Sailor Moon Choose Your Own Adventure? (Interest thread)
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Okay, here's a weird idea I've been playing with for quite some and I'm looking for a venue in which to play with it.
Like a lot of fans, I've been frustrated that the only Sailor Moon-related hentai available seems to be tentacle rape, rape by monsters, rape by creepy older men, rape by Tuxedo Kamen, NTR, and just generally just stuff I find unpleasant. Whenever I did find something non-rape related, it was always yuri stuff, which I liked, but don't the senshi also like men in the anime?
So, rather than simply complaining about it, I thought to make my own stuff. And thus the idea of making this game came about.
However, considering how I plan to write this CYOA game and what it'll include, I'm posting this to test the waters and see if this part of the forum is active enough for this to work.
After the events of Sailor Moon Stars, YÅkai-ancient monsters and malevolent spirits- have resurfaced in Japan. These creatures by a Dai YÅkai (Actual name pending), whose advisor warned that the Sailor Senshi would be a great detriment to their plans. However, if the Dai YÅkai were to capture Sailor Moon in particular, he can use her to take control of what would eventually be Crystal Tokyo and breed a lineage of powerful YÅkai for his sons.
And so, Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Kamen are lured away from their comrades and attack by the Dai YÅkai, who restrains Sailor Moon and uses a spell to not only kill Chiba Mamoru, but wipe his existence from the memories of history. Chibi-Usa disappears and the future of Crystal Tokyo is now in flux, making Princess Serenity, or anyone from that time unavailable for assistance.
The Sailor Senshi find themselves fighting uphill battle as the YÅkai relentlessly attack Tokyo, slaughtering men while raping and capturing females for their personal breeding slaves. At the same time, a group of nationalist extremists calling themselves Nihon no shin no musuko, "The True Sons of Japan" have taken to the streets harassing foreigners, foreign operated business, claiming the return of YÅkai is due to foreign presence and influence in Japan.
This group is currently lobbying to have all foreigners and foreign influence removed from Japan. Despite their blatantly racist and heavy-handed views, they have won the support of more than a few politicians, among which is Hino Rei's father...
In this CYOA, you play as Takehaya Ren; a Japanese American born and raised in Hawaii. He comes from a long line of sages and warriors who were among those that fought YÅkai in ancient times. However, since the events of World War II, his branch of the family had been banished.
Now 14-going-on-15, Ren is considered of age by his grandfather, and tasked with going to Japan and reuniting his family. When he reaches Japan, he is quickly beset with its problems and meets the Sailor Senshi, agreeing to help them
Being from the Takehaya family's sage branch, Ren has been trained in the ways of magic, being especially gifted in the use of offensive, defensive magic, sealing & exorcism and physical enchancement. However, answering the growing need for physical combat proficiency in a modern climate, he has worked to obtain a black belt in Kajukenbo and also uses a Tsurugi sword along with spells.
What I planned to do was write segments of the story, and at the end of the segment, the readers would be presented with a choice. The readers can simply reply to the topic with what they choose to have Ren do, and which ever choice gets the most feedback would be the path Ren goes down.
Naturally, the readers' choices would effect the outcome of the story, such as where Ren goes to school, how particular situations are handled and which of the Sailor Senshi Ren ends up with.
The following characters will be available to be chosen: Sailor Moon, Sailor Mercury, Sailor Mars, Sailor Jupiter, Sailor Venus, Sailor Saturn, and Sailor Pluto as a secret path.
Please note that Sailor Chibi-Moon, Sailor Uranus & Sailor Neptune will not be available for reasons that I hope are obvious.
Each Senshi will have their path with a unique story that will eventually include about 3-4 sex scenes, if the players make the right decisions. They also have a good, neutral and bad ending. Also, there are special threesome paths in which Ren can be with two Senshi at the same time, but these will be difficult to obtain the good ending for.
Finally, if the readers get the good ending for each of the characters, a special harem path will become available in which Ren can be with all the available Senshi.
