So... What happens next?
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Hm, okay, let me start something.
This time the you don't neet to keep to second person, it'll be in first person.
Okay, start.
I wake up early in the morning. it's still dark out there, but it doesen't matter to me. Today will be the day when my well earned vacation starts. I ordered the plane tickets to Bora bora. From now on for a whole month I won't do more than lay on the pure white sand and soak in the clear ocean. Well I'll do other things too, damn, you can't expect me to lay 24/7 in the sand do you ? XD Gotta hurry, gotta hurry the plane will depart 6pm. Sharp. I gather my luggage, and call a cab. This will be juuuuuust perfect *huge smile*
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This time the you don't neet to keep to second person, it'll be in first person.
Okay, start.
I wake up early in the morning. it's still dark out there, but it doesen't matter to me. Today will be the day when my well earned vacation starts. I ordered the plane tickets to Bora bora. From now on for a whole month I won't do more than lay on the pure white sand and soak in the clear ocean. Well I'll do other things too, damn, you can't expect me to lay 24/7 in the sand do you ? XD Gotta hurry, gotta hurry the plane will depart 6pm. Sharp. I gather my luggage, and call a cab. This will be juuuuuust perfect *huge smile*
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(woot, finished working on my other writing just in time to join in with this one.)
...The fucking airport is a disaster, but that's not really a big surprise. My luggage was too heavy, so I had to pay extra, I forgot to take off my watch during the security check, so some sweaty pork pie from the TSA got to have a good go around with my junk. I swear, do the words "Gate Rape" mean anything to these assholes? I got to my gate on time though, so all's well that ends well I suppose. I take a cursory glance around at the assembled assortment of the dregs of humanity getting on the same plane, the standard affair mostly. A morbidly obese mother holding a sleeping kid, Fan-fucking-tastic, that baby's gonna wake up mid flight and I highly doubt that this walking advertisement for McDonalds is gonna have the energy to get up and do anything about it. There's a few geezers here and there, looking like the slightest bit of turbulence would make 'em keel over from the stress. But what's this? I see something unusual in the crowd, it's a person who...
...The fucking airport is a disaster, but that's not really a big surprise. My luggage was too heavy, so I had to pay extra, I forgot to take off my watch during the security check, so some sweaty pork pie from the TSA got to have a good go around with my junk. I swear, do the words "Gate Rape" mean anything to these assholes? I got to my gate on time though, so all's well that ends well I suppose. I take a cursory glance around at the assembled assortment of the dregs of humanity getting on the same plane, the standard affair mostly. A morbidly obese mother holding a sleeping kid, Fan-fucking-tastic, that baby's gonna wake up mid flight and I highly doubt that this walking advertisement for McDonalds is gonna have the energy to get up and do anything about it. There's a few geezers here and there, looking like the slightest bit of turbulence would make 'em keel over from the stress. But what's this? I see something unusual in the crowd, it's a person who...
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...Is cosplaying...and a failing it HARD. He's over 200 kilograms (sry don't use lbs) and he's wearing a freakin' Naruto suit. Ugh that's just.........plain nasty. I quickly turn my head away, I don't want to puke. 4 DAMN hours later I'm onboard the plane RIGHT IN THE MIDDLE OF A FATSO SANDWITCH. Fat mother and her constantly crying child on the right, and Narutard lardster on my left. Oh fuck I just sleep. I hope the don't eat me in my sleep...
edit : to those who'll continue this : Please don't use any wierd stuff, this is just a normal guy wanting to spend some quality time in Bora bora, maybe get some smokin' babe in the process, so no zombie ninjas or military operations this time, okay ? Thanks.
edit : to those who'll continue this : Please don't use any wierd stuff, this is just a normal guy wanting to spend some quality time in Bora bora, maybe get some smokin' babe in the process, so no zombie ninjas or military operations this time, okay ? Thanks.
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bfg10k17 wrote...
this is just a normal guy wanting to spend some quality time in Bora bora, maybe get some smokin' babe in the process, so no zombie ninjas or military operations this time, okay? Thanks.I lol'd. But if his story is going to be limited to a relaxing stay at the beach, I'll probably stay out of it for the time being.
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Drifter995
Neko//Night
Oh god.. first person present tense ><
Why can nobody use past tense :(
...I reach down to my bag, which is neatly sitting between my legs (I STICK MY FINGER UP TO THE LAWS OF PLANE!) and grab out a small container. I pop open the lid and stare at the large pill staring back at me. The shines on the edge of it, making it look like it has eyes.. For some reason, i imagine it saying 'hello' to me... Random. I pull it out of it's house, and swallow it whole. Time for some sleep now... 10 hours pass, And i slowly....
