Rather than the color pages at the beginning... I'd rather had nicer line art through the whole
thing.
But that being said, this was a very stimulating read...
Yooooo this was sweet my bois. Damn, she is hella cute. I like that she was thinking ahead, makes you wonder how long she had a crush on him.. Glad he realized it!
Devilish temptation of the best kind, the Vanilla kind!
Hmm, so she kept provoking him in order to get him to make a move, eh? I'd say it worked out quite well!