Love Poem

I wrote this for a close friend of mine, She means a lot to me and I just wanted extra feedback... I just hope it isn't too cheesy... In fact I was writting it while I was with her on an instant messaging site I go to a website called Chatango.


A Crime
What a crime you are...that God created you as beautiful as you are...I don't know what made me love you...maybe your charm...maybe your kindness...maybe your scent...maybe all the above
You embraced me...I embraced you...we loved all night...we stopped to stare at each others eyes