The scene where the male MC confessing his love for his senpai whom she sees as his better, yet she flashes back to her shortcomings as a swimmer, wondering if his admiration for her is deserved? It shows his depth in how Survival Knife writes his characters in this story!
It's the small scenes he adds that really make his works stand out. I appreciate that! (๑†¢Ì€ã…‚†¢Ì)Ùˆ
That's a nice title.
The awkwardness of the initial contact and confession really gives me the impression of their 'first love', like they've never done this kind of thing before. I like it, feels quite realistic.
Normally I'd think you have a date first then maybe kiss before sex, so the order of things may have been reversed a little...But hey, it's Hentai so maybe it's more natural this way. Besides, holding hands and going on a date is not a one time thing after all, so they can do it as much as they want from now on, surely.
Couldn't have said it better myself. Cliche it may be, the warm fuzzy's from simple stories like this
are the reason they keep being made; and I wholeheartedly approve!
Survival Knife-sensei proved indisputably that he (or she) can produce Vanilla-laden works just as well as Homunculus, Napata, Key and others who are already established in the Parthenon of Vanilla Gods.
It's the small scenes he adds that really make his works stand out. I appreciate that! (๑†¢Ì€ã…‚†¢Ì)Ùˆ