...Well hey, that's what happens when you provoke a protagonist too much, no matter how much you ask him to stop, he probably won't.
That ending, though? ...Really makes me want a sequel of some sort.
While rereading the story I realized that two things:
1. You are right
2. The foot on top of page three is drawn the wrong way (drawn like a right foot while beeing the left one)
LOL. That's usually the sort of thing that I prefer that folks _don't_ point out, since then it's hard not to notice it, and it's a _fantastic_ image otherwise. Hopefully, it gets fixed at some point even if it's only in the tankouban version (which hopefully we get, but that's far from a guarantee).
I sure wouldn't mind being able to get all of Chobipero's tankouban releases though. :)