[Summer Contest Entry 2012] My Slightly Sadistic Alice
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Decus was rather excited about today. Today was the day that all his wild dreams/delusions would come true. It was June 1st and Summer had began. His beloved Alice would definitely bless him with a swimsuit!
A blonde loli looking girl walked in, “Dumbo Decus, what the hell are you doing?” questioned the rather short twenty two year old.
Decus immediately got on all fours like a dog. “My dear Alice!” he exclaimed loudly in the rather quiet headquarters. “Please my Goddess come to the pool with me!”
Alice stared at him for a second, two seconds, three… then burst out laughing hysterically. “M-me go to the p-pool with y-you Dumbo Decus?!” she continued to laugh like a maniac. “I’d rather kiss Commander Brute!”
Decus grew jealous at this remark. He didn’t get sarcasm and took things his Alice said a bit… too literally. He took out his trusty sword and put his hands together in a prayer to pray for Commander Brute a painless death by him.
Alice noticed the silence and stared at him. Alice enjoyed the menace shown in his eyes, the craziness that danced like moths around a flame. However, Alice had grown accustomed to being beside Decus and knew that craziness signified death. Whenever Alice was being hit upon (usually by pedophiles due to her short stature), Decus would behead the guy she was with. It was nice to be protected but sometimes when the guy was handsome or rich, it was downright annoying.
Alice heaved a huge sigh, “Decus don’t even think about hurting the Commander, or I’ll get very angry. We wouldn’t want that would we?” Alice tried to give him her most menacing look that could scare most vanguard members away.
Decus however, is not your ordinary vanguard member. Decus saw Alice with pleading eyes asking him to not put a quick end to the rotten Commander, because she was just too damn nice. “Your wish is my command your goddess!’ Decus bowed in a nonconventional manner.
Alice rolled her eyes, “Whatever, Decus. So… how the hell did someone like you get tickets to the pool?” There was no attempt to hide the contempt held in her voice. A voice that sounded like someone talking to a maggot.
As always Decus could only hear heavenly, angelic voice of his goddess. “My dear Alice! I partook in a project to earn those tickets!” he sounded excited, probably because Alice seemed to take a 1% interest in him for the moment.
Alice looked suspicious. After all Decus was the type of idiot to buy anything (usually for her sake). “Where is the pool anyway?” Alice could confidently guess it was a cheap ass pool.
“My sweet Alice, you deserve nothing but the best! It is in a 5 star resort with every luxury possible!” Decus stated proudly.
Alice was dumbstruck “… What the hell did you do to earn those tickets???”
Decus shied away for a second. He didn’t say a word.
This only peaked Alice’s curiosity. “Answer Decus! Or I won’t even consider going!” This was a lie of course. Even Alice would reject a 5 star resort just to spite Decus. But the idiot will probably believe her. After all he was her Decus. Only hers.
Decus blushed profusely but answered obediently, “I… I won them off this site called Fakku.”
“I didn’t even know a dumbo like you could even use the internet. Go on. What kind of site is it?” Alice continued to stare him down like a mutt, and she enjoyed every second of it.
Decus was tomato red now, “U- uh… Fakku dot net is a uhhhhh pleasure site?”
“Decus answer me normally or I’ll tear that picture of me you keep.” Alice always kept to her threats and loved to see the fear in Decus’ eyes.
Decus finally told the truth, “O-okay my dear Alice! Fakku is the largest hentai site on the internet! I touch myself to it every day for pleasure! There are so many awesome uploaders that if I miss one day I yearn for it! Half way through in a new hentai I drift my mind to you my dear Alice! I got into hentai because of you Alice! I know you enjoy whipping and so I came to like S&M. Hentai gave the most S&M so I came to enjoy hentai. There was a contest there to see who had the most erotic gearings and I showed some of your stuff from your torture kit. Then we won!” Decus was now breathing hard and looking ashamed.
Alice had an angry look on her face, “The hell Dumbo Decus. You touch yourself to other people whipping?”
Decus was so ashamed he could die, but he could never lie to his beloved Alice, “I’m sorry Alice! But sometimes they really look just like you and… I lose control…”
CRACK! Alice slammed her whip onto the ground so hard it cracked the granite. She slowly walked up to Decus, lifted him up with her whip, and called to him with a dark aura enveloping her entire body, “Decus… I’m the only one that should be able to turn you on. I’m the only one that can whip you. I’m the only one you can touch yourself to. And I’m the one you pledged eternity to!”
Alice breathed in deep and exhaled, “Do we understand each other Decus?” Her eyes had turn red and there was a flicker of madness in them.
Decus kneeled before her and took her slender, white wrist. “I pledge to you my Alice. This won’t ever happen again, not even if they are cartoon characters. I love you and only you. Only your face will give me pleasure and only your whips will satisfy me.” He said it in a knightly tone, and the whole scene looked like a knight protecting their queen but… the sad realty was he was just being whipped (both literally and expression wise).
