[Summer Contest Entry 2012] Friend Zone
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The merciful wind wisped past her legs, shooting up her skirt in front of my lustful eyes. She was quick to cover her strawberry covered snow white panties, and then let out a shrieking yelp. I gave an exhausting sigh and sped to come up right next to her. I rose out my hand to grab onto her shoulder, but then a shadow gave me a rough shove to the left. Her pathway smelled of daffodils, tripping over my pants and falling down right behind her. “Oh, hey there!” Ai, the girl I fantasize about 24/7, patted the stranger that pushed me.
“Sorry about being late, something was in my way.” The guy glared back at me, and then rested his hand along her beautifully curved lower back. I picked my bold glasses off of the ground and had the walk of embarrassment on the way to the school of our lives.
In class, Ai gently tapped my hand and gave my heart a little break from earlier dreadful events. A wide smile grew on my face, as we just sat there together after the last bell. “I was thinking of going to the beach for a little weekend getaway during the summer. My parents have a beach house there and I was thinking about bringing you, if you feel like spending a little time with me.” Her siren voice entranced me and filled me up with hope.
“Will it be just the two of us?” I cautiously asked making sure that evil bastard doesn’t come with us.
“Yup, it will be just us, so will your parents be okay with it?” I learned to glance at every aspect of her goddess like features while listening to her words.
“I’m sure they will, when is it?” I was all hyped for this chance.
“This weekend coming up, so be prepared to have the best time of your life.”
I put past that the hostile person from earlier was Ai’s boyfriend and went straight home to the computer to fap away my desires. I couldn’t stop imagining that beautiful bust of Ai’s just barely kept in that flimsy bikini top of hers. I was scoping my favorite website, Fakku.net; I was reading only the slutty beach hentai, at the moment... After masturbating for like 30 minutes, I then noticed how every one of these guys in the hentai don’t have any of my looks. If I just look like these guys, then will she prefer me over that pile of crap boyfriend? I remembered, instead of these dorky glasses, I could use the contacts my mother got me a few weeks ago. I cleaned up with the absorbent napkins lying around, zipped up my cargo shorts, and then snoozed, waiting for tomorrow.
I started packing up my bag for the trip today, I already asked my father and he was actually happy that I was leaving, sadly. I went into the bathroom and threw my stuff in a pile. I grabbed the contact case and tried to remember the less painful way of putting these in. I pulled my eyes wide open and took a good look at the bright blue eyes I got from my mom, which would never hide behind these glasses again. “I heard you were going to be gone all weekend long, where are you going?” My older brother Kabuto asked, popping in the door way.
“I’m going to the beach with Ai at her beach house.” I bragged.
“That hottie wants you to go on vacation with her?” He was surprised about my luck, and then looked over the clothes I had on and the crumpled clothes in my lump of junk. “I’ll do you a favor little bro, but you got to introduce me to her sister Ren some time.” He ordered.
After struggling so much, I finally put in the frustrating lenses. I almost zipped up my whole bag, until Kabuto dropped a bunch of clothes on my head. “Put this in your bag and throw away that pig sty in your luggage, and put this on. Thank me later, with that arrangement.” He handed me an outfit to wear, and then left to go back into his room. It was an oversized yellow t shirt with black numbers †˜07’, black basketball shorts, and some white sneakers. I usually have plaid shirts… I dumped my clothes and put Kabuto’s clothes in my suit case. I slipped on the new clothes and instantly felt relieved of not having to buy stuff to wear. I looked into my bedroom mirror and fingered through my black hair. With the clear contacts in and my bangs drifting off to the side, I look completely different from what I usually do lug around.
My parents dropped me off at the designated place, and the breeze felt nice. The sand on the way to the front door kept needling me at the back of my legs. A spark on excitement electrocuted me, as I opened the door. It was unlocked, but no one to greet me or whatever. I wondered if I was the first person here, but then why would the front door be unlocked? It was a nice looking Japanese vacation home. I left my crap on the couch in the living room and went down the hall. I inched towards the only closed door and hesitated at the sound of moans. Screw it all! She brought her damn boyfriend and stuck me in the friend zone again! I stormed back into the living room and plopped onto the couch with my bags.
