I must say, I loved each new person in this chapter. They are interestingly unique and have personality and depth. It will be very interesting to see how the next chapter develops, and I loved the chapter title page; that scene was beautifully sketched! Keep at it, keep practicing and working hard! You're getting better!
Come to think of it, this marks 10 chapters in, huh. That's great.
Played the villian though...In a way, rather than him buying you lunch, maybe it should be the other way around, haha.
Not sure if he was meant as some roundabout fourth wall breaking character or just that kind of eccentric.
Faster sequel releases or we riot *throws a chair*