Afterwards, Alice returned to her true self. She “punished” Decus for being a bad boy. His screams were heard throughout the Vandguard, many believed his man part was ripped out, because his voice was rather high and squeaky for the next few weeks.
Although in the end they did make up. As much as a servant and his master could make up. They enjoyed their time at the pool, and Decus got his dream of seeing Alice in a swimsuit. Decus moved his laptop to Alice’s room and proved to Alice that even though he will never quit Fakku, he would stop masturbating to the stuff on there.
Alice decided to reward him. First she tied him down while he was only in his swimsuit, then she…
“Do you like it you pig?!” Alice screamed at him as she rubbed his crotch with her foot.
Decus was gasping, “A-Alice! Oh Alice!”
Alice continued, “Say it Decus! Or I’ll stop!”
Decus was close he knew. His voice barely audible, “Yes Alice… please…”
Alice smiled a sadistic smile, “Heh. Fine pig!” she spat on him.
This turned him on even more if that was possible. “Alice… that felt so good.” He felt his pants sliding off.
Alice’s smile was now splitting her face, “Did I say it was over?” she said as she pulled out a giant 12 inch dildo.
Decus opened his eyes wide and opened his mouth to scream, but it was soon covered by Alice’s bra.
Alice looked wild, hungry, and maniacal. She licked her lips in anticipation, drool slipping to the cold, hard floor. She was going to enjoy this, oh yes. She kissed the dildo and smiled down at whimpering Decus. She let out a cute moan and said “Hope you enjoy your punishment and present Decus… I love you… like a pet.” She plunged It straight into him.
A blonde loli looking girl walked in, “Dumbo Decus, what the hell are you doing?” questioned the rather short twenty two year old.
Decus immediately got on all fours like a dog. “My dear Alice!” he exclaimed loudly in the rather quiet headquarters. “Please my Goddess come to the pool with me!”
Alice stared at him for a second, two seconds, three… then burst out laughing hysterically. “M-me go to the p-pool with y-you Dumbo Decus?!” she continued to laugh like a maniac. “I’d rather kiss Commander Brute!”
Decus grew jealous at this remark. He didn’t get sarcasm and took things his Alice said a bit… too literally. He took out his trusty sword and put his hands together in a prayer to pray for Commander Brute a painless death by him.
Alice noticed the silence and stared at him. Alice enjoyed the menace shown in his eyes, the craziness that danced like moths around a flame. However, Alice had grown accustomed to being beside Decus and knew that craziness signified death. Whenever Alice was being hit upon (usually by pedophiles due to her short stature), Decus would behead the guy she was with. It was nice to be protected but sometimes when the guy was handsome or rich, it was downright annoying.
Alice heaved a huge sigh, “Decus don’t even think about hurting the Commander, or I’ll get very angry. We wouldn’t want that would we?” Alice tried to give him her most menacing look that could scare most vanguard members away.
Decus however, is not your ordinary vanguard member. Decus saw Alice with pleading eyes asking him to not put a quick end to the rotten Commander, because she was just too damn nice. “Your wish is my command your goddess!’ Decus bowed in a nonconventional manner.
Alice rolled her eyes, “Whatever, Decus. So… how the hell did someone like you get tickets to the pool?” There was no attempt to hide the contempt held in her voice. A voice that sounded like someone talking to a maggot.
As always Decus could only hear heavenly, angelic voice of his goddess. “My dear Alice! I partook in a project to earn those tickets!” he sounded excited, probably because Alice seemed to take a 1% interest in him for the moment.
Alice looked suspicious. After all Decus was the type of idiot to buy anything (usually for her sake). “Where is the pool anyway?” Alice could confidently guess it was a cheap ass pool.
“My sweet Alice, you deserve nothing but the best! It is in a 5 star resort with every luxury possible!” Decus stated proudly.
Alice was dumbstruck “… What the hell did you do to earn those tickets???”
Decus shied away for a second. He didn’t say a word.
This only peaked Alice’s curiosity. “Answer Decus! Or I won’t even consider going!” This was a lie of course. Even Alice would reject a 5 star resort just to spite Decus. But the idiot will probably believe her. After all he was her Decus. Only hers.
Decus blushed profusely but answered obediently, “I… I won them off this site called Fakku.”
“I didn’t even know a dumbo like you could even use the internet. Go on. What kind of site is it?” Alice continued to stare him down like a mutt, and she enjoyed every second of it.
Decus was tomato red now, “U- uh… Fakku dot net is a uhhhhh pleasure site?”
“Decus answer me normally or I’ll tear that picture of me you keep.” Alice always kept to her threats and loved to see the fear in Decus’ eyes.
Decus finally told the truth, “O-okay my dear Alice! Fakku is the largest hentai site on the internet! I touch myself to it every day for pleasure! There are so many awesome uploaders that if I miss one day I yearn for it! Half way through in a new hentai I drift my mind to you my dear Alice! I got into hentai because of you Alice! I know you enjoy whipping and so I came to like S&M. Hentai gave the most S&M so I came to enjoy hentai. There was a contest there to see who had the most erotic gearings and I showed some of your stuff from your torture kit. Then we won!” Decus was now breathing hard and looking ashamed.
