Ohh man, I slept on this one. This is some good stuff.
You gotta maintain the tension in these kinds of stories. If you let the rubber band snap too early it doesn’t have enough build-up. If you go too hard out of the gate you risk losing a reader on page 2. This is perfectly paced hentai. Nice work!
This chapter is why I love osananajimi and vanilla so much lol.
Hot AND wholesome!
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