My Oh! My Goddess Fan Fic. Prologue and Chapter 1

This is not a hentai fan fic. There are no sex scenes
even though this chapter does have nudity.

I started this years ago and decided to finish the first chapter today and then post it here. I try to stay true to the characters actual personalities not having them do anything too far outside of what that character would really do. However I do put in some of my own views. and maybe a touch of my own fantasies. I hope you all enjoy it.


Prologue

As a new day dawned, The almighty creator of the universe was preparing for His next task. He had just logged into His Yggdrasil terminal, when everything shut down and only one symbol appeared on all of his screens He knew this signal all to well. after a moment of though he realized he had to act quickly. He had to contact all the necessary parties if they were to be ready.
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It was a rather dull day in the First Combat Division. Lind sat her desk going over reports when her phone . "First Combat Division, This is Lind" she answered. The voice on the other end was that of The Almighty One. His message for her was short but very serious. After hearing Him out she says "I understand." then hangs up the phone. A sense of worry and unease hung over Lind. However she knew now was not the time to despair Now was the time to act. Standing up she announced her command to the division "Activate a level one system warning." The other valkyrie looked puzzled by her order. One of them asks "Excuse me ma'am. We have not detected any threats. Why would there be a need for such a high level system warning?" As much as Lind wanted to explain it to them, she couldn't. They might not even believe her. If they did then it would only cause panic. She answered "Did I ask you to question my orders? No! I asked you to initiate a level one system warning. Now do it!" Lind tries to calm down as the sirens start to go off. However, she knew things were only going to get more hectic.
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Finally completing what she had been working on all day, Hild looked over to see she was out of booze. "Why is my wine glass empty!" She complained loudly to any nearby servant. Looking around she did not see anyone. She was lounging comfortably in you look her chair and did not want to get up. Where are they? She thought. Since when does The Daimakaicho have to fetch her own wine? She was about to start blowing things up in anger when all of her terminal screens shut off. They reappeared a second later displaying a single symbol. She sat up abruptly and stared at the symbol. Her face showed signs of distress and she muttered to herself "Dam, I thought we would have more time"

Chapter 1

Everywhere you look the temple, which had become the Morisato residence, Was covered in decorations. A group of several people had gathered in the central room. "Happy Birthday Keiichi!" they all sung. Belldandy walked in with a cake covered in candles. The now one year older college student blew them out. "Sorry Keiichi. You don't get another wish." The youngest goddess said in a slightly agitated tone. "Oh, But I already know what he wants." Urd cooed as she leaned over next to him. Her ample bosom about to spill out of her dress. This of course caused Keiichi to blush beet red. "What is it? I will try my best to get if for him." Belldandy asks sincerely. "You don't know?" Peorth says suddenly appearing behind her.

"Ok I'll give you a hint." With that Peorth snapped her fingers and a gust of wind seemed to appear out of no where and blew up Belldandy's skirt. This proved to be too much for poor Keiichi, seeing as he passed out right after. Belldandy worried for his safety rushed to his side. Peorth was unsuccessfully trying to hide her laughter. Urd sighed and said "Honestly, to pass out from just that." Later, when Keiichi awoke he found himself laying in bed with Belldandy sitting next to him. "Thank goodness your awake." The chestnut haired goddess says with relief. Keiichi sits up while Belldandy continues talking. "I'm so sorry this happened. And when we were having such a nice celebration." Seeing Belldandy troubled was the last thing Keiichi wanted. "Don't worry." He consoled her "It wasn't your fault." It was Urd and Peorth's fault He thought.

"I brought you some cake." Belldandy said holding a plate "Seeing how you didn't get to eat any earlier." Smiling Keiichi takes a bite. "Wow! This is really good. You did a terrific job" He says after finishing the bite. Belldandy, as happy as can be says "Thank you. I'm so glad you like it." For a moment she just sat there enjoying Keiichi's complement. Then she remembered "Oh. I almost forgot. Your present." She hands him a wrapped gift, Which he opens with much anticipation. "It's a book I read as a child." She said "It is one of my favorite stories ever. I saw a copy of it last time I was in Heaven, and I wanted to share all the joy it brought me with you." "Thank you. I'm sure I will enjoy it as much as you did." Urd comes into the room and asks "Belldandy would you come here for a moment?" "Of course" she answers. She gets up and follows Urd out of the room. A minute later Urd returns alone.

