Short locker room scene...
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I’ve been writing lemons for a while. This one is short and fast paced and I usually spend more time on it… but I wrote this in like… 15 minutes and it’s already 3:30 AM… Anyway, here are the characters I usually use for lemon fics.
Ran – The main character. 21 years old and a girl who discovers that her voice is a power source. She has the ability to send out waves of energy in different forms just by speaking. When using her voice, she can send electric charges and start cars, break vending machines, that sort of thing. (When she uses this ability, she usually whistles.)
Eagle – He discovers her ability when he sees her use it. He is a scientist who is interested in her ability. He convinces Ran to allow him to conduct experiments to determine the source of her ability. Sometimes it hard o determine whether he is interested in Ran or just her ability. He is 24 years old.
William – Eagle’s bulter/assistant. William is usually the one who takes part in the experiment with Ran. Sophisticated and practical, he doesn’t fully accept his interests in Ran because of Eagle. William looks the same age as Eagle when he really is already 30.
Eisen – The REAL scientist. He devices all the types of tests and studies them without end. He is a sadistic smart ass who loves to tease Ran. As age 36, he is the oldest of the group, making him in charge (or at least believe that he’s in charge).
The story might seem similar to Code-E, but I assure you… it’s plenty different. It’s a fantasy thing. Complete with spirits and demons and pirates. (No…there aren’t any pirates….)
Anyway…. Here’s a short one from the story.
Ran couldn’t believe she was doing this. First she was just cleaning the dojo and all of a sudden Eagle decided to play some dumb joke by pretending to drop the water bottle on her. Of course, the bottle slipped out of his hand—which is why it was so funny.
It was strange to see his hands all over her exposed breast. All she wanted to do was squeeze out the water on her shirt when he suddenly just walked in on her topless. Whether or not he knew he entered the girls’ locker room was still a mystery to her. The next thing she knew, her bra was snapped off and the groping started.
This wasn’t the first time they got too close. Still—
“That’s not fair.” Eagle said, squeezing her breast from behind. He started rubbing his hard member against her backside as he pinched her nipples. “You can’t just go exposing yourself to me, I loose control.” He was about to kiss her when suddenly, they heard voices from outside the room. Female voices.
Fuck.
Almost instinctively she grabbed her cold, damp shirt and struggled to get it on as she searched for a place to hide. Luckily, Eagle already had a spot I mind and pulled her into the large closet before the other club members even spotted them
So now they were in a closet. Great.
“This closet,” Ran started. “Is stupid.”
“This closet is stinky, that’s what it is..” Eagle chuckled. She was about to move when he suddenly cupped her breasts again.
“You smell so good.” He whispered as he planted soft kisses on her the back of her neck.
He slipped his hand up her shirt and played with her breast. He pinched and rubbed her nipple until she gave in and let out an erotic moan. She couldn’t even see him since her back was facing him. There was no room to move much. Space was scarce and there wasn’t much light—they were in a closet after all. He pushed his erection against her as he chuckled. She felt herself jump when she felt something slip into her wet gym shorts.
“What are you doing?” She whispered, her breath breaking into short gasps as she felt his fingers trace her feminine folds. “Ah—I…don’t want to do this here.”
“Don’t lie.” Eagle whispered as he licked the back of her ear ever so slowly. He gave a small chuckle after he felt her flinch. “Look at that,” He slipped his middle finger inside her. “Why is it so wet?”
“Shut u-up,” She was already sensitive as it is. Her back arched a little as he continued to slip in and out slowly. She felt his finger inside her as it explored. She realized how moist she became and heated up. “I—it’s the water. It’s because y-you sprayed it ah-all over m-me!” Her whispers were barely heard.
“You know what else I want to spray all over you?” She felt him breathe down her neck.
Suddenly he entered his index finger and began rubbing her faster and harder.
“Don’t…” She couldn’t even finish her sentence. Her moans were lingering and she prayed to god that the voices from the outside were muffling them. Biting her lip, she couldn’t help make those noises that she made.
“Come on. You know I like the sounds you make.” Eagle then licked her neck. “You have such a special voice. Let me hear you.” When she refused, his quickened his pace until he felt her lean on him for support.
He left her breast to undo his pants, sighing with relief after he exposed his tool. After withdrawing his fingers, he then leaned forward and slowly slipped his dick between he folds without entering her at all. He rubbed her clit and she began to buckle.
“Let me hear it; your voice.”