I sat there watching television till 10 minutes later when they finally left their steam hut. He had his arms around her, she giggled and he groped under luscious breasts. Instant jealousy arose in me, and then she finally realized the lonely loser was here. “I thought you would have been here at 8 or something.” Ai spoke.
“Or something, I have been here for almost half an hour.” I grunted and quickly stood up from the couch.
“Even though his looks changed, he still seems like a little bitch.” Her boyfriend †˜Daichi’ was getting face to face with me, snorting in my space. Something clicked and my body reacted with his remark, I †˜slightly’ knuckled him in the jaw. Daichi fell back and hit the floor pretty hard, bouncing his head on the wood. Ferocity left and in came the treading guilt, Ai was wide eyes and in shock.
Immediate reaction was to leave the hell that was about to be brought down. I bolted to the beach and cut into the remote area behind the rocks, without people. I took a deep breath, before getting a lecture from the very girl I love, following right behind me. “What the hell was that?” She shouted, grabbing ahold of my shoulder, turned me around towards her, and started digging into me with her fingers.
I stayed quiet, but looked into her lime green eyes.
“Why aren’t you talking to me, you have been acting different lately, and you changed your attire! What is up with you?” she questioned, her voice heightened and became alarming.
I didn’t know exactly what to say, she never yelled at me before.
“Answer me!” She broke into tears from the anger and silence, and started pummeling me on the chest.
Her tears trickled down her face and I went to wipe them, but she smacked my hand away. I snatched her hands and forced her back against one of the rocks. “I love you, I’m sorry that I’m not enough of a jack ass to match your tastes, but I love you anyway. I apologize for everything, but I’m not apologizing for punching that jerk. Your too much for him, and he doesn’t deserve you.” I stated, putting a tighter grip on her.
“B-but I… I can’t-.” I cut her off with a kiss, and it did not feel anything like the dreams, it felt way better. Our tongues collided with each other through her soft open mouth, and then I loosened my hands and held onto her waist. There was no resistance at all, and she had her hands at the back of my head. I was in nirvana with her, and then my dreams began to come true as the baby blue dress came undone and dropped to the ground.
We had nicks and burns from grinding against the sand, but it was amazing. After what happened, her trashy boyfriend became her ex. We walk hand in hand now, together, like how I always wanted. Even now I still worship her, its necessary unless I don’t want sex, which I do. “I love you.” The words that I hear every now and then from her, are finally mine.
“Sorry about being late, something was in my way.” The guy glared back at me, and then rested his hand along her beautifully curved lower back. I picked my bold glasses off of the ground and had the walk of embarrassment on the way to the school of our lives.
In class, Ai gently tapped my hand and gave my heart a little break from earlier dreadful events. A wide smile grew on my face, as we just sat there together after the last bell. “I was thinking of going to the beach for a little weekend getaway during the summer. My parents have a beach house there and I was thinking about bringing you, if you feel like spending a little time with me.” Her siren voice entranced me and filled me up with hope.
“Will it be just the two of us?” I cautiously asked making sure that evil bastard doesn’t come with us.
“Yup, it will be just us, so will your parents be okay with it?” I learned to glance at every aspect of her goddess like features while listening to her words.
“I’m sure they will, when is it?” I was all hyped for this chance.
“This weekend coming up, so be prepared to have the best time of your life.”
I put past that the hostile person from earlier was Ai’s boyfriend and went straight home to the computer to fap away my desires. I couldn’t stop imagining that beautiful bust of Ai’s just barely kept in that flimsy bikini top of hers. I was scoping my favorite website, Fakku.net; I was reading only the slutty beach hentai, at the moment... After masturbating for like 30 minutes, I then noticed how every one of these guys in the hentai don’t have any of my looks. If I just look like these guys, then will she prefer me over that pile of crap boyfriend? I remembered, instead of these dorky glasses, I could use the contacts my mother got me a few weeks ago. I cleaned up with the absorbent napkins lying around, zipped up my cargo shorts, and then snoozed, waiting for tomorrow.
I started packing up my bag for the trip today, I already asked my father and he was actually happy that I was leaving, sadly. I went into the bathroom and threw my stuff in a pile. I grabbed the contact case and tried to remember the less painful way of putting these in. I pulled my eyes wide open and took a good look at the bright blue eyes I got from my mom, which would never hide behind these glasses again. “I heard you were going to be gone all weekend long, where are you going?” My older brother Kabuto asked, popping in the door way.
