high_time wrote...
Well contrary towards the popular opinion I could somehow expected how the ending finally turns out lol, I don't know if I should feel bad because I laughed when it come towards the end hahaha, it was a good ending nonetheless and left out a good impact on me, it intrigues me how it sets this piece from the usual vanilla stories by the development~
Anyways I think the description and attention-to-detail given in this piece is simply wonderful thus making it an enjoyable read for all of us, the sleazy scenes made myself tingling with joy and the twist made me burst in laughter, I don't know if it's the right reaction though. Yeah, last but not least congratulations for winning the contest~
Definitely don't feel bad about laughing. I wrote this to get a reaction so if I made you laugh, I'm still happy. It's like most horror movies. Some people watch them to get scared and others watch them to laugh at the absurdity of it. Either way, it's all in good fun. :)
GiantBeardedFace wrote...
Now I see why people love this story; it's simply amazing. I loved the ending because, at first, it's vague with the characters and leaves it up to the imagination mostly, then you throw us a twist on the vanilla story and ended up with praying mantises mating. Anyways, I love it.
Thank you for the positive comment! Yes, I definitely let the imagination fill in the blanks. I had to be so careful with the wording so as not to give anything away right off the bat!