“Don’t do this. They’ll hear me.” Ran held herself up by pushing against the cold surface of the closet. “Oh god, you’re so hot and hard. You have to sto-Ah!” She practically squealed when he rocked harder and faster with a force. It was amazing how he was driving her up the way when he hasn’t even entered her yet. Sweat dripped from their temples. They could feel the closet swaying, but none of them could stop it. The sloppy sounds didn’t stop either. With each thrust of pelvis against her backside, it made them go crazy.
“Don’t….” She whimpered. “God, Eagle, please don’t.”
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught I his own rapture.
“Don’t…” Her voice shook. “Do it.” She wasn’t making sense to herself. She didn’t even know what to say. She buckled hard as she moaned with such ecstasy, praying that no one could hear her. She knew he was playing her—that he wanted to hear her voice because he loved it when she made these sounds. He continued to push for it.
“Do you want me to stop?” He slowed a little, sliding against her slowly then quickly, softly then forcefully. “Do you want me to stop?”
“Oohh, don’t…” She lost her mind. “No..No..Don’t stop. Rub me….more.”
“Oh god that voice. I love it. I love that voice…” His body began moving on its own. He traced her nipples, her belly and thighs and until she moaned more and more.
“Eagle… do it harder… harder!”
“Oh fuck, yes!” He rubbed and shifted and shook her they way she wanted. He pinched her nipples and she almost laughed at the sheer pleasure. He tugged and fondled with her breast and it drove her to the edge.
“Oh yes! Yes! Oh Fuck, Eagle. Fuck me crazy. I’m going crazy.” She shook and shook, she was so close. Ran’s arms were hot against the walls around her as she kept herself from falling. Her pussy felt so hot and wet and sticky. “Oh, Eagle. Ooohhh Eagle!”
“I’m fucking you…” His voice was hot in her ear. “I’m there…I’m right there.!”
“Oh god! Ah! Aaahhh!! I’m-I’m cumming! I…I…ah! Ah! Aaaaaaaahhhh!!” As their sweaty bodies leaned against each other, she thought of how much she wanted to die.
There was no way that no one heard that.
Would love to get feed back on this.
Ran – The main character. 21 years old and a girl who discovers that her voice is a power source. She has the ability to send out waves of energy in different forms just by speaking. When using her voice, she can send electric charges and start cars, break vending machines, that sort of thing. (When she uses this ability, she usually whistles.)
Eagle – He discovers her ability when he sees her use it. He is a scientist who is interested in her ability. He convinces Ran to allow him to conduct experiments to determine the source of her ability. Sometimes it hard o determine whether he is interested in Ran or just her ability. He is 24 years old.
William – Eagle’s bulter/assistant. William is usually the one who takes part in the experiment with Ran. Sophisticated and practical, he doesn’t fully accept his interests in Ran because of Eagle. William looks the same age as Eagle when he really is already 30.
Eisen – The REAL scientist. He devices all the types of tests and studies them without end. He is a sadistic smart ass who loves to tease Ran. As age 36, he is the oldest of the group, making him in charge (or at least believe that he’s in charge).
The story might seem similar to Code-E, but I assure you… it’s plenty different. It’s a fantasy thing. Complete with spirits and demons and pirates. (No…there aren’t any pirates….)
Anyway…. Here’s a short one from the story.
Ran couldn’t believe she was doing this. First she was just cleaning the dojo and all of a sudden Eagle decided to play some dumb joke by pretending to drop the water bottle on her. Of course, the bottle slipped out of his hand—which is why it was so funny.
It was strange to see his hands all over her exposed breast. All she wanted to do was squeeze out the water on her shirt when he suddenly just walked in on her topless. Whether or not he knew he entered the girls’ locker room was still a mystery to her. The next thing she knew, her bra was snapped off and the groping started.
This wasn’t the first time they got too close. Still—
“That’s not fair.” Eagle said, squeezing her breast from behind. He started rubbing his hard member against her backside as he pinched her nipples. “You can’t just go exposing yourself to me, I loose control.” He was about to kiss her when suddenly, they heard voices from outside the room. Female voices.
Fuck.
Almost instinctively she grabbed her cold, damp shirt and struggled to get it on as she searched for a place to hide. Luckily, Eagle already had a spot I mind and pulled her into the large closet before the other club members even spotted them
So now they were in a closet. Great.
“This closet,” Ran started. “Is stupid.”
“This closet is stinky, that’s what it is..” Eagle chuckled. She was about to move when he suddenly cupped her breasts again.
“You smell so good.” He whispered as he planted soft kisses on her the back of her neck.