Why can nobody use past tense :(
...I reach down to my bag, which is neatly sitting between my legs (I STICK MY FINGER UP TO THE LAWS OF PLANE!) and grab out a small container. I pop open the lid and stare at the large pill staring back at me. The shines on the edge of it, making it look like it has eyes.. For some reason, i imagine it saying 'hello' to me... Random. I pull it out of it's house, and swallow it whole. Time for some sleep now... 10 hours pass, And i slowly....
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Jericho Antares
FAKKU Writer
...pinch the bridge of my nose, fighting back the usual feeling of vertigo from dry-swallowing my meds and immediately falling asleep afterwards. A negligible side-effect in comparison to other drugs though.
The corpulent man to my right clears his throat, and I turn to see his bloated gut in my face, the shirt straining to contain horrors I didn't even want to imagine. Around me the other passengers calmly removed their bags from the overhead bins and quietly filed out of the cabin. I on the other hand, still have my seatbelt on. I sigh and undo the annoying device, grab the bag from between my legs, and stand to take my other pack from the overhead bin. By now the Naruto uh "enthusiast" and I are the only two left on the plane.
I hear him clear his throat once again as I reach up for my bag, and I...
The corpulent man to my right clears his throat, and I turn to see his bloated gut in my face, the shirt straining to contain horrors I didn't even want to imagine. Around me the other passengers calmly removed their bags from the overhead bins and quietly filed out of the cabin. I on the other hand, still have my seatbelt on. I sigh and undo the annoying device, grab the bag from between my legs, and stand to take my other pack from the overhead bin. By now the Naruto uh "enthusiast" and I are the only two left on the plane.
I hear him clear his throat once again as I reach up for my bag, and I...
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/ended, because it failed to follow the rules...
This is how it starts:
You’re in the desert and you don’t know how you got there. Its dark and two people are standing next to you. They throw you a bag and fade away into the night. Next thing you know the ground starts to crumble beneath you. It seems as all reality is fading away. It’s pitch black; nothing can be found in any direction you look. You open the bag and see a note along with another object. You look at the note before examining the object. It reads “You have been given a special task. Imagine a new world and we will meet again.” Apprehensive and completely confused you take out the object. It appears to be…
(If you want first person you'll have to make your own.)
This is how it starts:
You’re in the desert and you don’t know how you got there. Its dark and two people are standing next to you. They throw you a bag and fade away into the night. Next thing you know the ground starts to crumble beneath you. It seems as all reality is fading away. It’s pitch black; nothing can be found in any direction you look. You open the bag and see a note along with another object. You look at the note before examining the object. It reads “You have been given a special task. Imagine a new world and we will meet again.” Apprehensive and completely confused you take out the object. It appears to be…
(If you want first person you'll have to make your own.)
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IsawIcameIconquered wrote...
/ended, because it failed to follow the rules...(If you want first person you'll have to make your own.)
Than enjoy your story thread alone, I'm gone...
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IsawIcameIconquered wrote...
/ended, because it failed to follow the rules...This is how it starts:
So you're posting a nice story, when suddenly this asshole comes along and cuts you off. "What the fuck?" you think to yourself angrily, "We finished your story already, let us do another one." But the damage has been done, and you don't really feel like contributing to this thread anymore, so you leave reluctantly. "Dammit, We were all having a good time" you say to yourself, "But I guess some people are just huge, steaming, piles of...
(If you want first person you'll have to make your own.)
Fix'd
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I only started a new story because all of you failed to follow the rules I put down in my first post. Please go someone else if you don't want to participate. For those of you who do, your welcome to end and start another. I would also appreciate it if you didn't pollute this thread any further.
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Drifter995
Neko//Night
ok then, i'll continue on with yours.. sorry for not following the rules:
"You’re in the desert and you don’t know how you got there. Its dark and two people are standing next to you. They throw you a bag and fade away into the night. Next thing you know the ground starts to crumble beneath you. It seems as all reality is fading away. It’s pitch black; nothing can be found in any direction you look. You open the bag and see a note along with another object. You look at the note before examining the object. It reads “You have been given a special task. Imagine a new world and we will meet again.” Apprehensive and completely confused you take out the object. It appears to be…"
...a picture, with some writing on the back. "We wish for a world where everyone will live in harmony." You are confused, cold and completely surrounded by darkness. You attempt to see past the hindering darkness, but fail. You try to think about the past, and how you got here.. nothing comes to mind. "Who am i? How did i get here? Who are these people?" you think. you lie on the ground and curdle up in a ball, and begin to slowly fall asleep.
"It's time.. Have you forgotten your task?" a voice says in your dream. You try to talk back, but nothing comes out. Everything is a haze, and...
