Find_Vega wrote...
MegaTenLove wrote...
Wow this was a great set of submissions. I was stuck for a long time between Lonely Hearts and Of Hot Chocolate and Secret Santas.
I thank you for enjoying my entry :3 and as much as I enjoyed the unique setting of Lonely Heart I personally felt no emotional attachment to the characters. If it was 1600 or more I bet this could have been resolved.In short I wanted more
I did really like your characters and I do understand your point. Still, I liked Lonely Hearts for what it was and found it enjoyable too.
I ran into a similar problem with my own entry, actually. I couldn't have the resolution I wanted because I couldn't sacrifice what I'd already written. Not used to writing under 1500 words. I'm more of a 2?00 word guy, I guess.
Did you write what you had originally planned? I had started out with a yandere turn of events, but then couldn't find a way to bring FAKKU into it without losing the silliness I was going for.