She shuts the door and blockades it with a dresser. This of course, makes Keiichi nervous. "Uh.... Urd? What are you doing?" After making sure they were locked in she answers him "You are going to learn how to deal with a naked woman without fainting" Keiichi jumps up and asks hysterically "What are you talking about?" "I didn't want it to come to this. I'm not particularly happy about doing this myself. But Belldandy loves you. It is my job as an older sister to make sure she is happy." She holds out a vial towards Keiichi and says "First thing your going to do is drink this." "Oh no! I am never drinking one of your wacky concoctions again." "Let me ask you a question." Urd says "Do you ever want to advance your relationship with Belldandy? Are you satisfied with this 3rd grade romance?

"Well....I....I want to" Keiichi says nervously. Urd takes a much softer tone in saying "Look Keiichi. I know you love Belldandy. It obvious to anyone. I also know how incredibly shy you are. So if you ever want to be able to make love to her you need to overcome this fainting thing you have. Do you want to work with me here or not?" After thinking for a minute Keiichi makes his decision "Ok Urd. What did you have in mind?" With renewed enthusiasm Urd says "Alrighty then! Here we go! Since I don't want to take this slow. We are just going to go all out. This potion I have here will prevent you from fainting. So drink and lets get the show on the road."

He was still hesitant about Urd's potion seeing how she had a track record of having potions not do what she thought they would. However, he had already committed himself so he drank it anyways. He was immediately grateful that he didn't turn into a toad or any thing. Urd seeing him drink the potion takes a deep breath. "Ok." another deep breath. She then begins to take off her dress. After un hooking and unbuttoning everything the garment fell to the floor, Leaving a completely nude Urd. Keiichi had turned such a dark red Urd didn't think that color was possible. Even she herself blushed a little. Probably thanks to the potion, Keiichi managed to speak. "So what do we do now?" Urd stood in front of him. Her hands behind her back. She said "Nothing. You just sit there and look at me. That way you get accustomed to seeing a real naked woman."

Keiichi scratched his head and asked. "Is that it? I thought you would have more Ideas," Urd was slightly shocked, she says " You didn't really think I was going to let you touch me did you? There is no way I would do anything with you. Belldandy would probably kill me. Without even realizing it too. Besides I think you want to save yourself for her anyway right?" Keiichi, still uncomfortable but still conscious answers "Ya, your right." "But if you want another Idea I could ask Peorth." "No! No, that's ok" Keiichi quickly shoots that down, not wanting to add more to the already awkward situation. After another minute Urd puts her clothes back on and says. "Ok next time I'm not giving you a potion and we will see if you can avoid fainting." She uses her magic to move the dresser back to where it was. All the while Keiichi was thinking Next time? Oh brother.

"There you two are." Belldandy says seeing Urd and Keiichi walk down the hallway. "What's going on Belldandy?" Keiichi asks. She looks worried while saying "I just spoke with The Almighty. He says there is an emergency situation in Heaven and that we need to return." Peorth who must have been eavesdropping says. "I doubt it really is anything serious. A lot of those new goddesses can't handle basic bug clean up by themselves. And so it grows into a bigger problem." Belldandy wasn't convinced "I already tried to talk to Him about it. He wouldn't tell me what was going on. All He said was that we are facing a threat greater than any we have seen before. And that it was absolutely necessary that all of us return at once."

Now everyone looked worried. Peorth says "Well I'm heading there first to see the situation. You three had better follow soon. You don't want to anger The Almighty One." With that Peorth walked off heading for the portal back to Heaven. Urd realized Keiichi and Belldandy would want to say goodbye, so she looked down at Skuld and said "Looks like we've got work to do. We better get going." Before Skuld could say the argument Urd knew was coming "I'm going to wait for big sis." She grabbed the little goddess and went down the hallway. "I can't believe all this happened on your birthday." Belldandy says, sadly. "This isn't your fault either." Keiichi says trying to comfort her. "I will come back." She says "I know you will." He smiles. Belldandy hugs him. Keiichi holds her tight not wanting to let go but knowing he has to. "I will see you soon" he says, relinquishing the embrace. "Yes." Belldandy nods. Then she turns toward the hallway and the portal back to heaven.



As for the next chapter. That will depend on the feedback I get for this chapter. If People like it, and they tell me so. I will try to work on getting the next chapter up. If people don't like it, or nobody comments then I will not even bother continuing the story. So if you want to see the next chapter then POST YOUR THOUGHTS!!!

Very nice, i applaud your unique writing style and originality. Sniff sniff it's just so beautiful(okay maybe i got a little carried away there), but seriously wicked job, aight.

Thank you. Are you an Oh! My Goddess fan? Or just liked the writing style?

