Ah...Poor guy got beat up by her dad when he found out, huh. It might have messed up his life, but I think it messed hers up a little more, considering she started to just sleep around to fill the void of him not being around anymore? Well, I suppose in that sense, they go well together. "Both of us don't have a place to call home", huh. Well, I guess their 'home' now would be next to each other. I must say though, I found the moment when she seemed so happy that he finally said he'd get her pregnant (As well as her reaction afterwards when asking him to take responsibility) to be genuinely heartwarming. The road to reach this point may have been rather...stormy, and full of misadventure, so to speak, but after 4 long years, she finally gets to hear him say what she always wanted him to. This had a great ending, too. Yeah, what happened in the past may have screwed their lives up, but really, it's better to look towards a brighter future that hopefully, they'll be able to share together. This was definitely a great release full of emotion and one that very much deserves to be read.
Uh, ... I gotta think long and hard (pardon the pun) whether this qualifies as 'Vanilla' IMHO. Sure, when things got intense, artist inserted heart symbols inside the (a-hem) dialogue, but in light of the progression of events ... I say "It Ain't Necesarily So."
So first their love ruined his life, then completed it.
From context, I'm gathering the dad pressed charges or something and the guy had a record.
Anyhow, I can't think of any other animal species with love this convoluted, sure there are some that eat their lover after consummation, but at least that's simple (and the guy's suffering is quick).
Why did she have to turn into a whore?
Wouldn't it have been fine if she just had some heavy emotional baggage?
The gangbangs and whoring just ruined any nice feelings this story was trying to give off.
Guilt and what not You are not seeing what she went through to get into that, you are falling into what she said by hating her.
Her intention was to make it sound as bad as it could, she made sure she dragged what he thought of her into the ground.
Well, I suppose in that sense, they go well together. "Both of us don't have a place to call home", huh. Well, I guess their 'home' now would be next to each other.
I must say though, I found the moment when she seemed so happy that he finally said he'd get her pregnant (As well as her reaction afterwards when asking him to take responsibility) to be genuinely heartwarming. The road to reach this point may have been rather...stormy, and full of misadventure, so to speak, but after 4 long years, she finally gets to hear him say what she always wanted him to.
This had a great ending, too. Yeah, what happened in the past may have screwed their lives up, but really, it's better to look towards a brighter future that hopefully, they'll be able to share together.
This was definitely a great release full of emotion and one that very much deserves to be read.
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