Each path will also include commissioned artwork. However, due to the cost and time consumption of each commission, I will only include these artworks at important points of the story, which will also include the sex scenes.
Anyway, let me know what you guys think. Also, any ideas or critiques for the story thus far would be appreciated.
Like a lot of fans, I've been frustrated that the only Sailor Moon-related hentai available seems to be tentacle rape, rape by monsters, rape by creepy older men, rape by Tuxedo Kamen, NTR, and just generally just stuff I find unpleasant. Whenever I did find something non-rape related, it was always yuri stuff, which I liked, but don't the senshi also like men in the anime?
So, rather than simply complaining about it, I thought to make my own stuff. And thus the idea of making this game came about.
However, considering how I plan to write this CYOA game and what it'll include, I'm posting this to test the waters and see if this part of the forum is active enough for this to work.
The plot
After the events of Sailor Moon Stars, YÅkai-ancient monsters and malevolent spirits- have resurfaced in Japan. These creatures by a Dai YÅkai (Actual name pending), whose advisor warned that the Sailor Senshi would be a great detriment to their plans. However, if the Dai YÅkai were to capture Sailor Moon in particular, he can use her to take control of what would eventually be Crystal Tokyo and breed a lineage of powerful YÅkai for his sons.
And so, Sailor Moon and Tuxedo Kamen are lured away from their comrades and attack by the Dai YÅkai, who restrains Sailor Moon and uses a spell to not only kill Chiba Mamoru, but wipe his existence from the memories of history. Chibi-Usa disappears and the future of Crystal Tokyo is now in flux, making Princess Serenity, or anyone from that time unavailable for assistance.
The Sailor Senshi find themselves fighting uphill battle as the YÅkai relentlessly attack Tokyo, slaughtering men while raping and capturing females for their personal breeding slaves. At the same time, a group of nationalist extremists calling themselves Nihon no shin no musuko, "The True Sons of Japan" have taken to the streets harassing foreigners, foreign operated business, claiming the return of YÅkai is due to foreign presence and influence in Japan.
This group is currently lobbying to have all foreigners and foreign influence removed from Japan. Despite their blatantly racist and heavy-handed views, they have won the support of more than a few politicians, among which is Hino Rei's father...
Your character
In this CYOA, you play as Takehaya Ren; a Japanese American born and raised in Hawaii. He comes from a long line of sages and warriors who were among those that fought YÅkai in ancient times. However, since the events of World War II, his branch of the family had been banished.
Now 14-going-on-15, Ren is considered of age by his grandfather, and tasked with going to Japan and reuniting his family. When he reaches Japan, he is quickly beset with its problems and meets the Sailor Senshi, agreeing to help them
Being from the Takehaya family's sage branch, Ren has been trained in the ways of magic, being especially gifted in the use of offensive, defensive magic, sealing & exorcism and physical enchancement. However, answering the growing need for physical combat proficiency in a modern climate, he has worked to obtain a black belt in Kajukenbo and also uses a Tsurugi sword along with spells.
How the game works
What I planned to do was write segments of the story, and at the end of the segment, the readers would be presented with a choice. The readers can simply reply to the topic with what they choose to have Ren do, and which ever choice gets the most feedback would be the path Ren goes down.
Naturally, the readers' choices would effect the outcome of the story, such as where Ren goes to school, how particular situations are handled and which of the Sailor Senshi Ren ends up with.
The following characters will be available to be chosen: Sailor Moon, Sailor Mercury, Sailor Mars, Sailor Jupiter, Sailor Venus, Sailor Saturn, and Sailor Pluto as a secret path.
Please note that Sailor Chibi-Moon, Sailor Uranus & Sailor Neptune will not be available for reasons that I hope are obvious.
Each Senshi will have their path with a unique story that will eventually include about 3-4 sex scenes, if the players make the right decisions. They also have a good, neutral and bad ending. Also, there are special threesome paths in which Ren can be with two Senshi at the same time, but these will be difficult to obtain the good ending for.