I just started the series yesterday, and love the writing style.

well maybe you would want to read my Novel? It's a completely original story and I put a lot more effort into it

It would be my pleasure.

usually I get to know someone better before letting them read it and all. Because I don't want anyone to steal my idea. Seeing how I'm going to get it published. Your not going to steal my ideas are you? (not that you would tell me if you were. But never hurts to ask)

Its pretty long already so just tell me your email so I could send it there

Nah, i ain't gonna steal your idea. i'm a street dancer so book writing ain't my thing.

First of all, Thank you Echo for contributing another piece of literature. An art painted with words is as any that's done with the mark of paint or charcoal, you honor us with your contribution.

Now lets get to it.

In summary, the chapter does itself credit for being simple to read, though lacking an array of more complicated and colourful words it has done what every work of author strives to do, get his muse across. That i believe you have accomplished well.

As a fellow reader to your work, as well as a avid fan of the series, I've taken a liking as to how you chose to potray Belldandy. There's that little distance that she always keeps away but never hesitant to void it in a heart's beat whenever Keiichi seems to need it. That tiny reminder from her that the distance she keeps is to be covered by Keiichi, and silently wishing for him to slowly close that gap. Very observant of you.

Keiichi in this fanfic, if there's a word for him... he seems to be be more "yielding" than usual. I mean, to accept Urd, that URD's help really means something! (Shit's hit the fan!) Other than that, it's good to see the old Keiichi being ever polite and kind.

Urd! Ahhh yes... Sometimes it makes me wonder if she really more of a goddess than she claims to be. A little fun fact from me - Since near a quarter before the "Demon queen Urd" arc, Urd herself seem to have resigned to seek "progressing" the couple's relationship via more physical means and proceeded to more "cupid-ish" means with her drugs. Then again, if the wild Urd is how you like it then by all means go with it.

A character that i found quite odd, surprising even would be Lind. Did she wake up at the wrong side of the bed to unearth rage of such magnitude? I always thought of her as that stern Valkyrie that's always giving off that quiet air of authority, with her reputation to support her that demands a mixture of awe and fear to those under her. Though she has loosen up, more the so of her tyrant-like attitude being oddity to me.

I guess that odd to conclude for this little chapter from me. As a guilty request, would there be a side entertainment from Sigel and Banpei? Those 2 are always forgotten, which saddens me knowing that i myself hold their arc with high regards. :)

*whew* well it seems I got through the ultimate Oh! My Goddess fan's review with no super negative comments. Now lets move on to each individual remark.

I'm lacking colorful and complicated words? I don't know if that's good or bad. But as long as I got the message across I guess

A fellow reader of my work? Does that mean you've read something of mine before?

As for how I portrayed Belldandy. I said at the top of the post that I try to keep everyone as close to original character personality as I could. that's what I have witnessed as Belldandy's personality.

Now the next several remarks. I wanted to start to trying to make Keiichi and Belldandy's relationship a little more physical. However I am not going to betray their personalities by just having them out of nowhere start humping like rabbits. That's where we have Urd come in. Ahhh wonderful wonderful Urd. Through out the series she always tries to get Keiichi and Belldandy closer. She does it in many different ways. This time just happens to be in a more physical way. The good thing is that Urd's personality in the series suggests that she is very comfortable with her sexuality. So I didn't see it as too much of a stretch to have her, for the sake of Keiichi and Belldandy, Show it all. (not to mention that I'm kind of hot for Urd myself. and just wanted her to be naked. lol) Keiichi's more willing acceptance of Urd's infamous potions, and her help in general, is because he really does want to move forward with his relationship with Belldandy and is willing to do anything for it.

With Lind I haven't seen too much of her personality. I do know that she has a stern side and began to be a little softer after meeting Keiichi. But for this chapter Lind is faced with a horrible impending disaster. This is no time for her to be soft. She has to have all of the other Valkyrie listen to her orders without question. Even if they don't understand why it is crucial to follow her commands to the letter. That's what her portrayal here was going for

Finally when it comes to Banpei and Sigel. It's not that I don't like the two of them. What it boils down to is that they are very closely connected with Skuld. And in case you didn't know I hate Skuld. So in seeing that putting more of Banpei and Sigel means putting more of Skuld. That's an automatic no no for me.

Now I have one major question. Would you like to read a second chapter? Because if no one is looking forward to a second chapter than I won't bother writing it. I have other things to write you know

Do it at your own pace, i wouldn't be going anywhere. :d

Why not just transfer this to Fanfiction.net?

cuz I don't go there. Did you actually read this?

Truth be told, some of us would rather post certain fan fics here since it's easier than making a new account in a new site, but also, we'd like to get some feedback from some of our more closer friends on the site before really letting it go to something as elite as FF.net.