I apologize, but the following two posts (or one if itll let me put both chapters) are my update. Please enjoy.
Im too tired to go through and italicisr thoughts. Do it later today...
THIS IS FROM fanfic.net so it hash my authour notes
Chapter 3
After Naru had rounded the corner of the dorm, she left everyone in utter silence. Even Su, with her usual thermonuclear supply of energy, was sitting still next to Motoko.
Keitaro was still trying to get his brain working, as his head was awhirl with hormone induced thoughts and imaginations. The warm feel of her body as she embraced him, the tingling feeling he had gotten when her breath breezed across his ear. Had no one else been there, and had he been a pervert, he might have tried something then. But he wasn’t that way, and so he had simply let her go.
Unfortunately, unlike the luck that hadn’t sent him flying by Naru, this wouldn’t be the same case with the rest of the group.
“Urashimaa!!” Keitaro suddenly dropped from la la land and returned from reality. Turning around to look at the tenants, he decided he should have started running first.
“WAIT MOTOKO!! I DIDN’T DO ANYTHING!!! AAAAIIIIHHHEEEEEE!!!!” It seemed Keitaro was going to be in the air no matter what he did.
Keitaro sat, tied to a chair, with the other tenants standing around him. Only Motoko and Kitsune looked like they had any murderous thoughts going through their minds. Su thought this was simply another game, and so had brought out an assortment of her crazy inventions. Shinobu merely looked worried.
“Alright,” Kitsune was saying, a small whip held loosely in her hand. A part of Keitaros mind wondered what else she might use it for. “We want to know what you did to Naru. Fess up and we won’t have to do anything to you.”
Keitaro was about to say he hadn’t done anything, when he felt something cold pressing up against his neck. Glancing down, he saw Motoko’s sword, the blunt edge pressing lightly against his throat.
“Talk!! Or I’ll tear you limb from limb.” She said, no trace of humor evident at all. Keitaro felt fear trickle into him. Kitsune you never really worried about, she wasn’t the violent type. Motoko though, she could scare even the strongest and most fearless man on the planet.
Trying to get out of the situation, Keitaro shouted “Theirs nothing to TELL!! I didn’t do anything to Naru. But in his mind he thought about it, and figured, in a way, he had. When he had discovered Naru’s secret, he had comforted and held her, being more of a loving friend then anything else. And so, in a way, he had done something.
Telling them though, wasn’t advisable. He didn’t break promises easily, especially with someone he cared dearly about. If he told them why she hadn’t decked him, he would have to reveal her secret.
A strange confidence, and boldness, crept into Keitaro. He looked into Kitsune’s and Motoko’s eyes, with no trace of fear or doubt.
“I didn’t do anything. You can believe me or not.” Keitaros voice didn’t waver, or stammer in any way. He was standing up to them, willing to take a beating to keep Naru’s secret safe, if that’s what it took.
He may not have known it, but this is what kept him from being beaten into a bloody and bruised pulp.
Motoko lost all trace of anger, for she was caught off guard by the confidence in Keitaros voice. But it wasn’t just there that she saw it. It was in his eyes, and that was what made her draw her sword back, and even put it back into its sheath.
Kitsune looked at Keitaro as if seeing him for the first time. This wasn’t the klutzy accident prone manager they were used to. This, this was the real Keitaro.
She had a feeling he was hiding something, and she was certain it involved Naru, but it wasn’t for himself that he was hiding it. She could tell when someone was hiding something for their own reasons. But whatever Keitaro was keeping secret, it had been Naru who wanted it to be.
After a moment, Motoko said, in a slightly disbelieving, yet awed tone “Alright. You’re telling the truth Urashima.” She quickly untied him and let him off the seat, where he landed on his knees and began to rub circulation back into his hands.
“Thanks” he said, thought he wasn’t exactly thankful. After a moment though, he stood up. “I’m going to go check on Naru, and make sure she’s still alright.” He then proceeded up the stairs, wondering if this was the last he’d hear from those two.
“Something’s fishy…” Kitsune said as Keitaro got out of earshot. Motoko looked over at her, wondering what she meant.
“What do you mean Kitsune? He answered us truthfully, and even I could see it.” This made her face flush a little as she realized that he might have been telling the truth all the other times.
Kitsune smirked when she saw Motokos face light up slightly. Unlike her, she had known that the other times were accidents. She simply thought it was fun to pick on him.
But now she didn’t think that’d be possible as much anymore. Or at least when it pertained to Naru’s attitude change towards him.
“Keitaro was hiding something from us Motoko, but it wasn’t for his sake.” Kitsune said after a moment, trying to figure out what it could be that Naru would want kept secret.
Motoko was confused for a moment, but Shinobu understood immediately.
“Sempai is keeping something secret for Naru-chan! Something she doesn’t want us to know!” Her eyes lit up when Kitsune nodded, happy that she had figured it out.
