crazr wrote...
I noticed nobodyy has commented on this, so I just wanted to say that this is pretty good! I read the first few chapters and quite enjoyed them. My suggestions is to watch out for some of your tenses. Some parts are in past tense while other are in present. It is always best to write a story in one tense. Preferably past.
Thanks very much for the feedback :)
Yeah, I noticed that - thanks for the advice.
I have my other R+V fan-fic still ongoing.
"R+V: A Confession and a Vampire: Reboot" which I plan on updating soon :)