2nd Lip

I get the feeling that this isn't going to end well...

I said it before and I’ll say it again, I don’t trust that guy.

That cover picture of Hana has gotta be the cutest but hottest picture in existence.

definitely a new favorite of mine. i share so much in common with hana-chan, aaaa!

Hamao yay! Head pushing, booo! This guy is going to turn out to be a pos, pretty sure...

I THINK EVERYTHING WILL TURN OUT JUST FINE.

I need a new sarcasm font.

Wait! Is this that creepy blonde guy?! Dude, look at her reactions... where is this going? I'm scared.

I tend to concur ... something smells fishy about all this, and by that, I don't mean the odors associated with sexual fluids.

Ooh, a sequel to 1st love? Makes me wonder what the sequel to this would be named...
She's such a nice girl though, studying how to please him.
That ending though. I'm...not entirely sure what they might be implying with that last bit. I mean her getting naughtier is fine and all, but...Well, I dunno. I'm also wondering if the guy is actually up to something.

Considering the type of stories Hamao writes, i doubt the guy is that evil. He probably just wants a perverted girlfriend to fulfill his fantasies. And who knows, maybe more than just pleasure can be obtained in the end. It's the vibe he gives me. This story is following some patterns of some shoujo manga, where a player takes interest on the plain girl. And while he truly does have feelings for the girl, she is just too fun to tease, also the added plus of making an innocent girl take the naughty side is a huge turn on, something player hasnt really experiences, since he used to date girls similar to him. Its all a new experience.

You know, if I weren’t able to read this story either I would have rioted...

Another winner from Hamao!

This is the second chapter from "1st Love".