“I’m going to the beach with Ai at her beach house.” I bragged.
“That hottie wants you to go on vacation with her?” He was surprised about my luck, and then looked over the clothes I had on and the crumpled clothes in my lump of junk. “I’ll do you a favor little bro, but you got to introduce me to her sister Ren some time.” He ordered.
After struggling so much, I finally put in the frustrating lenses. I almost zipped up my whole bag, until Kabuto dropped a bunch of clothes on my head. “Put this in your bag and throw away that pig sty in your luggage, and put this on. Thank me later, with that arrangement.” He handed me an outfit to wear, and then left to go back into his room. It was an oversized yellow t shirt with black numbers †˜07’, black basketball shorts, and some white sneakers. I usually have plaid shirts… I dumped my clothes and put Kabuto’s clothes in my suit case. I slipped on the new clothes and instantly felt relieved of not having to buy stuff to wear. I looked into my bedroom mirror and fingered through my black hair. With the clear contacts in and my bangs drifting off to the side, I look completely different from what I usually do lug around.
My parents dropped me off at the designated place, and the breeze felt nice. The sand on the way to the front door kept needling me at the back of my legs. A spark on excitement electrocuted me, as I opened the door. It was unlocked, but no one to greet me or whatever. I wondered if I was the first person here, but then why would the front door be unlocked? It was a nice looking Japanese vacation home. I left my crap on the couch in the living room and went down the hall. I inched towards the only closed door and hesitated at the sound of moans. Screw it all! She brought her damn boyfriend and stuck me in the friend zone again! I stormed back into the living room and plopped onto the couch with my bags.
I sat there watching television till 10 minutes later when they finally left their steam hut. He had his arms around her, she giggled and he groped under luscious breasts. Instant jealousy arose in me, and then she finally realized the lonely loser was here. “I thought you would have been here at 8 or something.” Ai spoke.
“Or something, I have been here for almost half an hour.” I grunted and quickly stood up from the couch.
“Even though his looks changed, he still seems like a little bitch.” Her boyfriend †˜Daichi’ was getting face to face with me, snorting in my space. Something clicked and my body reacted with his remark, I †˜slightly’ knuckled him in the jaw. Daichi fell back and hit the floor pretty hard, bouncing his head on the wood. Ferocity left and in came the treading guilt, Ai was wide eyes and in shock.
Immediate reaction was to leave the hell that was about to be brought down. I bolted to the beach and cut into the remote area behind the rocks, without people. I took a deep breath, before getting a lecture from the very girl I love, following right behind me. “What the hell was that?” She shouted, grabbing ahold of my shoulder, turned me around towards her, and started digging into me with her fingers.
I stayed quiet, but looked into her lime green eyes.
“Why aren’t you talking to me, you have been acting different lately, and you changed your attire! What is up with you?” she questioned, her voice heightened and became alarming.
I didn’t know exactly what to say, she never yelled at me before.
“Answer me!” She broke into tears from the anger and silence, and started pummeling me on the chest.
Her tears trickled down her face and I went to wipe them, but she smacked my hand away. I snatched her hands and forced her back against one of the rocks. “I love you, I’m sorry that I’m not enough of a jack ass to match your tastes, but I love you anyway. I apologize for everything, but I’m not apologizing for punching that jerk. Your too much for him, and he doesn’t deserve you.” I stated, putting a tighter grip on her.
“B-but I… I can’t-.” I cut her off with a kiss, and it did not feel anything like the dreams, it felt way better. Our tongues collided with each other through her soft open mouth, and then I loosened my hands and held onto her waist. There was no resistance at all, and she had her hands at the back of my head. I was in nirvana with her, and then my dreams began to come true as the baby blue dress came undone and dropped to the ground.
We had nicks and burns from grinding against the sand, but it was amazing. After what happened, her trashy boyfriend became her ex. We walk hand in hand now, together, like how I always wanted. Even now I still worship her, its necessary unless I don’t want sex, which I do. “I love you.” The words that I hear every now and then from her, are finally mine.
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Any replies? Any opinions? Open to critiques, this was done way before the deadline and I already checked the word limit (under 1500). If it is just bs, then say so.
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Cinia Pacifica
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