Alice had an angry look on her face, “The hell Dumbo Decus. You touch yourself to other people whipping?”
Decus was so ashamed he could die, but he could never lie to his beloved Alice, “I’m sorry Alice! But sometimes they really look just like you and… I lose control…”
CRACK! Alice slammed her whip onto the ground so hard it cracked the granite. She slowly walked up to Decus, lifted him up with her whip, and called to him with a dark aura enveloping her entire body, “Decus… I’m the only one that should be able to turn you on. I’m the only one that can whip you. I’m the only one you can touch yourself to. And I’m the one you pledged eternity to!”
Alice breathed in deep and exhaled, “Do we understand each other Decus?” Her eyes had turn red and there was a flicker of madness in them.
Decus kneeled before her and took her slender, white wrist. “I pledge to you my Alice. This won’t ever happen again, not even if they are cartoon characters. I love you and only you. Only your face will give me pleasure and only your whips will satisfy me.” He said it in a knightly tone, and the whole scene looked like a knight protecting their queen but… the sad realty was he was just being whipped (both literally and expression wise).
Afterwards, Alice returned to her true self. She “punished” Decus for being a bad boy. His screams were heard throughout the Vandguard, many believed his man part was ripped out, because his voice was rather high and squeaky for the next few weeks.
Although in the end they did make up. As much as a servant and his master could make up. They enjoyed their time at the pool, and Decus got his dream of seeing Alice in a swimsuit. Decus moved his laptop to Alice’s room and proved to Alice that even though he will never quit Fakku, he would stop masturbating to the stuff on there.
Alice decided to reward him. First she tied him down while he was only in his swimsuit, then she…
“Do you like it you pig?!” Alice screamed at him as she rubbed his crotch with her foot.
Decus was gasping, “A-Alice! Oh Alice!”
Alice continued, “Say it Decus! Or I’ll stop!”
Decus was close he knew. His voice barely audible, “Yes Alice… please…”
Alice smiled a sadistic smile, “Heh. Fine pig!” she spat on him.
This turned him on even more if that was possible. “Alice… that felt so good.” He felt his pants sliding off.
Alice’s smile was now splitting her face, “Did I say it was over?” she said as she pulled out a giant 12 inch dildo.
Decus opened his eyes wide and opened his mouth to scream, but it was soon covered by Alice’s bra.
Alice looked wild, hungry, and maniacal. She licked her lips in anticipation, drool slipping to the cold, hard floor. She was going to enjoy this, oh yes. She kissed the dildo and smiled down at whimpering Decus. She let out a cute moan and said “Hope you enjoy your punishment and present Decus… I love you… like a pet.” She plunged It straight into him.
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Cinia Pacifica
Ojou-sama Writer
Pushing the fact that such a thing can actually be found on Fakku, or such stories are sometimes commonly read - this was definitely a good read. That said, I think this is one of the entries in which Fakku itself played a huge role in the story - which I was pleased to find in this entry.
Is it me or is it that Alice and I share similarities?
Is it me or is it that Alice and I share similarities?
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Slightly sadistic? That’s an understatement…
Good: I love the dialogue between your characters and also how just Fakku played into the story instead of being an obligatory reference. Hell, Decus and Alice’s antics had me laughing and even the ending was hilarious. As odd as it is, this is probably one of my favorite couples among all these stories so far.
Bad: You had a little wording error, but asides from that, my major gripe with this story was the lack of detail. I was very interested in the world that you set up, which seemed to be a swords and sorcery type world, but then you threw in Fakku, so I was confused. In fact, you just sort of glazed through what should be the climax of the story, being Alice finally wearing a swim suit, and as such, the falling action feels more like the rising action. On top of that, you talk about a Vanguard and Commander Brute, along with Decus’s habit of decapitating pedos, but I was left confused because I wanted more detail in this area.
Otherwise, this is probably one of the funniest stories I’ve read so far. And now…I find it interesting if I substitute Alice with Rise…
Good: I love the dialogue between your characters and also how just Fakku played into the story instead of being an obligatory reference. Hell, Decus and Alice’s antics had me laughing and even the ending was hilarious. As odd as it is, this is probably one of my favorite couples among all these stories so far.
Bad: You had a little wording error, but asides from that, my major gripe with this story was the lack of detail. I was very interested in the world that you set up, which seemed to be a swords and sorcery type world, but then you threw in Fakku, so I was confused. In fact, you just sort of glazed through what should be the climax of the story, being Alice finally wearing a swim suit, and as such, the falling action feels more like the rising action. On top of that, you talk about a Vanguard and Commander Brute, along with Decus’s habit of decapitating pedos, but I was left confused because I wanted more detail in this area.
Otherwise, this is probably one of the funniest stories I’ve read so far. And now…I find it interesting if I substitute Alice with Rise…