Mistaken Onee-chan Connect

I guess this cheating right? She's technically got boyfriend who she ran away from and then she's falling for the roommate at the end there.

This was some good vanilla.
Again.

Yeah, she's a dumbass. This feels like vanilla but I don't think this is gonna end well.

I need a sequel where they actually end up together. Hopefully something along that vanilla line

I'm not really sure if this is Vanilla or not, I mean the story is cute, but let's keep in mind that she ran away from her real boyfriend and then got into a "relationship with his roomate". The taste is really bad when we realize that Akira never confesses and maybe he felt bad when they were in bed, suddenly he was silent until the end since Yuki was the only one talking. Then, he kissed her and no reaction at all when it comes to confess.

From another perspective, on page 10, Yuki said that she feels like she already ruined everything, so if we think about it... Yuki thinks that her real boyfriend doesn't want anything to do with her anymore so she gives everything for Akira.

That said, I'd give this a 10 out of 10, but hear me out...

The doujinshi in general is quite good, I like the character design (female only), the perspectives, proportions, 3D spaces, anatomy and facial expressions.

However, I think the flow of the story broke on pages 7 and 8, the flow was completely cut off there, I think we could have had a slightly smoother transition from page 7 to page 8. Something that I would have done is to do a nice seduction scene right there, at the dining room table, clarifying that Yuki will no longer go out with her boyfriend because of what happened and then having Akira confess his feelings to Yuki, making it clear that he is okay with waiting as long as needed until she gives him a chance to start dating and going all out (then they both proceed to slowly fall in love with each other (kissing, hugging, cuddling, and playing softly) until they can't hold back anymore.

So I'll give it a 10 because I know the amount of effort behind this, every detail here was done by hand and I have a lot of respect for the Kojins, I hope to become one of them myself. So I'm pretty sure Sawatashi Yun will bring some amazing releases and even better, FULL VANILLA STUFF, hopefully without any cheating involved.

I really dig how awkward this was! In a really realistic, wholesome way. She can’t be honest with herself… too cute!

Another vanilla+cheating combo

This needs a sequel!

Ok this was beyond wholesome, like sweet enough to make your teeth hurt lol. Loved the story

MC scored what some might call a Wombo Combo - got to stay in a shared house and the other occupant is a FMC who, as it turned out, qualifies as a Sexy Onee-san.

That Lucky Bastard ... GRR!

Don’t you love it when girls decide they need to take care of you to keep you from masturbating?