Crimson Whisper Ch.2
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The only one more interesting than his girlfriend is the hot spring beauty in the next room.
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1 year ago
Huh. Wonder if this one is ever going to get finished?
Last Modified Sun Aug 13, 2023, 12:51 pm
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
Well, as to be expected, at least Haru got some from Momiji. Of course, she's doing it out of curiosity and/or variety. Gin, unfortunately for Haru, will be all about the conquest. I definitely expect Shizuku to tell Haru to take a hike pretty soon.
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2 years ago
In the first chapter, Haru leaves Shizuku feeling sexually frustrated while she
can still hear Momiji enjoying a bout of prolonged sex with Gin. That's a neat
bit of foreshadowing because, at that moment (right after Haru fizzles out on
her), Shizuku is clearly thinking about how good it would feel to have sex with
a real stud like Gin.
So I can practically guarantee you Gin won't have to resort to any
dirty tricks, in order to seduce Shizuku. She's ripe for the taking.
can still hear Momiji enjoying a bout of prolonged sex with Gin. That's a neat
bit of foreshadowing because, at that moment (right after Haru fizzles out on
her), Shizuku is clearly thinking about how good it would feel to have sex with
a real stud like Gin.
So I can practically guarantee you Gin won't have to resort to any
dirty tricks, in order to seduce Shizuku. She's ripe for the taking.
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5
2 years ago
If Shizuku ultimately dumps Haru,
this series becomes a netori tale.
this series becomes a netori tale.
Last Modified Tue Feb 1, 2022, 12:55 pm
5
2 years ago
Actually, it's not unusual to become lightheaded in a steamy environment
(especially after drinking booze), so I don't think Gin & Momiji used drugs
on Haru. Note that Momiji seems to be genuinely surprised when Haru
passes out (page 8, panel 5).
(especially after drinking booze), so I don't think Gin & Momiji used drugs
on Haru. Note that Momiji seems to be genuinely surprised when Haru
passes out (page 8, panel 5).
Last Modified Tue Feb 1, 2022, 12:19 pm
4
2 years ago
I tend to agree with you, because (in the previous chapter) quick-
shot Haru left Shizuku feeling deeply unsatisfied (page 15, panel 6),
and (ominously) musing about the way Momiji was enjoying a great
prolonged fuck with the vigorous Gin.
Now, at the end of this chapter, Shizuku is obviously enjoying Gin's
big dick & stamina, with no reservations at all, as opposed to Haru's
high-minded hesitancy with Momiji.
So, as he listens to Shizuku's enthusiastic moans, Haru realizes
she gave herself to another (more virile) man with no hesitation,
which must really sting, since Haru tried to resist Momiji, out of
consideration for Shizuku. That's where the netorare element
comes in.
(page 23, panel 5, and page 24, panel 5)
@gammenon:
When I become engrossed in a chapter, I tend to re-write
my long comments over and over again, until I'm satisfied.
shot Haru left Shizuku feeling deeply unsatisfied (page 15, panel 6),
and (ominously) musing about the way Momiji was enjoying a great
prolonged fuck with the vigorous Gin.
Now, at the end of this chapter, Shizuku is obviously enjoying Gin's
big dick & stamina, with no reservations at all, as opposed to Haru's
high-minded hesitancy with Momiji.
So, as he listens to Shizuku's enthusiastic moans, Haru realizes
she gave herself to another (more virile) man with no hesitation,
which must really sting, since Haru tried to resist Momiji, out of
consideration for Shizuku. That's where the netorare element
comes in.
(page 23, panel 5, and page 24, panel 5)
@gammenon:
When I become engrossed in a chapter, I tend to re-write
my long comments over and over again, until I'm satisfied.
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
And one last thing about this title...If Shizuku gets swept off her feet by Gin, even if he just goes commando in front of her and starts her off with her thinking "Oh, wow...He has such a hot body and look at the size of his...thing. Hmmm..." and goes willingly, I'll actually find that pretty hot (for what that's worth). If he forces, drugs, rapes, and mindbends her all the way, that'll be a complete turn-off.
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
I commented about the additions/edits to your post(s) bc I ran into a couple of instances last night when you were obsoleting what I was about to write so after a while, I wanted to let you know that what I posted or about to post was based on what I knew you wrote at that moment in time, whether it was parroting what you wrote later (if that makes sense lol) or whatever.