Motoko nodded agreement. It made sense now that she thought about it. If Keitaro was hiding something, he would have been more likely to reveal it if it involved himself. But Keitaro always thought of others first, and him second. He was one of the perfect people to share a secret with.
Then her brows furrowed. “But what would Narusegawa want to hide from us?”
Sighing, Kitsune looked up the stairs that Keitaro had gone up. “That’s a good question Motoko, and I don’t have an answer for it yet.”
Keitaro knocked lightly on Naru’s door, wondering, and hoping, that she was there. Part of him wondered if she might not be able to answer because of,… well…
Then he heard Naru call lightly through the door, and he opened it. He saw her wearing her glasses, with one of her many textbooks closed and sitting on the table. He barely noticed the edges of the magazine he had given her sticking out of it. When she saw it was him, she relaxed a little.
“Hey Keitaro. You need to talk about something?” She asked, a kind smile on her face. After a moment though, she noticed the rope burns on his wrists and sighed.
“You didn’t say anything did you?” she asked, worry and fear entering her voice. When she had gotten back to her room, she had realized she’d left him in a bad situation, and had hoped they’d simply think that she was in a very good mood.
Keitaro came over and sat next to her, smiling warmly at her. “No Naru. I didn’t tell them. I don’t break promises.” He put his hand on her shoulder to reinforce the friendship that had seemed to truly come to be ever since he had found out.
Keitaro was once again surprised when Naru embraced him once more, telling him how happy she was that he hadn’t.
When she pulled away, Keitaro felt a longing go through him, which told him he should have kept her close to him. But he wouldn’t let that longing take over. He wasn’t some pervert to take advantage of a girl.
After a moment, Naru stood up and , grapping his hand, led him over to one of the walls in her room, where a small scroll curtain hung from. She pushed it aside to reveal a dim tunnel.
“Come on Keitaro, I want to show you something.”
Naru led Keitaro through the maze of tunnels into the dorms attic, which was lit by one or two lamps hanging from the ceiling. After they came in, she reached behind a crate and pulled out two small bottles of Sake. Handing him one, she opened her own and took a few tentative sips from it.
“This is my… hiding place.” She said after a moment. Keitaro understood immediately, and so decided to say nothing and let her continue.
“I don’t come here just for that though.. I come here to think about things, or to get away from all the studying” She said after another sip or two.
They talked for a while, not really about anything important. Simply two friends talking about the general things of life with no one to interrupt them.
After about half an hour, they had both finished two bottles of Sake, and it was starting to show. Naru was slowly rocking back and forth and Keitaro was having trouble seeing, even with his glasses.
Suddenly, he heard Naru say “Keitaro, I want to thank you for keeping my secret safe.” Keitaro, in state he was in, merely nodded, and didn’t notice till she was inches away from his face that she had moved.
Naru slowly pulled Keitaro’s glasses off, and leaned forward so that their lips met.
Keitaro was too shocked to resist, or for that manner do anything. And even if he could have, he wouldn’t. After a moment, he relaxed into the kiss, and they began to explore each others mouth.
Neither of them knew how long the kiss lasted, but it stopped for a moment when, without thinking about it, Keitaro’s left hand came up and cupped cupped her breast, fondling it and massaging it.
Naru let out a low, pleasure filled moan. What she was feeling was already starting to outweigh what she felt when she did it herself. She tried to think about the difference, but gave up on thinking about anything as he began to tease her nipple.
She let out another moan, which broke the kiss, but they were soon back to entwining themselves closer together, kissing and rubbing, teasing each other as they felt the shape of each others body.
Soon, they both felt something rubbing against each other, and soon, Naru was pulling down his pants, and soon his underwear too. Then, she began to rub her hand up and down it, feeling it pulse as she went. This time, it was Keitaro who moaned.
After giving him a small smile, she brought her mouth down and started to softly tease it with her tongue. This time he shuddered from the shear pleasure, but then he gasped when her mouth came down on it.
For the next few minutes, all either of them felt was simply pleasure. Naru felt as if she had played with herself a few times in a row as her mouth went up and down.
Then Keitaro began to feel a pressure building, and he looked to Naru, who seemed almost to be in a trance.
“N-Naru… I think I’m going to… Ah!”
The pressure released, and Naru stopped for a moment as his cum slowly dripped out of her mouth. She pulled her face up, and off of him, and licked her lips as she swallowed it.
Suddenly, with afterglow coming down, Keitaros mind started to function properly. His eyes went wide for a moment, then he hastily pulled his clothes back on, and hurried for the tunnel. Before he left, he said
“I’m Sorry Naru-chan!” And with that, he ran for his room, hoping to fall asleep and wake up to find it had all been a dream.
Naru looked after him, wondering what had made him do that. Then she too began to think for a moment, and realized what she had done.
But instead of feeling guilty, as Keitaro was now, she felt better in a way. But she also felt a strange familiarly to this situation.
Then she remembered something else, and what had brought her to start looking at naked pictures of women.
“Mutsumi…” She murmured….
