsune moaned into the palm of his hand, pressed tight over his mouth to keep from crying out.

Suzume sat up, looming over Kitsune's candy-topped cock and began to circle the lollipop with her tongue, making the stick press against the incredibly tender sides of Kitsune's canal with each pass. She began to gently stroke the base of his member as he whimpered softly, completely overwhelmed by sensation.

Lowering her head, Suzume engulfed the top of his cock, sucker and all, and Kitsune moaned again as Suzume's warm, wet mouth surrounded him. Suzume was gentle, drawing her mouth up and down along the the tip. She wasn't sucking, she didn't want to pull the candy free, at least not yet, but she worked her tongue along the underside, keeping her lips pinched closed around the shaft. She kept bobbing her head, each time taking Kitsune's shaft deeper and deeper into her mouth. He could feel her lips circling the shaft, her tongue dancing along the sensitive line at the base of his cock, and the candy stick rubbing the sensitive skin inside, the trio of them, pain and pleasures, threatening to drive him mad.

Suzume began to slowly raise her head, drawing her mouth up off of Kitsune's cock, scraping her teeth ever so faintly as she went, dragging a ragged groan from Kitsune until she finally got to the tip. Pinching the sucker between her teeth, she ever so slowly drew it free, eliciting a final shuddering sigh from Kitsune, who looked up to see Suzume, lollipop stick dangling playfully from the corner of her mouth, grinning at him behind his still standing member.

"Suzu that... I... ooh..." Kitsune tried, flustered, sitting up on the bed. His cock still ached, standing rock hard from his fly, but she smiled at Suzume, who returned it with her own.

Very gently Suzume took his shaft in her hands, stroking it as Kitsune closed his eyes. Suzume took the tip in her mouth, this time not taking the lollipop out. Instead, she let it jockey for position with Kitsune's cock, rolling the sucker against the head as she worked her mouth over it.

Kitsune opened his eyes, watching the stick of the sucker working around his member as Suzume worked her head up and down along it's length. Suzume moved the lollipop to one side in her mouth, and began to suck Kitsune's dick in earnest, each stroke down accented by the hard candy on one side and the softening stick rubbing along the underside. After several rapid bobs, Suzume pulled all the way free, quickly moving the sucker to the other side before engulfing Kitsune again, the sucker now rubbing against he other side with the stick scrapping down the top of his shaft as the worked her tongue along the base.

After a few more dips of her head, she switched again, taking as much of his shaft as she could with each downward gulp, the friction of candy and paper contrasting with the silken flow of skin as Suzume's bobbling head worked up and down on his throbbing shaft, her hair dongles bobbing with each stroke.

"S-suzu... I'm... I.." Kitsune started to say before he was interrupted, betrayed by his own body as he came. He felt ashamed for coming with no warning into Suzume's mouth, his embarrassed blush blending with the flush of his orgasm as his hips twitched with each fervent pump of semen.

Suzume felt the rush of spunk, and she sucked Kitsune's cock hungrily, drawing every last drop free of his spasming member. She rolled the lollipop playfully around in it, turning he face upward and lifting it up over her open mouth with a trailing tendril of spunk glistening from it before she took it back into her mouth and swallowed.

Kitsune watched her throat work as she swallowed the evidence of his first blowjob before she lay her head down on his knee, gently rubbing his leg in a serene sort of way. Reaching out hesitantly, unsure of what to to, Kitsune finally put his hand on her head, rubbing it softly.

"Suzu..." he said softly, not sure what kind of etiquette followed a surprise BJ.

"Hmm..." Suzume murmured, not looking up.

"You were kidding earlier, right? I mean, about this being something for the candy?"

"Nope," she said quietly.

"But... but surely you wouldn't... I mean, I never expected anything from you..." he said nervously, afraid he has somehow coerced this out of her.

"It's ok," Suzume said softly, "It's just returning a favour..."

"But.... why would you go this far..."

