Perhaps it's just me that it seemed a little bit rushed where, after kissing Naruse, Majima "put the pedal to the metal" and went for the 'sexy time', but at least it seemed to work out fine in the end, as Naruse revealed she liked him also.
Sometimes, one just accepts what the artist gives to us, and then let Life go on.
Yeah, it was great after it got going, but that was a _really_ rocky start. It was clear that she liked him, but his reaction seemed to be pretty much like he'd just remembered that she was a girl, so he decided to have sex with her now that the girl he wanted was unavailable. So, not only did he go after her just because the girl he actually wanted wasn't available, it's like he hadn't even been aware that she was a girl before that. But I guess that it works out for her in the end, and past that nonsense, it was really sexy.
The two first pages that usually set up the relationship of the main characters was more spent showing how this story tied to another one written years ago. That threw the rest of the pacing off.
However, the creator needs to get paid to make a living. This story probably would more time than it's worth to fix, or there is another project more meaningful or valuable the author wants to work on.
Ah yes, the advantage of pure love is the sweet Vanilla that it brings us!
Also Hinasaki Yo makes some great Vanilla releases.
Also, the couple from one of the previous releases 'Playing hard to get' also appears here! Nice to see some continuity.
Also, man, why would he pine for another girl when the perfect one was right beside him the whole time? But well, at least now he gets it.