The Fall of Estancia

Okay, so, I can't actually post this story here. As it's a full, fifteen-chapter, novel that I recently completed. But it's the first written work that made me feel like I actually accomplished something, so I'm trying to get as much outside input as possible. After reading the rules again, it's still unclear (to me, personally) as to whether or not this would be considered as linking to my site/product and normally I'd just not do it if it were unclear. But again, mitigating circumstances. I freely and willingly ignore my own hesitation and accept any punishment and/or consequences that come as a result of this action.

Without further ado, bush-beating, or hemming and hawing, I give you "The Fall of Estancia".

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