Trolls amuse me. Especially retarded ones. Looking on the bright side, he did cause more comments(like this one) in your thread. ...and hell, I'm having difficulty to get responses in my story *bleh~*.
On a side note, I found your story so sweet that I had to take insulin pills before I could collapse into a diabetic coma. No offence, but I winced from the utter sweetness of the story.
I-it's n-not like I'm commenting cause I like you or anything!
LOL
I was joking when I said that. I'm healthy, maybe a tad bit too healthy.
Watch out for your grammar mistakes.
For anyone wondering, Rise-chan has edited her story. It was not for the sake of the contest, but because now that the contest is coming to a close, she wanted to expand upon the story she has created.