Might I ask a small favor from more experienced writers?
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I am a novice author (officially unpublished) but I still aspire to create great works that people can enjoy online at their leisure, but no one ever comments or replies to my work when I post it and so I've become a sad panda. :(
But anyway I just wanted to point out that I mainly write josei-style erotica thriller with story elements kind of based on shoujo and josei manga, aimed generally at a 20+ audience who have a large vocabulary consisting of complex everyday conversations and deep, hard-to-grasp plots. Unfortunately, I've been told by many that because my work is hard to read and understand without a large vocabulary, that many people don't want to read it.
May I have some constructive criticism on how to fix these issues?
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By the way my pen name is Tira-chan, also my preferred nickname.
But anyway I just wanted to point out that I mainly write josei-style erotica thriller with story elements kind of based on shoujo and josei manga, aimed generally at a 20+ audience who have a large vocabulary consisting of complex everyday conversations and deep, hard-to-grasp plots. Unfortunately, I've been told by many that because my work is hard to read and understand without a large vocabulary, that many people don't want to read it.
May I have some constructive criticism on how to fix these issues?
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By the way my pen name is Tira-chan, also my preferred nickname.
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yurixhentai
desu
This is the wrong section. You should have posted this in the Writing and Fanfiction section.
Reported to move it for you.
Reported to move it for you.
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yurixhentai wrote...
This is the wrong section. You should have posted this in the Writing and Fanfiction section.Reported to move it for you.
Sorry I'll keep that in mind for future reference and thanks in advance.
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Tirayuki wrote...
yurixhentai wrote...
This is the wrong section. You should have posted this in the Writing and Fanfiction section.Reported to move it for you.
Sorry I'll keep that in mind for future reference and thanks in advance.
I've been here for a while now but I haven't seen any of your works before. You'll just have to report all your stories and have them move here. I'll drop by and read them when I have time. Expect some merciless criticism from me though. I don't mince my words when I review.
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Find out what people enjoy and then write about it. If you're coming to Fakku, then I'm sure you can find a way to add porn to your stories.
Oh, crap, I'm getting a nosebleed...
Oh, crap, I'm getting a nosebleed...
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Try going to this place, some of the folks here are really experienced in writing and probably could give you some tips on how to create an enjoyable work~
Just some of my two-piece, try to use the style of wording that you find comfortable the most, what most important is that you like something you're working on so you could continue on it until completion, on the other hand it will give you a reputation of a credible writer being able to finish a masterful work and more people will eventually came to read your works~
Rather than aiming for popularity firsthand, I figure it would be better if you set some goals to produce a solid writing first and focusing on it because comments doesn't always come right away at this place and it might depress you if it continues for a prolonged time just like what you explained earlier.
There's some people who will help you out in times of need so it's crucial to identify these people and ask them out for help when a big block gets in the way, it will probably give ya a big push of motivation with their assistance~
The first step is to post some of your writings here so we could have a firsthand grasp of your writing style and might even gave some tips to help ya out =)
Just some of my two-piece, try to use the style of wording that you find comfortable the most, what most important is that you like something you're working on so you could continue on it until completion, on the other hand it will give you a reputation of a credible writer being able to finish a masterful work and more people will eventually came to read your works~
Rather than aiming for popularity firsthand, I figure it would be better if you set some goals to produce a solid writing first and focusing on it because comments doesn't always come right away at this place and it might depress you if it continues for a prolonged time just like what you explained earlier.
There's some people who will help you out in times of need so it's crucial to identify these people and ask them out for help when a big block gets in the way, it will probably give ya a big push of motivation with their assistance~
The first step is to post some of your writings here so we could have a firsthand grasp of your writing style and might even gave some tips to help ya out =)