Page 2, bottom left box should say "she and her brother" instead of "her and her brother". You'd think a professional site would actually know how to use proper grammar.
Great title. You know, I'm sure that pudding just tastes of the finest, sweetest Vanilla...Because that's what I feel from this release!
Still, he seems to have a great relationship with his pal, and now that he's going out with his little sister, perhaps the day they become true brothers isn't far off. I mean, she basically proposed to him by that end too, so that's nice.
It was a really nice story. She just kept pushing, asking, not giving up with wanting to be more intimate with him until he finally gave in.