Finally, if the readers get the good ending for each of the characters, a special harem path will become available in which Ren can be with all the available Senshi.
Each path will also include commissioned artwork. However, due to the cost and time consumption of each commission, I will only include these artworks at important points of the story, which will also include the sex scenes.
Anyway, let me know what you guys think. Also, any ideas or critiques for the story thus far would be appreciated.
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
I think it's a pretty interesting idea. It can work, even if people don't necessarily have a concept of what the in-depth lore behind Sailor Moon is like. I think you should give it a trial run and see what sort of audience grows from it. You could also get some useful advice from the king of CYOAs, @crazr
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Xenon wrote...
I think it's a pretty interesting idea. It can work, even if people don't necessarily have a concept of what the in-depth lore behind Sailor Moon is like. I think you should give it a trial run and see what sort of audience grows from it. You could also get some useful advice from the king of CYOAs, @crazrYou guys are too nice to me, haha! Speaking of which, I might be starting one soon come school's end. Though we'll see how much of a writing mood I'm in after three writing intensive classes and one reading intensive class...
Anyway, this looks and sounds very promising. Like Xenon said, I'd do a trial run. I'll gladly participate, just know I might not always respond because I am awfully busy! Either way, I'd love to help!
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Okay, thanks for your feedback. Though, I'm hesitant to put anything out since I don't have any concrete aside from what I just posted above. But, I'll see what I can whip up.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
I don't know why you're sad about NTR, Rape, or anything that's really good, but oh well. Whatever float's one's boat.
Aside from that, I like your concept with the racial jargon and the semi-foreign sailor moon girl. So if you do put it up I'll occasionally participate. Maybe.
Aside from that, I like your concept with the racial jargon and the semi-foreign sailor moon girl. So if you do put it up I'll occasionally participate. Maybe.
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Cinia Pacifica wrote...
I don't know why you're sad about NTR, Rape, or anything that's really good, but oh well. Whatever float's one's boat.In that regard, it's about the lack of variety. You know, not everyone likes the extreme stuff, and yet we're expected to partake of it because everyone else does?
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
WanderingBlackDragon wrote...
Cinia Pacifica wrote...
I don't know why you're sad about NTR, Rape, or anything that's really good, but oh well. Whatever float's one's boat.In that regard, it's about the lack of variety. You know, not everyone likes the extreme stuff, and yet we're expected to partake of it because everyone else does?
No? You just live without... nothing in that case.
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Okay, I might put up a test run sometime this weekend, but at the moment I'm still developing the setting and main character.
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Okay, here's a demo to test out how the CYOA game will work and give a preview as to what to expect in terms of story and the like. I must ask you excuse my writing if it seems bare, as I'm not writing at my full capability and hope that my prose and dialogue will be much better if/when the actual game is started.
Ren had only heard about the classic arcade, having the misfortune of being born into an age where the American versions were dinosaurs slowly going extinct. As Shingo led him inside, he was hit with a wall of the flashing lights and ambiance of various games. The place seemed to keep its retro look with the neon tube lights lining the walls, and more than a few old games still spotting the walls and corners.
However, the place managed to keep itself consistantly updated with more modern games; the fifth installment of an old favorite stole Ren's attention.
Ren: I didn't know Time Crisis had a fifth game.
Shingo: Yeah, I love that one! Wanna play?
“Wanna play?” Shingo asks. Does a bear shit in the woods?
The two took a moment to convert some yen bills into tokens then went to start up the game. Holding the plastic pistol in his hand brought Ren back a year or two. But, with the way the new cover system worked, he found himself trying to add new steps to old habits. The terrorists dropped like flies as the two seemed to swarm around them, until Shingo ended up taking a hit.
Shingo: Ack! I hate those red guys....! Say, Ren you're really good at this!