"Because," Suzume said, turning her head and resting her other cheek on his leg so she could look up at him. "All the girls were scared of you, you know. In Middle School. They all said how you flipped skirts, and chased them with bugs and lizards... the first time I met you, i was gonna pound you if I thought you were messing with Torako like that..."

She smiled, wistfully, "But you just said 'Yo, you must be Suzu.' and tossed me some candy. Your eyes were so warm," she said, "The same warm look that you get around Torako when you think nobody's looking." Kitsune's eyes widened in surprise as she continued "That's why I know... as long as the Kitsune who gives me candy is around, there'll always be someone to help me look out for her...."

"Suzu..." Kitsune said softly, unsure how else to respond. The loud clamour from the door downstairs, however, snapped him back to reality. "Oh shit, they're home!" he exclaimed. Suzume sat up as Kitsune rolled wildly to one side, falling off the end of the bed, still scrambling to shove himself back into his pants.

Suzume stood and walked out on the balcony, waving at Torako and Oniyuri. Kitsune zipped himself up quickly, checked his pants for spots or stains, really quickly wiped his brow on one of Torako's old sweatshirts and strolled out as nonchalantly as possible behind Suzume.

"Hey hey, Suzume!" Torako said, tossing a shopping bag to one side and walking to the foot of the stairs to greet her friend. "I kinda figured you'd be here be now... C'mon, we'll go get something to eat."

"Ok, but I'm not that hungry."

"Eh?"

"Kitsune gave me something before you got here, " she said, causing Torako's brother to miss a step on the stairs, flailing wildly before catching himself on the railing. He watched, slackjawed, as Suzume and a slightly confused Torako walked out the door.

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As with all my works, comments, critiques, and suggestions are enthusiastically encouraged and always appreciated.

I'm pretty you wanted to say Dragged... But I couldn't help but notice that grammatical error.

Overall. A really good read. I found it kinda of weird on how he got a Lolipop stick stuck down his penis, Or am I misinterpreting that.

Nice work, looking forward to more from you~

Using "Drug" as a past tense of "Drag" is how I've always heard it and always said it... 'dragged' sounds so incredibly awkward in that sentence to my ears that I was ready to stare you down on the topic that it couldn't even be an acceptable "alternate" structure.

Till I actually looked up the grammar on it... to be perfectly frank, I had no idea. Now, I use a mixture of 'drug' and 'dragged' in speech and writing, because sometimes dragged sounds better, and sometimes Drug sounds better, to me at least. As convoluted as English grammar is, I always assumed it an involuntary reaction to some irregular verb form rule that I didn't remember.

I'm not going to change it, though, because 1.) There's no way to fix the way I speak at this point in my life, I'm going to go on treating "drug" as a viable past-tense verb. and 2.) That sort of slightly rough, grammatically wrong dialect actually fits the idea of the character well enough that changing it would actually seem worse for him(despite the fact he's technically speaking Japanese)...

As for the lollipop stick, no, that's exactly what happened... it's related to a medical fetish called urethra insertion or sounding. Wikipedia can fill you in on the more graphic details, but some folk find it pleasurable. I've never actually tried it, and don't think I personally would do it, but the idea of someone doing it is interesting.

I've posted several other stories on the board(most have worked back to the 2nd or 3rd page by now I think), feel free to take a look if you feel like it, I always appreciate comments on my work.

I did not expect such a long answer from you.
I was expecting more of a
"oh sorry... Edit Fix'd"
But I guess your one of the few people who explain their reasoning in doing what they do. And I respect people like that.

About the urethra insertion... Well to be honest I never knew that. And that brought some new insight into the Body of a human Male, not like I'm gonna try it but you know. I learned something.

Well I'll check out your other stories now~
Still I look forward to any of your future work~

Interesting story (remind me, I need to look up the subject matter now). But, I kinda missed the part where the lolipop was actually removed from Kitsune's penis. I thought she left it stuck in there

It was there. I could have gone into more detail with it, I suppose, and if I was to go back and flesh it out, I would.

However, that almost never happens... I'm not a "go back and fix/improve it" kind of author.