As awkward as that ending was, that was an interesting play on expectations. It went from "obviously the 'crush' is osananajimi-bro" to "wait... is it seriously not osananajimi-bro?" to "nah, he's the osananajimi-side-hoe."
Upon re-reading this, I'm starting to doubt that there actually IS a guy named Yamaguchi for Mashiro to have a crush on. From the beginning, Mashiro was defined as someone who was "constantly alone" with few friends (aside from the protag) and possessed a "vivid imagination". Considering that we never see Yamaguchi, and that Mashiro seemed unable to get intimate with him, it's very possible that Mashiro's "crush" was an entirely imaginary character, and thus used our protag as a physical stand-in for a person who didn't exist. It's weird, but Mashiro's defining trait was the fact that she's weird, so it kinda works.
I liked that part on page 6 where she looked past him and saw the photos of both of them. That seemed to be some kind of reassurance for her that she could trust him, or maybe even a reminder of her own hidden feelings for him.
Also, perfect setup for sequel, for her to realize her feelings and for him to confess to her. Meanwhile we see her BF seduced by a jealous childhood friend. Everyone wins!
Sperm brain...
Well, I do think it would be rough though. The innocent 'little sister' who has been with you for so long suddenly comes to you for advice about another guy.
And he kind of admits to himself and apologises mentally for being such a bad brother when he kind of...coerced her into sex.
I feel like the brother actually kind of likes her but either he doesn't notice or ignores it, hiding it behind 'helping' her. I mean, he was bothered when she called out the name of the other guy...
That ending though. And, she has a BF now, but will still only have sex with her brother?
It'd be so much simpler if they both just went out with each other, but oh well. These kinds of releases with rather...intricate relationships are quite interesting to read.
This would’ve been perfect for me if her crush was the main guy. I thought that’s where it would go since the main guy is her only friend and in one panel she was looking at the pictures of them. Riperoni for the bf though. Hopefully the sequel will be sweet vanilla
I think there's a edit error on page 4 last pannel on left I think it says "especially recently"?
And while we don't really see, maybe cheating tag? (I was hoping the entire chapter for the boy she likes to be the Onii-chan, feelsbadman)
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