Ren: It's about target prioritization, dude.
Shingo: Target Prioritization?
Ren: Just pick your targets based on how dangerous they are; The red guys are more likely to hit you, so you shoot them first, then any armored or special enemies. You can save the rest for last since their aim sucks.
As a red bullet zeroed in on Ren, he changed cover and scored a head shot from the side, while Shingo forgot himself to watch.
Ren: I also noticed I can get a lot more done by constantly shifting cover instead of just ducking.
Shingo: Aren't you playing this game for the first time?
Ren: Well, this installment, anyway. They used to have these in the movie theaters, so me and my dad would kill some time before the movie starts.
Shingo: Ne, you're from Hawaii, right? Do you surf over there and stuff?
Ren grimaced, beginning to regret mentioning he came from Hawaii.
Ren: No, but I know guys who do. And before you ask, those chicks in the grass skirts are just tourist attractions, nobody walks around like that on a daily basis. Also, the phrase “Aloha” can mean hello, and goodbye.
As the two began shooting Wild Dog off his zip-line, Shingo made a face as if wondering if he had stepped on Ren's toes. When they reached the special weapons and the Seekers descended upon them, Shingo glanced at Ren, who seemed to concentrate on spraying them down.
Shingo: Hey, Takehaya, how do you know my sister? You two already seem on a first name basis.
Ren's eyes never left the screen as he answered,
Ren: We just happened to run into each other while I was heading home and we ended up hanging out for a while, since she used to go to my school. Turns out we had some common interests.
Shingo: Like what? Usagi-baka sucks at video games!
Ren: It's still a common interest, dude. Besides, don't you think it's harsh calling her baka? Why don't you call her Onee-san or something?
Shingo: Why should I? Usagi-baka is a born idiot! It's a wonder she managed to get into high school at all. She has bad grades and sucks at sports! Now mom's busy wondering when she's going to find a boyfriend, but who would want to go out with her?!
Ren: Dude, do you have any idea how many guys would want her if she came to my old school?
Shingo: Eh, they'd probably just want to do ecchi things to her. The only thing good about Usagi-baka these days is her figure filling out! Maybe all the food she eats is going into her boobs and ass. She's just a bimbo!
Ren's eye twitched, he was getting annoyed, but Shingo's ranting continued,
Shingo: Now her friends are much better: Hino-san's really cool and has a great singing voice, Mizuno-san's really smart, Kino-san's cooking is even better than my mom's, and Aino-san's really athletic and has that awesome British accent! Say, Takehaya, you know them, right? Who would you go out with if you had the chance?
Ren had only heard about the classic arcade, having the misfortune of being born into an age where the American versions were dinosaurs slowly going extinct. As Shingo led him inside, he was hit with a wall of the flashing lights and ambiance of various games. The place seemed to keep its retro look with the neon tube lights lining the walls, and more than a few old games still spotting the walls and corners.
However, the place managed to keep itself consistantly updated with more modern games; the fifth installment of an old favorite stole Ren's attention.
Ren: I didn't know Time Crisis had a fifth game.
Shingo: Yeah, I love that one! Wanna play?
“Wanna play?” Shingo asks. Does a bear shit in the woods?
The two took a moment to convert some yen bills into tokens then went to start up the game. Holding the plastic pistol in his hand brought Ren back a year or two. But, with the way the new cover system worked, he found himself trying to add new steps to old habits. The terrorists dropped like flies as the two seemed to swarm around them, until Shingo ended up taking a hit.
Shingo: Ack! I hate those red guys....! Say, Ren you're really good at this!
Ren: It's about target prioritization, dude.
Shingo: Target Prioritization?
Ren: Just pick your targets based on how dangerous they are; The red guys are more likely to hit you, so you shoot them first, then any armored or special enemies. You can save the rest for last since their aim sucks.
As a red bullet zeroed in on Ren, he changed cover and scored a head shot from the side, while Shingo forgot himself to watch.