A/N: Interesting no? I am not really trying to bring her off the yuri track, yet. I just figured those reading this would want something interesting to happen. And besides, this gives a good reason for the cliffhanger ideal :D
Chapter 4
Naru sat in the attic, thinking about everything that had happened in the last week, and then, remembering back to when they had woken up on Mutsumi’s Island.
“That’s when… that’s when it happened…” Naru whispered to herself, afraid that saying it louder would make it all the more real.
After a moment, she tried to remember as much as she could of that night.
Naru slowly began to open her eyes as she regained consciousness. She saw a dark blue sky, highlighted by twinkling stars and a crescent moon. She could feel the heat of a crackling fire near her.
“Ara ara, you’re finally up.” She heard from behind her, and she looked up to see the smiling face of Mutsumi. Her smiling and carefree face helped reassure her that she was still alive.
“M-Mutsumi, where are we?” Naru asked, wincing as she tried to sit up. She felt as if she had been thrown around for the last few hours. Which, now that she thought about it, she had.
Mutsumi thought for a moment, and said “Ara, I have no ideal.”
Naru almost bolted up and strangled Mutsumi at that, but then stopped for a moment. More of her higher thought processes had started to return to her, and she suddenly realized…
…neither of them was wearing anything!
“MUTSUMI!! WHERE ARE MY CLOTHES!!?” Naru shouted, bringing each of her hands to shield her chest and slit from prying eyes. As for Mutsumi, she seemed oblivious to the ideal of other people watching.
She pointed towards the fire, where their clothes sat. “I took them off because they were too wet. We would have caught a cold.”
Naru’s anger dropped for a moment, but then, she asked
“What about Keitaro? Did he make it?”
Mutsumi again pointed, this time a bit further from the fire, sat the unconscious form of Keitaro, still clothed. “His clothes are dry for some reason. It’s almost as if he weren’t in the water at all.”
Naru sat back down after that, wondering what they were going to do, or what they could do to get out of the situation. Short of, by a big stroke of luck, a ship passing by the Island, she felt that they would be there for days, maybe weeks.
And it was because she was so deep in thought that she didn’t notice Mutsumi moving closer, until she felt her face moving up to her lips.
Naru’s eyes widened at the contact, completely unexpecting the move, especially from Mutsumi. But Mutsumi kept going, and despite an attempt to get free, Naru slowly began to return the kiss, each of them exploring the others mouth.
After a moment, Mutsumi began to lightly push Naru to the ground, and soon, they were both caressing each other, completely awash in the waves of pleasure that they felt.
After a bit, Mutsumi moved herself so that her slit was right above Narus. After smiling at Naru, she lowered it, and they both gasped at the feeling. When the spike of pleasure had passed, Mutsumi began to slowly rock back and forth, onto Narus slit. As each one’s pleasure began to build, Naru’s own hips began to rock back and forth, and soon they were moving even faster then before.
“N-Naru, I t-think I’m coming!!” Mutsumi shouted; as a high spike of pleasure went through both of them as they both reached there peak.
Awash in her own pleasure, Naru lost consciousness once more.
Her mind coming back to the attic, where her present self was, she contemplated the entire experience. How was it that she hadn’t remembered? Was it because part of her mind was unwilling to accept that it had happened?
After a moment, she nodded to herself. It made the most sense, seeing as it was how she had thought about her relationship with Keitaro. Part of her didn’t want to acknowledge the feelings she had for him, and so she believed they weren’t there.
Sighing to herself, she made her way through the tunnel, her destination being her room, for a good nights rest, and some time to contemplate who she was.
Keitaro knelt on his futon, his mind awhirl with what had happened. His mind was in chaos, one side of him screaming that it shouldn’t have happened at all, while another side calmly stated that he had wanted it, and had enjoyed it. And thus nothing was wrong.
Keitaro thought that it was that calm voice that was winning the battle, as the screaming kept getting lower and lower as the night went on.
But what was really bothering him, was not his feelings on the matter, but Narus. He had left in a rush, without even bothering to find out what she thought.
It’s because you don’t want to find out it was a one time thing his mind whispered to him, and he knew it was right. He knew Naru’s secret, and didn’t want to find out that what she had done wouldn’t be done to him by her again.
Sighing to himself, he laid back down onto his futon, hoping that he would be able to get a good night’s sleep.
At night, the steps leading up to Hinata Dorms were even more beautiful, especially with a full moon to truly light up the stairway, and the floating cherry leaves and blossoms that whirled in the air.
A single person was walking up the steps, taking her time to enjoy the sight. On her right shoulder, a small black cat sat, relaxing in the light of the moon.
As the girl reached the top, she took in the sight of Hinata, and whispered into the night air
“I’m home Oni-chan, your dear sweet Kanako.”
A/N: I’ve had a request of adding Kanako, and since Kanako is my next favorite character after Naru, I put her in for the heck of it. Also, this is a little shorter then the last chapters, but I was Kinda rushing today.