Could have used an extra page or two so that they weren't having a full on conversation during sex and maybe flesh out the misunderstanding a bit more (she never said why she wanted to talk to him) but all said it was pretty good. I feel like behind the scenes issues caused the author to condense the story.
Awwwww, this was really nice to read. Exactly the kind of vanilla reunion story I needed. And a good reminder to communicate clearly with your loved ones
kinda sad actually. especially since i know that guys can be whiny enough to insta-block someone.
nice that the story got a happy ending, but would prefer if not all of them ended with things getting resolved only years later.
So it turns out that, due to "a failure to communicate clearly", our teenage couple separated from each other. At least when they happened to find each other again, the fire, passion, etc., is still there.
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