Ren: I also noticed I can get a lot more done by constantly shifting cover instead of just ducking.
Shingo: Aren't you playing this game for the first time?
Ren: Well, this installment, anyway. They used to have these in the movie theaters, so me and my dad would kill some time before the movie starts.
Shingo: Ne, you're from Hawaii, right? Do you surf over there and stuff?
Ren grimaced, beginning to regret mentioning he came from Hawaii.
Ren: No, but I know guys who do. And before you ask, those chicks in the grass skirts are just tourist attractions, nobody walks around like that on a daily basis. Also, the phrase “Aloha” can mean hello, and goodbye.
As the two began shooting Wild Dog off his zip-line, Shingo made a face as if wondering if he had stepped on Ren's toes. When they reached the special weapons and the Seekers descended upon them, Shingo glanced at Ren, who seemed to concentrate on spraying them down.
Shingo: Hey, Takehaya, how do you know my sister? You two already seem on a first name basis.
Ren's eyes never left the screen as he answered,
Ren: We just happened to run into each other while I was heading home and we ended up hanging out for a while, since she used to go to my school. Turns out we had some common interests.
Shingo: Like what? Usagi-baka sucks at video games!
Ren: It's still a common interest, dude. Besides, don't you think it's harsh calling her baka? Why don't you call her Onee-san or something?
Shingo: Why should I? Usagi-baka is a born idiot! It's a wonder she managed to get into high school at all. She has bad grades and sucks at sports! Now mom's busy wondering when she's going to find a boyfriend, but who would want to go out with her?!
Ren: Dude, do you have any idea how many guys would want her if she came to my old school?
Shingo: Eh, they'd probably just want to do ecchi things to her. The only thing good about Usagi-baka these days is her figure filling out! Maybe all the food she eats is going into her boobs and ass. She's just a bimbo!
Ren's eye twitched, he was getting annoyed, but Shingo's ranting continued,
Shingo: Now her friends are much better: Hino-san's really cool and has a great singing voice, Mizuno-san's really smart, Kino-san's cooking is even better than my mom's, and Aino-san's really athletic and has that awesome British accent! Say, Takehaya, you know them, right? Who would you go out with if you had the chance?
Ren:
"I actually like Usagi-san"
"I think Rei-san is pretty cool, too."
"I prefer someone like Ami-san."
"Yeah, Makoto-san's cooking is really good!"
"I think Minako-san and I have the most in common."
"I actually like Usagi-san"
"I think Rei-san is pretty cool, too."
"I prefer someone like Ami-san."
"Yeah, Makoto-san's cooking is really good!"
"I think Minako-san and I have the most in common."
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Oh boy, we're going with the Japanese names? Okay, one minute...
Several Google image searches later, I say Ami is where it's at.
Several Google image searches later, I say Ami is where it's at.
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leonard267
FAKKU Non-Writer
Xenon wrote...
Oh boy, we're going with the Japanese names? Okay, one minute...Several Google image searches later, I say Ami is where it's at.
crazr wrote...
Good lord, Japanese names... Hm... I'm fine with either Makoto or Ami.I noticed that the both of you are choosing characters that aren't yet introduced formally and require a Google search. It is in my book a good response. However, I'd like to be different. I say that we create some conflict and introduce some humour by choosing the woman that annoys Shingo the most.
"I actually like Usagi-san" please.
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Xenon wrote...
Oh boy, we're going with the Japanese names? Okay, one minute...Several Google image searches later, I say Ami is where it's at.
crazr wrote...
Good lord, Japanese names... Hm... I'm fine with either Makoto or Ami.Yeah, I'm basing this from the original, since I hate the dub for various reasons. Strange thing is, I figured it would be a Given, consider Stars was never aired in the west because of the Starlights being genderfluid, or transgender if you prefer that term
Anyway, let's see if we get more responses before I put the next bit. I'm at work,(as of writing this) so there should be some extra time for others to post
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
WanderingBlackDragon wrote...