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2 years ago
@MisterMiser1967:
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too. Specifically,
I want to see how much resistance Shizuku offers Gin.
The less resistance, the stronger the netorare element.
I'm betting that, being sexually frustrated (and wanting to make
the most of her hot spring vacation), Shizuku gives in quickly---
especially if she hears Momiji fucking Haru next door (and Gin
will make sure she hears everything).
I'm looking forward to the next chapter, too. Specifically,
I want to see how much resistance Shizuku offers Gin.
The less resistance, the stronger the netorare element.
I'm betting that, being sexually frustrated (and wanting to make
the most of her hot spring vacation), Shizuku gives in quickly---
especially if she hears Momiji fucking Haru next door (and Gin
will make sure she hears everything).
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
Ok, I see you add some commentary to the post above. Well, I assume Chapter 3 will show what happened in the other room.
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
Well, I can't tell that Gin is sexually superior to Haru. I mean yeah, I can assume that because of the theme but for sure? Not yet. Anyways, I think Haru's hesitation is not from wimpiness but from wanting to be committed to Shizuku. Whether Momiji knows that or not, I don't think she cares. Also, considering Arakure's previous works, I think Gin and Momiji are even bigger creeps than I thought bc it definitely looks like something was in the beer that Haru drank. I mean, who passes out while leaving a bath? [Edit: I was playing Devil's advocate before but It's definitely expected that Gin will be superior sexually to Haru at this stage so the question is what will he do when he sees Gin rocking Shizuku's world. Will he get pissed? Will he whimper and cry in shock? Will that beast inside him get released and he ravages Momiji? We'll see...]
Last Modified Wed Apr 13, 2022, 6:07 pm
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2 years ago
While I'm not neccessarily looking forward to the netorare element coming up (probably), I've gotta admit I'm really looking forward to the Shizuki/Gin encounter aspect of next chapter. Because that part is probably going to be as hot as freaking hell.
Last Modified Tue Feb 1, 2022, 2:12 am
3
2 years ago
And poor Haru's next girlfriend will be forever perplexed as to why he'll never take her to the hot springs!
3
2 years ago
@gammenon:
Class reunions, especially, seem to provide a fertile breeding ground
for infidelity. Sometimes they turn into full-blown adulterous orgies
(which are incredibly hot).
Class reunions, especially, seem to provide a fertile breeding ground
for infidelity. Sometimes they turn into full-blown adulterous orgies
(which are incredibly hot).
Last Modified Mon Feb 7, 2022, 11:49 pm
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gammenon
Story Junkie
2 years ago
LOL, I hope he'll also know about massage parlors...and class reunions...and her using public transportation all by herself...Actually, this might turn him into a possessive jerk, not that I could blame him. Two years thrown into the waste paper basket has gotta sting.
This chapter is part of Crimson Whisper.
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From how they were acting it doesn't really feel like Momiji and Gin are maliciously trying to tear Masaharu and Shizuku apart, kinda feels like they just like sleeping around and this is some kind of game for them. Hopefully this just ends with the swinging tag or a one time thing and not anything worse.
Knowing Arakure, I get a feeling we know where this is going to go.
-I feel ya @Eorzat, that's definitely worst case scenario.
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Haru is seduced by the aggressive Momiji, without agreeing
to swap Shizuku in return. So he's naturally dismayed when
he realizes a swap has occurred. Worse, Shizuku seems to
be having a really good time with Gin---a much better time
than she ever had with Haru. That's likely to spoil his good
time with Momiji.
Last Modified Thu Jul 14, 2022, 5:26 am
A lot of Fakku fans absolutely hate the wayward wife or girlfriend
trope, but I really enjoy cheating chapters, so my comments tend
to get downvoted to Hell (which is silly and childish).
Last Modified Thu Feb 10, 2022, 5:21 am
Apparently, this chapter is REALLY pissing some people off considering the prodigious amounts of downvotes we're getting for daring to even have a discussion about it. LOL
Last Modified Tue Feb 1, 2022, 1:34 pm
I suspect that some of those who hate cheating chapters are in fact
being "triggered," because the trope reminds them of an experience
they had with a woman who casually enjoyed a little sexual variety.
Last Modified Tue Feb 1, 2022, 6:47 pm