My very short story
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once upon a time there was a boy in a helicoptor
an terrorist shot i with an RPG and he cried "lol pwnd"
as it crashed to the ground
the boy survived the crash said
"i must get my vengeance" he pulled out an M16 and shot the rag head
the boy then got an award for vengeance kill and everyone was happy
the end
an terrorist shot i with an RPG and he cried "lol pwnd"
as it crashed to the ground
the boy survived the crash said
"i must get my vengeance" he pulled out an M16 and shot the rag head
the boy then got an award for vengeance kill and everyone was happy
the end
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Allow me to rate this.
Theme: Non-existent.If there was, it was not played well enough.
Symbolism: Unless the RPG represents a penis, and this is concentration of imagination for a rape, not symbolism.
The beginning: Terrible opening.
The End: Terrible end.
1/10 for having text present.
Theme: Non-existent.If there was, it was not played well enough.
Symbolism: Unless the RPG represents a penis, and this is concentration of imagination for a rape, not symbolism.
The beginning: Terrible opening.
The End: Terrible end.
1/10 for having text present.
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Catcher wrote...
Allow me to rate this.Theme: Non-existent.If there was, it was not played well enough.
Symbolism: Unless the RPG represents a penis, and this is concentration of imagination for a rape, not symbolism.
The beginning: Terrible opening.
The End: Terrible end.
1/10 for having text present.
I lol'd.
There's many themes in this. Revenge, venegeance... revenge...