Yeah, I'm basing this from the original, since I hate the dub for various reasons. Strange thing is, I figured it would be a Given, consider Stars was never aired in the west because of the Starlights being genderfluid, or transgender if you prefer that termAnyway, let's see if we get more responses before I put the next bit. I'm at work,(as of writing this) so there should be some extra time for others to post
Well, it's not so much of a preference of the dub over the sub, or any political matters within the content, but rather that even the dub names like Serena, Darien, and uh...Lita, Raye, Amy, and Mina (I had to Google those) aren't as well known to me personally as well...Sailor Moon, Mars, Mercury, Jupiter, and Venus, as well as Tuxedo Mask.
Sorry, I just don't know the series too well, but I'll try to participate even without that knowledge. I'll just need to consult the series wiki for a lot of what you write about with this.
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Xenon wrote...
Well, it's not so much of a preference of the dub over the sub, or any political matters within the content, but rather that even the dub names like Serena, Darien, and uh...Lita, Raye, Amy, and Mina (I had to Google those) aren't as well known to me personally as well...Sailor Moon, Mars, Mercury, Jupiter, and Venus, as well as Tuxedo Mask.
Sorry, I just don't know the series too well, but I'll try to participate even without that knowledge. I'll just need to consult the series wiki for a lot of what you write about with this.
Oh, the typos. I should have responded when I wasn't tired. I meant to say; since I mentioned Stars, I figured it would be a given I was working off the original
You also reminded me that I have to make sure I'm accommodating to people who aren't well versed in the show's lore. So I have to find ways to teach the players about the characters and setting without talking down to them or boring them exposition
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Alright, after getting some selections, Ami wins out. Now, in this next part, I'm going to test out what I'll call "Dynamic Response". Usually in CYOA and Visual Novel games, the player would have to select one of a few options and that would continue the story.
However, since this game is much more interactive, what I'd like to try is have the players simply say what they would have Ren say and/or do, and whichever is the mean of the players' response, will be what Ren does.
For example: Let's say Ren finds a girl whose cat is "stuck" in a tree and the girl asks him to get it down.
Player A Would say to climb the tree.
Player B suggests Ren shout to get the cat down
Player C suggest getting something to entice the cat then climb the tree
Since more players suggested climbing the tree, Ren will definitely do that.
Think of it as like D&D where the players explain their choice of actions. Now, on with the story
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But, what?
However, since this game is much more interactive, what I'd like to try is have the players simply say what they would have Ren say and/or do, and whichever is the mean of the players' response, will be what Ren does.
For example: Let's say Ren finds a girl whose cat is "stuck" in a tree and the girl asks him to get it down.
Player A Would say to climb the tree.
Player B suggests Ren shout to get the cat down
Player C suggest getting something to entice the cat then climb the tree
Since more players suggested climbing the tree, Ren will definitely do that.
Think of it as like D&D where the players explain their choice of actions. Now, on with the story
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Spoiler:
But, what?
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Xenon
FAKKU Writer
Suggest Ami to douse the pyre with her powers to prevent more of the books from burning, then confront the extremists and engage them with an ethical rant explaining the error of their narrow-minded separatist ways.
Probably will go unheard, but hey, gotta give them a chance, right?
Probably will go unheard, but hey, gotta give them a chance, right?
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And now comes the last bit.
This will conclude the demo of the CYOA game. Any further questions, comments, suggestions and the like can be left in subsequent replies of this thread. Afterward, I'll take everything gathered from here to be implemented for improvements and put together the proper game, which I hope to begin in a few weeks, to a months time.
Spoiler:
This will conclude the demo of the CYOA game. Any further questions, comments, suggestions and the like can be left in subsequent replies of this thread. Afterward, I'll take everything gathered from here to be implemented for improvements and put together the proper game, which I hope to begin in a few weeks, to a months time.
