...Alas, not much has changed by that ending. But hey, a small step forward is at least some progress, right?
Maybe eventually they'll be able to go further into their relationship. And if it does, I'd love to see it.
Well, like Genryuusai said, nothing changed. So what's the point of even making a story and why not just skip directly to the sex ? It's just my opinion but if there is something that most hentai lacks is a good story, or at least a solid base to make one. As i appear to mature i tend to enjoy story as much as the sex and we only see Sex. It doesn't have to be a Shakespeare scene, just something that makes a little sense. Like Angraecum by Otsuka Kotora (Oh gosh if the author makes a book on FAKKU i'll fucking buy it) or Gimme a hug by Aoki Kanji.
I bring that up now because i think we could have so much more than just tits and ass on paper. Specially since it's on paper you can write or draw anything to make something great.
I was thinking how pathetic it is that the guy was settling for non-mutuality in their relationship, but I was glad he at least commandeered control during the sex scene, and fucked the shit out of her. However, my mouth opened in awe at either her audacity or stupidity when she was like "do you want someone to steal me away?" I was like: do youwanthim (talk about lame dialogue)? Cuz that's what it's going to come down to anyway, and she doesn't really know...because all she knows is his dick--which she could get one of those pretty much anywhere (the guy is lame/stupid for accepting that). Which is what made me laugh when she finally agreed to be his girlfriend, because it was like: "what if they go out on their date, and find out they're just not into each other as persons? Or that they actually don't like each other? Problems with doing things backwards...she was not-so-secretly desperate to have him ravage her in order to feel that overwhelming pleasure, to feel desired, and be irresistible...but none of that could ever apply to her, as he doesn't know her. It was just basic lust like a basic plot; purely ego-driven jealousy, wanting to be special--like I wanted this story to be special; and the idea of having something more--that without, you have just sex...yeah. Which you can get anywhere.
So yeah, to get to the ending and see that nothing changed at all did piss me off, because I had my hopes up for something more, like the guy did (and I would've settled for anything more dynamic). If I were him, I'd dump her ass for ultimately being as uninteresting and a letdown as the squandering of the potential power of a plot being underused in a story...or it barely-to-not existing at all.