Every time a stories starts right with the banging I remember the editor of the Mitiking series criticizing her artist/boyfriend for starting a story without a build-up...
I am always appreciative of the way Itouei emphasizes the fleshy aspects of their female characters through their art and the action in the story. There is this squishy, succulent appeal to the various parts of their bodies, like their breasts, butt, and thighs.
On a related note, I highly approve of this story.
Page 5 - Ayaka imposes (a-hem) "punishment" on Yuuma ..... THIS ... IS ... PUNISHMENT? That aside, I APPROVE of the Vanilla content of this story, even if mixed together with rather 'pervy' side-ingredients.
Great ending.
A future together with her beloved boyfriend/Husband to be. Marriage/Proposal endings are always nice, and I like how it's all just implied with that one ring around her neck...Which will one day go on her ring finger, and how nice it would be if we could see the ceremony in future as well.