Promise the Stars ( 1 )

Hey guys, I'm pretty new to the writing poems and lemons and stuff...so don't be cruel!!!

This is my first poem I guess.

please tell me what you think.

Let's take off and fly
And race through the sky
And like the hundreds of airplanes we're floating way up high
We'll never look down
We'll build our own town
And like the thousands of clouds we will never touch the ground
With your hand in mine
We'll soar through the night
And like the dozens of spaceships we'll dance with sattelites
We'll keep our eyes closed
And we won't let go
And with the millions of stars we'll will never be alone

But would you risk some broken bones
Just to call this place home
This could be home

Maybe I'm down low
Maybe I'm up high
Maybe I'm losing my own mind
You know that there are no other two hearts closer than ours
Maybe you'll follow
Maybe you'll stay
I'm praying you won't give yourself away
You know that you are the only one I promise the stars
You are