Dual Swap - Part 2

Yeah but he didn't know in the beginning.

I feel bad for the hubby and the twins. The bull better watch his back, though. I think no-one is safe if they rub evil twin the wrong way. There's room for some awesome sequel stuff here.

lol at the downvote. Here's an uptick and I'll say your post is a popular and natural sentiment.

It is common to project one self into at least one character, usually the protagonist, in a story. Stephen King said something along the lines of liking all of his characters and that there's a piece of him in all of them. Nice to know it's not the bull that's modelled after Dramus, though.

The sex is pretty hot but even though I can sometimes overlook the dialog in a NTR, I can't here. I definitely can't over look Takashi's expressions thru out the second part of the story. It turned into not primarily hot sex but the glorification of extreme, extreme bullying.

If I was the hubby, I'd be the one in jail...for a very, very, very long time. For so long, in fact, I'd die there bc chances are I probably couldn't outlast consecutive triple life sentences.

Nope, legally speaking the hubby might chew ex-wifey a new one in court, though.

Well, the wife might get off for being coerced. The bull really rapes her into submission. Hits quite hard, this one.

Yeah, this is one of those:

I’m a dark room with the musky scent of sex in the air, 3 figures lie in a tangled mess sheets rumpled and covers tossed on the floor. Silently the door opens and a figure walks in and just as quietly shuts the door. If one was to look into the eyes of the figure, they would find cold dead eyes as if there was no soul to be found. Silently the figure walks towards the sleeping trio, a cold malicious aura radiating off of it. The figure taps the male sleeping figure head with the end of the illegally purchased gun he just acquired. “Hey…wake up…There’s something I would like to discuss with you three….Have you ever seen the movie Seven?”

You and I should form the Tsukushi Fan Club.

(Props to Dramus for turning a yandere hate-fuck
into a funny vanilla chapter, which is quite a stunt!)

This is one NTR chapter
that's playing for keeps.

It’s not as simple as just “kill him.” What about that massive body to dispose of? What about Reo who’s pretty psycho in her own right? Is Takashi gonna kill her too if she attacks him after he kills her BF? Does Takashi just transform into a murder machine? Takashi is not a shounen protagonist, he’s an NTR protagonist, which makes him a wimp.

"All of his works... EXCEPT his only vanilla work."

That's very disappointing, because I love Tsukushi, the big, cheerful
yandere gal who appears in the sole vanilla chapter, Exhausting Girl.
The Fakku community seems to share my opinion, since that chapter
has far more "favorite" votes (1591) than any other Dramus story.

One last thing about the NTR Noir description…I just thought of something about what you wrote about the author's notes about there being an Episode 3 a couple levels below your first comment. I was joking about Episode 3 possibly being about Motoya screwing Takashi’s mom and wanting to claim himself as Takashi’s new father but you want to know what I think is gonna happen? These three are going to freeload at the house or apartment (Mio’s now freeloading too since she effectively cut the tie with Takashi), feast off what he provides, and continue to rub the affair (or what was the affair) in his face. It’ll be something like he’ll go into the kitchen before work to get breakfast and see Mio getting bent over a counter by Motoya casually like they’re having tea and then get further ridiculed by Reo as she stands off to the side.

I know you kid sometimes about your tag suggestions, but you legitimately got something here. Yeah, for example...There's a doujin by Cuck Manga J&W called "Is Sex All You Can Think About?" which is a NTR. I will say it barely qualifies as a NTR but it still has the tag. Then you have the shock value you have here. If somebody thinks both titles have the same emotional gravity, I do not know what to tell them. But....Dramus did put that disclaimer on the first page, I applaud that move. Anyone best take him seriously when he does that for now on. [Addition note: I know he did put a disclaimer(s) for the Monopolize series but that series was lightyears tamer than this.]

I wouldn't say it's hardcore NTR, it's pretty much just the posterchild for NTR. Guy watches girlfriend get stolen right in front of him.