I do like that see-through tunic from page one, very nice.
"My eyes are always intense, my hair is short, my skin's so dark"?
...Sounds just about perfect to me, I don't see why she's complaining?
At least he seems to get it, and he also seems to appreciate it so good on him.
I like it when people call their partner "beloved". That's really classy...
By the way: Is there a reason why this story is the only one by the author who didn't get a heart between "love" and the second word?
Well there a rare sight