*finishes drawing something* Done *stands up runs through wall overturns car jumps on top* cough* holds up sign* "people of the fakku comunity we will riot until our demands are met" Â WHAT DO WE WANT
I love your art. And when Succuna looks up at us with just one eye showing through her bangs, she's adorable. (In fact, she might be one of the most lovable Hentai girls ever.) BUT...I'm not a fan of the way your male characters turn into psycho jerks partway through. Like with any other genre, I'm interested in stuff where I can relate to the antagonist. And I doubt anyone can relate to such a Jekyll and Hyde persona. I mean, it's one thing to get a bit aggressive in pleasuring her, but it's very different for someone who seems to be a nice guy to suddenly not care how she feels...
It's amazing to see how much this artist has improved in his second release. He's addressed the major issues he had before, and he keeps on writing good stories. This guy will go far if he continues on this trajectory.
So, a *clears throat* "supplementary exam" for a succubus means (if we take Succuna's previous visit as the example) is to get whammed & banged almost to the point of "death by snu-snu".
Ah yes, the lovely gap between the fact that she's a succubus, and yet she's inexperienced...Nice.
"Can I ask you to be gentle with me"? Ahh...Man, when she asks so nicely like that, surely nobody can say no.
So he helped her out by helping her build up her confidence, and she also helped him out...With his self esteem issues, or rather his complex about his small dick, and he 'brought countless women to their knees'. Problem is, once you taste some of that succubus goodness, normal women just can't cut it.
Great ending though...Ah, yes, a little help with supplementary...exams. I'm sure he'd be willing to help...and continue helping, even more. Any chance we get to see him 'help' them? Maybe in a sequel?
I won't accept it being oneshot!!
 WHAT DO WE WANT
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