"You’re in the desert and you don’t know how you got there. Its dark and two people are standing next to you. They throw you a bag and fade away into the night. Next thing you know the ground starts to crumble beneath you. It seems as all reality is fading away. It’s pitch black; nothing can be found in any direction you look. You open the bag and see a note along with another object. You look at the note before examining the object. It reads “You have been given a special task. Imagine a new world and we will meet again.” Apprehensive and completely confused you take out the object. It appears to be…"
...a picture, with some writing on the back. "We wish for a world where everyone will live in harmony." You are confused, cold and completely surrounded by darkness. You attempt to see past the hindering darkness, but fail. You try to think about the past, and how you got here.. nothing comes to mind. "Who am i? How did i get here? Who are these people?" you think. you lie on the ground and curdle up in a ball, and begin to slowly fall asleep.
"It's time.. Have you forgotten your task?" a voice says in your dream. You try to talk back, but nothing comes out. Everything is a haze, and...
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IsawIcameIconquered wrote...
I only started a new story because all of you failed to follow the rules I put down in my first post. Please go someone else if you don't want to participate. For those of you who do, your welcome to end and start another. I would also appreciate it if you didn't pollute this thread any further.Yeah, but see it from our perspective. We finished one story following your rules, and since you weren't online to start another in your own thread, we made one that followed different rules, because we only thought that your rules were to be applied to your first story. Then you come along and abruptly put an end to the story we were building because you want to start your own. This may have seemed justified to you, but from everyone else, it looked like an asshole move. I'm sorry if you were offended by an of our "Polluting", but it seemed justified from our perspective, and you shouldn't have negative-repped bfg10k17 for simply leaving the thread, as that was uncalled for.
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GroverCleaveland wrote...
Yeah, but see it from our perspective. We finished one story following your rules, and since you weren't online to start another in your own thread, we made one that followed different rules, because we only thought that your rules were to be applied to your first story. Then you come along and abruptly put an end to the story we were building because you want to start your own. This may have seemed justified to you, but from everyone else, it looked like an asshole move. I'm sorry if you were offended by an of our "Polluting", but it seemed justified from our perspective, and you shouldn't have negative-repped bfg10k17 for simply leaving the thread, as that was uncalled for.
No, I negative repped him because he started the whole thing. It just happened to be on that post. Secondly I can't be on fakku 24/7, I need sleep. Thirdly I said you could start your own. Anybody can start and end a story. The reason it needs to be in second person narrative is so that people who read it feel like they're part of the action. Saying "I" this and "I" makes it sound too personal. What I did was not irrational because I clearly stated in my first post what I wanted for this thread. It is my thread after all.
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-Continuing the story
You wake up suddenly. Your mind is in a haze and you realize you're at your house in your bed.
/end
(There, now someone can start a new one)
You wake up suddenly. Your mind is in a haze and you realize you're at your house in your bed.
/end
(There, now someone can start a new one)
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IsawIcameIconquered wrote...
GroverCleaveland wrote...
Yeah, but see it from our perspective. We finished one story following your rules, and since you weren't online to start another in your own thread, we made one that followed different rules, because we only thought that your rules were to be applied to your first story. Then you come along and abruptly put an end to the story we were building because you want to start your own. This may have seemed justified to you, but from everyone else, it looked like an asshole move. I'm sorry if you were offended by an of our "Polluting", but it seemed justified from our perspective, and you shouldn't have negative-repped bfg10k17 for simply leaving the thread, as that was uncalled for.
No, I negative repped him because he started the whole thing. It just happened to be on that post. Secondly I can't be on fakku 24/7, I need sleep. Thirdly I said you could start your own. Anybody can start and end a story. The reason it needs to be in second person narrative is so that people who read it feel like they're part of the action. Saying "I" this and "I" makes it sound too personal. What I did was not irrational because I clearly stated in my first post what I wanted for this thread. It is my thread after all.
Okay, this will be my last post here I promise, then I'll stop interrupting. That said, he started the thing because he wanted to continue making a story in this thread once one was over, and to hold him at fault for that would be patently ridiculous, especially since YOU SAY IN THE FIRST POST TO START NEW STORIES. Also, saying that the reason it needs to be in second person so that the reader can feel like a part of it, then saying it can't be in first person because that's too personal makes no logical sense, feeling like a part of it IS personal, so you should have had no problem with first person. Lastly, and this is the most important part, you can't own a thread and just because you made the topic doesn't make you lord and master over all of the posters in it, so you can't just feel justified doing things that make you look like an asshole simply because you are having an ego trip, and can't tolerate differing styles or opinions in "your" threads. The cool thing to do would be to neutralize your asinine behavior by +repping him, but do whatever you want, you have obviously proven your high level of maturity by taking the high road here.