At this point in the story, she's not being forced. The line about being raped is past tense and in this story she's not being forced to have sex with these dudes. She's a willing participant.
I feel like Shindol raised the bar on this kind of thing.
Now, I'm no vanilla-only type. My first lover saw to that, and also inspired a love of good vanilla (go figure). To be clear, I don't object to the general story line. I'm not talking about how 'far' it goes into depravity.
My objection is the plot doesn't help build the erotic feeling.
Now, some folks indeed don't need a plot with their porn, but if I want just posing-- I'll download an image set or the like. If you've got some semblance of story going, though... do it well. Entice me into the fantasy.
Oddly enough, a fakku favourite also expresses something of this-- in the second of Michiking's Kani Magazine Bullpen series (https://www.fakku.net/hentai/rakshasi-editor-satou-san-english/) Satou chides Sou-kun for not building up the fantasy of the story he's submitting well. It actually offers this advice while building Satou's seduction of Sou rather well.
This has an okay opening, but I don't feel like that last scene is earned. The story doesn't back up what erotic sense there is to the art-- and there is some nice art here. GHoE is right below, that's some nice lingerie there, Komezawa-sensei.
But it feels like a half made package, a crescendo that isn't earned.
(thus concludes part I forgot in the occasional series, Ed over thinks porn. Next, I'll explain how Homunculus' Bloom by the Sea is really a metaphor for [is clubbed] wacky lemon kiwi goodbye friends! [falls over])
Well that was something I read. Not really sure how I felt about that. Hopefully those seniors don't come back for a while. Probably the best ending this story could have had considering...
Mm. You want a well pulled off bit of bittersweet in a similar vein, try Uchiuchi Keyaki (https://www.fakku.net/artists/uchiuchi-keyaki), in particular Paradise Lost (https://www.fakku.net/hentai/paradise-lost-english-1489614520).
Well...That's quite the title.
It was...An interesting release, I suppose. Like, the group tag kind of tells you all you need to know, but still...I dunno, kinda mixed feelings about this one.
Like, the guy was kinda roped in by sheer coincidence, and by the end she's just kind of...broken? in a way, and he takes advantage of that.
I feel things could have gone very differently, kind of? If he had just done something to try and save her, or if he had found out earlier, or something. But I guess it may have already been too late?