He slipped his hand up her shirt and played with her breast. He pinched and rubbed her nipple until she gave in and let out an erotic moan. She couldn’t even see him since her back was facing him. There was no room to move much. Space was scarce and there wasn’t much light—they were in a closet after all. He pushed his erection against her as he chuckled. She felt herself jump when she felt something slip into her wet gym shorts.
“What are you doing?” She whispered, her breath breaking into short gasps as she felt his fingers trace her feminine folds. “Ah—I…don’t want to do this here.”
“Don’t lie.” Eagle whispered as he licked the back of her ear ever so slowly. He gave a small chuckle after he felt her flinch. “Look at that,” He slipped his middle finger inside her. “Why is it so wet?”
“Shut u-up,” She was already sensitive as it is. Her back arched a little as he continued to slip in and out slowly. She felt his finger inside her as it explored. She realized how moist she became and heated up. “I—it’s the water. It’s because y-you sprayed it ah-all over m-me!” Her whispers were barely heard.
“You know what else I want to spray all over you?” She felt him breathe down her neck.
Suddenly he entered his index finger and began rubbing her faster and harder.
“Don’t…” She couldn’t even finish her sentence. Her moans were lingering and she prayed to god that the voices from the outside were muffling them. Biting her lip, she couldn’t help make those noises that she made.
“Come on. You know I like the sounds you make.” Eagle then licked her neck. “You have such a special voice. Let me hear you.” When she refused, his quickened his pace until he felt her lean on him for support.
He left her breast to undo his pants, sighing with relief after he exposed his tool. After withdrawing his fingers, he then leaned forward and slowly slipped his dick between he folds without entering her at all. He rubbed her clit and she began to buckle.
“Let me hear it; your voice.”
“Don’t do this. They’ll hear me.” Ran held herself up by pushing against the cold surface of the closet. “Oh god, you’re so hot and hard. You have to sto-Ah!” She practically squealed when he rocked harder and faster with a force. It was amazing how he was driving her up the way when he hasn’t even entered her yet. Sweat dripped from their temples. They could feel the closet swaying, but none of them could stop it. The sloppy sounds didn’t stop either. With each thrust of pelvis against her backside, it made them go crazy.
“Don’t….” She whimpered. “God, Eagle, please don’t.”
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught I his own rapture.
“Don’t…” Her voice shook. “Do it.” She wasn’t making sense to herself. She didn’t even know what to say. She buckled hard as she moaned with such ecstasy, praying that no one could hear her. She knew he was playing her—that he wanted to hear her voice because he loved it when she made these sounds. He continued to push for it.
“Do you want me to stop?” He slowed a little, sliding against her slowly then quickly, softly then forcefully. “Do you want me to stop?”
“Oohh, don’t…” She lost her mind. “No..No..Don’t stop. Rub me….more.”
“Oh god that voice. I love it. I love that voice…” His body began moving on its own. He traced her nipples, her belly and thighs and until she moaned more and more.
“Eagle… do it harder… harder!”
“Oh fuck, yes!” He rubbed and shifted and shook her they way she wanted. He pinched her nipples and she almost laughed at the sheer pleasure. He tugged and fondled with her breast and it drove her to the edge.
“Oh yes! Yes! Oh Fuck, Eagle. Fuck me crazy. I’m going crazy.” She shook and shook, she was so close. Ran’s arms were hot against the walls around her as she kept herself from falling. Her pussy felt so hot and wet and sticky. “Oh, Eagle. Ooohhh Eagle!”
“I’m fucking you…” His voice was hot in her ear. “I’m there…I’m right there.!”
“Oh god! Ah! Aaahhh!! I’m-I’m cumming! I…I…ah! Ah! Aaaaaaaahhhh!!” As their sweaty bodies leaned against each other, she thought of how much she wanted to die.
There was no way that no one heard that.
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Damm wish there was more to it...
I didn't really like the Name Eagle, just didn't appeal to me...
But that's about it...
Pretty hot stuff here
I didn't really like the Name Eagle, just didn't appeal to me...
But that's about it...
Pretty hot stuff here
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everyone throwing praise, but looking over the faults, yes it's a good idea but you will never learn if you do not work on your mistakes.
There are plenty of them, one in particular that I found that kind of bugged me.
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught I his own rapture.
should it not be:
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught in his own rapture. ?
There are plenty of them, one in particular that I found that kind of bugged me.
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught I his own rapture.
should it not be:
“What? Tell me what you want.” Eagle got caught in his own rapture. ?