lelouch20 wrote...
I like your poem in all honesty. It dealt with a coflict that from the poem seem unsolvable. It's like you were going forward but was dragged back. I liked that conflicting theme that occurred. You are a good poet. Can't say perfect since this is all I seen so far from you. So sorry if that sounded offensive. This is my honest thoughts.
No offense taken =] and thank you for your honest opinion and for the fact you like my poem =]